Talk:Typhoon Warren/GA1

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 23:43, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Opening statement

Hello, and come what may from this review, thank you for your contributions to Wikipedia. During the review, I may make copyedits, which I will limit to spelling correction and minor changes to punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. The Nominator(s) should understand that I am a grammar pedant, and I will nitpick in the interest of prose quality. For responding to my comments, please use Done, Fixed, Added, Not done, Doing..., or Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. –♠Vami _IV†♠ 23:43, 8 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Prose

~~(Re)Move the citation in the lead (during July 1988.[1]).~~
- Not done, that's the only mention of the local name in the article though.
  - ~~I see. Could you move it to the end of Typhoon Huaning, then?~~ –♠Vami_IV†♠ 01:55, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    - Done, good call. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 02:09, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
~~At 00:00 UTC on July 14, the JMA declared the system a tropical storm.[6] On the evening of July 14, the JTWC upgraded Warren to a typhoon.[2] Condense.~~
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
~~Footnote [nb3] would be useful to have in the lead and/or infobox, too.~~
- Done, moved. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
~~one hundred-six [...] one hundred eighty-seven Why not replace these with numerals? You've done the same for other casualty figures in the article.~~
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]
~~Across the Guangdong Province, Axe "the".~~
- Done. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA progress

Images are free/tagged and relevant. Article passes CopyVio detector. References are credible. –♠Vami _IV†♠ 00:32, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Thanks for the review :D Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:33, 9 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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