Talk:Typhoon Chan-hom (2015)/GA1

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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 03:04, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Hurricanehink. I will be reviewing this article against the Good Article criteria to see if it is GA-worthy. As always, I see no major issues with the article, but I need a few things to be addressed or fixed before I can pass this article.--12george1 (talk) 03:04, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The infobox does not mention the Philippines as an affected area

Added. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:38, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"The ninth named storm of the" - Wikilink "named storm" to Tropical cyclone naming

Added. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:38, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"On July 12, the storm struck the Ongjin peninsula in North Korea, and became an" - Wikilink North Korea, otherwise Kim Jong-un may come and find you :P

Added. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:38, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"reaching five storeys high in Wenling, washing fish ashore" - I almost asked about "storeys", but then I realized it was correct. I didn't know that was how it was spelled when referring to floors

Yea, I had to check that too. I didn't know it was spelled differently! ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:38, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

"which killed 16 people and caused ₱3.9 million (US$86,500) in agricultural losses.[65]" - I saw in the infobox you said that the 16 deaths were indirect. Why didn't you say that here? Also, why no mention of the causes of death?

Because the whole paragraph is clear that these are indirect effects, the result of the storm increasing the monsoon. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:38, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

On reference #52, there's two problems: "Retrieved July 12, 2016. Check date values in: |access-date= (help)" :P

Shh, I'm time traveling! ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:38, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

On the next reference, ". [en.yibada.com/articles/56747/20150825/zhang-ziyi-four-five-months-pregnant-new-source.htm "Zhang Ziyi Four to Five Months Pregnant, Says New Source"] Check |url= value (help)."

Ah, that's annoying that the url doesn't work unless it starts with http. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:38, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Overall, pretty decent. Just some minor issues that should be fixed/addressed in a timely manner before I can pass.--12george1 (talk) 03:04, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Hope it's better now. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 15:38, 16 January 2016 (UTC)[reply]