Talk:Type 1936C destroyer/GA1
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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:45, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 00:45, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox:
- "Kriegsmarine" must be in italics
- Done
- an improvement
upon the"of" Type 1936A and Bdestroyers - Done
Work"The construction" was constantly interrupted- Done
- by numerous problems,
chief among themdominantly due to air raids - Done
- comma is missing after "Z46 and Z47" in the last sentence of the lead.
- Done
- were blown up
in their shipyardsby Allied troops; as they're in construction they'll obviously be stationed at their shipyards only, no need of special mention. - Done
- Link the units in infobox; waterline, standard load, overall, design load, nautical miles etc. and the also the items in "armament" field
- Done
- Section 1;
- Everything looks fine, except that a few links are to added. In para 2, you can add links of LC.41 twin turrets, anti-aircraft guns, depth charge launchers etc.
- Done
- Section 2;
- as an improvement
upon"of"both theType 1936A and B destroyers. - Done
- two ships of the class, Z46, and Z47 were ordered on 8 October 1941; Please check the use commas at the pennant numbers.
- Done
- but
began"was restarted" again - Done
- The
building"construction" of the two ships - Done
- as an improvement
- I am not sure about the copyright statues of the image used in infobox. It is taken from a website which has no statement for the usage. Also it is clear that the file is created the uploader.
- The uploader of the image is the owner of the website, as seen [1].
- No plagiarism detected.
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 02:04, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: I believe I have done all you have asked. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:53, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 16:05, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: