Talk:Triumph of a Heart/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 23:30, 10 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments:

You quote ""the workings of anatomy" in the lead, so it must be cited
Same must occur for "erratic"
"Pitchfork" needs to be italicized
In the block quote, I believe citation #9 should be placed at the end of the block versus where it currently is
Not sure if "website" after "BBC Manchester" is entirely necessary
Several critics suggest that "Triumph of a Heart" was a successful album closer; could this be mentioned in the lead too?
Maybe including the release year for The Medúlla Videos DVD set in parentheses would be helpful to the reader
Using "div col" in the "Track listings and formats" section awkwardly splits up the different releases, depending on the size of the page; I'd recommend changing it to "col-begin"/"col-2"/"col-end" in brackets so you can control where the splits occur – if you need an example of this, let me know
You could include a link to the official music video for "Triumph of a Heart" under the "External links" section
Perhaps you might want to archive any reference links right now so they are preserved in the future by using this link

This is one of my favorite Björk songs; glad to see the article being taken care of! I'll place this article on hold to allow for any improvements to be made. Regards, Carbrera (talk) 19:11, 17 February 2018 (UTC).[reply]

@Carbrera: Thanks for the review, I think I have addressed all the issues mentioned, and I will archive the links in the future. Alex ^talk 09:00, 18 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]

11JORN – Thank you for your patience. I will be passing this article now. Carbrera (talk) 19:23, 20 February 2018 (UTC).[reply]