Talk:Tropical Storm Nana (2008)/GA2

GA Review

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Hi, I will be reviewing this article which is currently up for Good Article Nomination. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 02:00, 12 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

The lead could be a little more comprehensive
There is information missing from the pre-depression stage.
The section is not up to date with the TCR as it was a tropical depression for six hours before becoming a tropical storm.
I don't think Nana set any records so there is no need for there to be a "records" part
The wording could be better in places too

There are some issues with missing information, as such, I'm putting this article on hold until these issues are addressed. Cyclonebiskit (talk) 15:20, 12 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I agree, the lead is too short. Does Julian know the week for the GA hold expires in three days? Thegreatdr (talk) 17:07, 16 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

I'm going to have to withdraw this for now, due to lack of time. –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 17:53, 16 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]