Talk:Tropical Storm Erin (2007)/GA1

GA Review

I will be reviewing this article as soon as I can. Shrewpelt (talk) 17:46, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

My thoughts:

In the lead, you talk a little about how this tropical storm's name was retired, but do not mention it in the article's body. You will need to talk a little about that if you want that sentance to be in the lead.
- Done. –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 18:14, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"In Sisterdale, two people were killed when they were swept away stalled over Sister Creek[35]". You need a period in that sentence.
- Done. –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 18:14, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I noticed several redlinks; if articles are unlikely to be created for them, they probably should not be linked.
- Done. –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 18:14, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
I find it very interesting that this storm redeveloped over land. Is there any information on why this happened?
- The storm actually never redeveloped, but rather just formed in eye-like structure. In any event, there is no real known reason as to why that occurred. –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 18:14, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]
"Nine water rescues occurred along the I-44 corridor, which was most impacted by Erin's rainfall.[49]" Mostly, perhaps?
- Done. –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 18:14, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I have put this article on hold. Good luck! Shrewpelt (talk) 18:09, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Just one more thing: add a citation for the last sentence in Impact, and then I will pass this article. Shrewpelt (talk) 19:13, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done. –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 19:16, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Passed. Good job on this article. I'd suggest bringing it to Peer Review if you want to make this a Featured Article. Good luck! Shrewpelt (talk) 19:50, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. –Juliancolton ^Tropical ^Cyclone 19:58, 12 August 2008 (UTC)[reply]