Talk:Twink Twining/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 15:16, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 14:18, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Revised a cat.
Added cats.
Add professional to lead.
Link baseball in lead I guess?
Link basketball in lead also.
Can you add his full name to the first sentence of the early life section. It's not obvious where it's coming from (I know it's from BBR though).
"best pitchers in college baseball" link college baseball.
"Twining began his professional baseball career after having graduated from Swarthmore in 1915 with a team in Chester" change to "After having graduated from Swarthmore in 1915, Twining began his professional baseball career with a team in Chester, Pennsylvania"
"He also played for a team in Media" Let's just spell out Media, Pennsylvania.
"manager of the Cincinnati Reds of Major League Baseball" link Major League Baseball.
"Abington, Hahnemann and Wilmington" link those

Interesting article. I like the picture of him on the football team. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 14:18, 18 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]