Talk:Trump National Golf Club Westchester

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:53, 24 August 2016 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 13:53, 24 August 2016 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• "2016 U.S. Presidential election," - spell out as 2016 United States Presidental election as you have done in the main article
  • fixed

History

• Who was Walter W. Law?
  • fixed

• "In 1922 Devereux" - comma is needed in between "1922" and "Devereux" for consistency
  • fixed

• "In 1948 Henry" - ditto
  • fixed

• "construction began May 1928" - construction began in May 1928
  • fixed

• "In 1980, ownership of the club changed hands again" - Do we know exactly who became the club's new owner in 1980?
  • Sadly no.

Trump's purchase and redevelopment

• "7 tennis courts," - 7 should be spelt out
  • fixed

• "until he closed the property to begin work on the property." - repetition of "property"
  • fixed

Reopening and further events

• "The thirteenth hole cost Trump $7 million, surrounded by an artificial 101-foot (31 m) black granite waterfall, which pumps 5,000 US gallons (18,900 l) a minute." - needs a citation

• • added

• "the club sued the town of Ossining to lower its worth from $13.5 million to $1.4 million in order to lower property and school taxes;" - repetition of lower
  • fixed

• Wikilink Horace Greeley High School
  • fixed

Current operations

• "initiation fees were $100,000-$150,000." - initiation fees were between $100,000-$150,000
  • fixed

References

• References 2, 3 & 7 needs page numbers where possible
  • The page numbers for 2 and 7 are inline; a moderately-used standard on Wikipedia. I added the page for 3.

• References 9 and 32 lead to dead links
  • Fixed one; the other's gone; removed.

• The works in References 14, 19, 20, 22, 35 and 39 should be italicized
  • The citation template doesn't because websites and publishers are not italicized, only newspapers/magazines. In these cases there might be a name that's also synonymous with a newspaper, however the website or publisher is ideal to list in those cases.

On hold until the above points have been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 15:36, 24 August 2016 (UTC)

@MWright96: replied to all, thanks. ɱ (talk) · vbm · coi) 23:45, 24 August 2016 (UTC)

Since all points have been done, I can gladly promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 05:12, 25 August 2016 (UTC)

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