Talk:Typhoons Louise and Marge/GA1
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 01:04, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
Doing. NoahTalk 01:04, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
reconnaissance aircraft began probing the developing storm
USAF I assume... I would also mention the unit involved.
- @Hurricane Noah: There is no mention of USAF or any US military unit involved from the source, I consider any addition to be WP:OR. Not done. SMB99thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)
torm.[20][21][22].[23]
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valued in the millions of Philippine pesos
I believe it should be "in" instead of "of"
- Really isn't that much here to correct. NoahTalk 12:52, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
- It's finished. SMB99thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)