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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 20:33, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
- Many thanks for taking this on. Chiswick Chap (talk) 06:38, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
Will post my comments soon. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 20:33, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
No copyvio concerns; no dablinks, duplinks or broken external links.
- Noted.
Coming to the prose,
- Inline citations missing for the last line of 'Context' and the last lines in the 1st and the 5th paras of 'Book'
- Added.
Genetic vulnerability
What exactly does it mean? And vulnerability to what?
- Glossed.
- 'She' is a bit repetitive in some places in 'Book', a few of these instances could be replaced with 'Griffiths'.
- Done.
describing the Old English wōd
A link for Old English? Should 'wōd' be in italics?
- Done both.
Mercutio (here played by Orson Welles)
Maybe add which play it is referring to, directed by whom, the year?
- Done.
- A link for 'antipsychotics'?
- Done.
seeing people's wings
Maybe 'wings' should be in quotes since this was her imagination and not for real?
- Added.
As she is wished "Buen Camino"
Maybe add a translation here?
- Added.
- 'Shakespeare' should be linked at the first mention
- Done.
- Tristimania is not in italics consistently throughout the article
- Fixed.
- Does the article consistently use British English?
- I think so, at least it all feels natural to this native. Added tag.
- Access date missing for refs, 25, 26, 28
- Added.
- Ref. 26 has the 'G' in 'Griffiths' in lower case
- Fixed.
That is all. A nice read :) Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:03, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you so much!
- Good job. Happy to promote :) Sainsf (talk · contribs) 16:59, 17 April 2020 (UTC)
- Thank you so much!