Talk:Tule Island/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:40, 7 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Similar to the other small island article, this feels too short to be a good article but we'll go with the flow and see what we get.
- I think it might be a stretch for this one; I scoured existing references pretty well, but I could try to come up with some more.
"farm potatoes, which now consists mostly" perhaps "but which now" or "and which".
- Y Have copyedited this sentence a little.
"USGS aerial imagery ..." fragment, no full stop.
- Y Fixed.
" City of Stockton" why is "City" capitalised?
- Y No particularly good reason, fixed.
"as a fishing location" you didn't link fishing in the lead?
- Y Sure, why not.
"the 1959 musical" no need for that year.
- Y Fixed.
"Fern-Headreach-Tule complex" what is that?
- Y Added some description in "Geography".
"The Modesto Bee" The is part of the name.
- Y Fixed.
"$5 to $6 million" maybe $5–6 million. And inflate.
- Y Done.
Ref 6 SHOUTING.
- Y