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I'm having a look at this for DYK. Nice work. I'd suggest that you have a read of WP:LEAD, though, as the lead mentions facts that are not stated in the body of the article. The lead should summarise what's in the body. Keep up the good work! Schwede66 17:55, 3 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

 Done! Thank you for the suggestion. KimChee (talk) 18:54, 3 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]