Talk:Tuvalu Association of Sports and National Olympic Committee/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: CycloneIsaac (talk · contribs) 06:42, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 06:42, 2 January 2018 (UTC)

• The association also participates in the Pacific Games. Why isn't that in here?
  • Done? I added as much as I could find online, which was not much. Kees08 (Talk)
• "In 2013, Tuvalu was granted Associate status in the Oceania Continent Handball Federation by the International Handball Federation."
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Facilities and Management sections should be merged, since they go hand in hand.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• Annual budget should go under management.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "Tuvalu participates in the Olympic Games in the Summer Olympics. They have yet to compete at the Winter Games." Merge these two sentences.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)
• "Etimoni Timuani represented Tuvalu at 2016 Summer Olympics in the 100 metre event. Tuvalu was the only country to send one competitor to the 2016 Olympic Games." Change that to "Etimoni Timuani represented Tuvalu at 2016 Summer Olympics in the 100 metre event, being the only country to send one competitor to the event."
  • Done, slightly different than suggested Kees08 (Talk)
• "Tuvalu has subsequently sent teams to compete in the Commonwealth Games in 2002, 2006, 2010 and 2014." Change to "compete in the Commonwealth Games since 2002."?
  • Done (ish, changed it differently) Kees08 (Talk)
• File:Tuvalu Association of Sports and National Olympic Committee Logo.jpg should be used in the article.
  • Done Kees08 (Talk)

Should be it for now.—CycloneIsaac (Talk) 06:22, 20 January 2018 (UTC)

@CycloneIsaac: Let me know if I did not address something well enough. Kees08 (Talk) 00:44, 21 January 2018 (UTC)