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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk) 20:00, 30 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
Statistical guidance
  • Link Hurricane Isabel in the caption of the r-CLIPER image
  • Why did you wait until the end of the second paragraph to link "statistical model", when it could have been linked in the lead.
  • It says GFS here, but does not tell you that GFS stands for "Global Forecasting System". BTW, the full spelling of the acronym "NOGAPS" is also missing, and is spelled-out until the fourth paragraph of the Dynamical guidance section.
  • "The version of SHIPS with an inland decay component is known as Decay SHIPS (DSHIPS)." - you should write DSHIPS as Decay Statistical Hurricane Intensity Prediction Scheme out completely instead of Decay SHIPS, which will also cut down on the number of acronyms in that sentence.
  • In the last paragraph, delink: National Hurricane Center, rainfall, and Joint Typhoon Warning Center, since all of them were either linked earlier in the section or in the Lead.
Dynamical guidance
Timeliness
Consensus methods
Ensemble methods
References
Ok, good enough, I will now pass this article. Congratulations,--12george1 (talk) 01:13, 31 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]