Talk:Trouble (Natalia Kills song)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 20:33, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Prose

Lead

• In infobox, just the standard edition's duration should be used, and keep it simplified (i.e. 3:42)

 Done

Background and release

• The last sentence should not be all italicized.

 Done

Composition and reception

• "fun." should read "Fun", as stylizations shouldn't be used here.

 Done

Remix

• There's an inconsistency with duration. Is it 3:39 or 4:52?

 Done

• In infobox, include a release date, which seems to be April 8, 2014 unless one counts the online release of February 21, 2014. Remember that the earliest release is to be used.

 Done (Added the iTunes date because the premiere really doesn't count)

Sourcing

Composition and reception

• Not that primary sources are bad, but are there any third party sources that talk about the song reflecting her argument with a boyfriend and wanting to burn the house down? (ref#9) I'd also opt for a source that also mentions it in more than just one sentence.

 Removed since it isn't sourced by anything else.

Live performances

• Ref#21 (zmonline.com) is dead as indicated here

 Removed

Music video

• Using a review from fashion sites like Refinery29 (ref#17) seems questionable unless this reviewer is a music critic.

 Removed

Coverage

Live performances

• Can this be expanded beyond two sentences? If possible, I recommend at least one full paragraph.

Expanded the most possible.

Neutrality

• No problems here

Stability

• No problems here

GA Result

• If the above is addressed within the next seven days, I will pass the GAN.

@XXSNUGGUMSXX: I think that everything has been addressed. Thanks for the quick review. prism^△ 21:27, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Now passing XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 22:01, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

I've already listed it as GA per this diff. prism^△ 22:06, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

I noticed. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 22:10, 28 April 2014 (UTC)