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Hi, I am going to be reviewing this article which is currently up for Good Article Nomination. I should have the full review out shortly. Cyclonebiskit 03:28, 22 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  • The end of the lead is a bit confusing, you say that it became extratropical but the JMA was still issuing advisories until it dissipated.
  • You use consolidated several times within a short span, try to use synonyms to avoid repetition
  • "Matmo" is used excessively in the Meteorological history section, use words like "the storm", "the cyclone", or "the system"
  • The last part of the Preparations, impact and naming needs a reference.

There are a few errors in the article, they shouldn't be too hard to fix. I'm putting the article on hold to allow you to address this issues. Cyclonebiskit 03:43, 22 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Ok, everything looks good. I'm passing the article, nice job restoring the article! Cyclonebiskit 17:32, 22 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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