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The above issues were highlighted on my article "Tunia Baqa Shah". The above issues have been taken care of.. Please review my article and help me improve it.

The article has been edited to cite reference.
The article is no more orphan. The article Khan Wahan has link to it.
The article has been divided into distinct sections.

Afaq Ali Shah (talk) 17:19, 12 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I've removed the orphan and section tags, and changed unreferenced to improve referencing: you really need to reference more than the schools and clinic, if possible. I left the criticism of the lead since I wasn't sure how to fix it, not being familiar with the topic, but there are surely more things to say about the village, such as its distance from somewhere else, number of residents, main source(s) of income ... ? In future you can remove tags yourself after fixing the issue raised, although it's good to note in your edit summary that you are doing so. Yngvadottir (talk) 17:36, 12 January 2014 (UTC)[reply]