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Reviewer: Tomobe03 (talk · contribs) 22:33, 22 May 2013 (UTC) I'll review this article.--Tomobe03 (talk) 22:33, 22 May 2013 (UTC)
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- No duplicate links - actually there was one (WWII) but I removed it myself (no action required)
- External links check out (no action required)
- There's definitely something missing in
After brief repairs at port in New York City, New York and refresher training at Guantanamo Bay Naval Base.
- Fixed. —Ed!(talk) 20:48, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
... she visits to the Azores ...
seems odd to me. I may be wrong, but perhaps "visited Azores" would be better.- Fixed. —Ed!(talk) 20:48, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
- There's also probably something missing in
At the outbreak of the attacked Pearl Harbor by the Empire of Japan that morning ...
- There are several structures like
...arrived at Philadelphia 13 September.
Is it possible to omit "on" before date here? I was under an impression it is not, but then again I'm not a native speaker of English, so I cannot be that sure.- You're right. Fixed. —Ed!(talk) 20:48, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
I made a few copyedits, including one I'd suggest you review (marked so in associated edit summary). Overall nice article, no MOS or referencing issues to speak of.--Tomobe03 (talk) 20:23, 23 May 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for your review. I've made all of the fixes. —Ed!(talk) 20:48, 24 May 2013 (UTC)
- You're welcome. All clear.--Tomobe03 (talk) 22:19, 24 May 2013 (UTC)