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Brief plot summary needed

There should be a brief summary of the opera's plot either in the head section or in the beginning of the (very long) synopsis section. If you have a good knowledge of the opera, could you please add a couple of lines with a short and accurate outline of it? 90.184.0.217 (talk) 11:00, 27 December 2010 (UTC)

Importance

Something needs to be said about this opera's importance. It is a fact that Tristan und Isolde was the most discussed artwork of the 19th century and had an absoulutely revolutionary effect on the history of Western art. 21:02, 18 October 2005

I think this would be very worthwhile if you can find and quote supporting evidence for this claim. Tristan had a huge impact on western music, true - and I think this could be expanded upon. But did it influence other art forms, and if so, how? --Dogbertd 10:52, 19 October 2005 (UTC)

Page move

This page appears to have been moved in contradiction to the policy Wikipedia:Naming conventions (use English). Hyacinth 21:42, 27 Dec 2004 (UTC)

I don't really understand why someone has removed the Shepherd and Steersman from the cast list? They are usually cited in any cast list when you see T&I in the opera-house , and will also usually be included in the cast list for a CD recording. Unless there's a strong objection, I'm minded to put them back. Dogbertd

Historic Recordings

I added the reference to the Karl Elmendorff 1928 recording at Bayreuth. An interesting note: In 1929, when this album was released on phonographic records, it cost $28.50. In 2005, that is equivalent to $300. Heck, you can buy an iPod for that kind of money and, besides that, the same recording can be currently purchased on CD for $20. We live in fine times indeed to be able to enjoy this music without having to spend our life's savings.

This is the original review from the 1929 issue of Time Magazine:

TRISTAN UND ISOLDE, recorded at the 1928 Bayreuth Festival (Columbia, $28.50†)—Wagner's love opera recorded for the first time in accordance with sacred Bayreuth tradition. Able Karl Elmendorff conducts the Bayreuth orchestra; Nanny Larsen-Todsen, recent soprano of the Manhattan Metropolitan Opera, sings a clear, well-styled Isolde.

†Prices listed are for entire albums, which include several records. Where the price is not given, it is 75¢, standard rate for popular 10-inch records.

Dtaw2001 03:09, 21 November 2005 (UTC)

Spoiler warning

I hardly think that an opera written over 150 years ago, based on a story known for hundreds of years prior to that requires a spoiler warning. Most of the other opera plots on Wikipedia do not include this spurious warning, and I don't see why Tristan und Isolde should have it. You would hardly be reading the plot if you were scared of finding out the ending! I have removed it (again) and will continue to do so unless I hear a good reason why it should be there. --Dogbertd 16:09, 12 January 2006 (UTC)

Karajan 1952 performance

Sorry to be a bore about this, but Tristan und Isolde was not performed at the 1951 Bayreuth Festival (Der Ring and Parsifal were the only operas performed at the first post-war festival). It was performed 5 times at the 1952 festival, under the baton of Karajan, who refused to come back thereafter (Jochum conducted the 5 Tristan performances in 1953). I can cite several references for this (have a look at Frederick Spott's History of the Bayreuth festival), but mostly it's because the Orfeo recording I have - which is published in conjunction with the Bayreuth Festival - says quite clearly that the recording was made in 1952 and not 1951.--Dogbertd 20:20, 2 February 2006 (UTC)

There's also a link to a MIDI file of the Tristan chord on the Tristan chord main page... it might be a good idea to add that link here, but I don't know how to do it.

Done.--Dogbertd 15:55, 21 April 2006 (UTC)

Contemporary Critics

The first paragraphs mentions what 19th century critics thought about the work , shouldn't the article include what 20th century and contemporary critics thought.... if no one objects I will be adding those opinions.Amfortas 14:22, 17 April 2006 (UTC)

Good idea: the more the merrier!--Dogbertd 15:32, 17 April 2006 (UTC)

Anecdote

I recall hearing at a lecture on Tristan und Isolde that there was one performance in which the soprano singing Isolde "wore out three Tristans in a night" — that is, a different tenor sang Tristan in each act, so exhausting was the part. If anyone knows anything more about this anecdote (and has a reliable source for it) it might be worth adding to "Trivia". —Josiah Rowe (talk • contribs) 19:08, 16 July 2006 (UTC)

How can this entry omit that a major movie is based on this opera? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.16.157.194 (talk)

The movie is based on the legend, not the opera. --Alexs letterbox 20:55, 7 May 2007 (UTC)

The soprano in question was Birgit Nilsson at the Met. She recalls it in an interview, which I have heard as an appendix to my DVD of Strauss' Met "Elektra". —Preceding unsigned comment added by 77.105.6.50 (talk) 12:12, 1 May 2008 (UTC)

I think the synopsis sounds very familiar to me. Might it be taken word to word from liner notes of some CD release of the opera? Böhm's version had similar synopsis, I recall. Probably the same text appears elsewhere too. Can somebody check it? --128.214.205.4 15:09, 1 September 2006 (UTC)

I made a special effort to rewrite what was (to me) an old-fashioned synopsis previously on this page ("the treacherous Melot" and so on). I can assure you I worked essentially from the original German libretto, and at no time did I crib from any liner notes or other version of the text, precisely because I wanted the Wikipedia version to be free of copyright issues. If you think I've stolen text from elsewhere, I'll be interested to see it, and will be happy to change it into a form of words that does not infringe anyone else's copyright. --Dogbertd 15:21, 1 September 2006 (UTC)
OK, I believe there's no problem. I just felt strongly that I had read the same text before. --128.214.205.4 13:27, 2 September 2006 (UTC)
I know that there are other opera sites online which take their synopses directly from Wikipedia. Perhaps you saw it there. Incidentally, I checked the synopsis from the Bohm Tristan CDs, and it's nothing like mine, so at least there's no possibility I unconsciously used phrases I'd read elsewhere.--Dogbertd 15:13, 2 September 2006 (UTC)

Removal of Trivia

People, can we make an effort to remove the Trivia section? The guidelines at WP:TRIV suggest that information in trivia sections should be incorporated into the main text or removed. Some of the trivia here is very trivial (eg. attempts to note every use of material from Tristan in films or rock music) and I think should be removed.--Dogbertd 13:19, 14 May 2007 (UTC)

I support that. The Opera Project guideline reads: When it comes to anecdotes, influences on pop culture, and other peripheral content or "trivia", information should only be included in opera articles if it is likely to be of interest to a typical reader of the article. Hope that helps. -- Kleinzach 14:39, 14 May 2007 (UTC)

Recent edits to Audio section

Is anyone besides me concerned that this now looks a bit like the "Penguin Guide"? Does each recording require some opinion, and is this appropriate for an encyclopedia article?--Dogbertd 17:36, 27 August 2007 (UTC)

I agree. I do not believe an encyclopedia should contain obvious opinions, even if they are referenced. It is a grey area, but I believe they should go. --Alexs letterbox 22:31, 27 August 2007 (UTC)
Well, in that case the entire section should go. Anything other than a complete discography is original research unless we can produce published opinions explaining why each recording is notable enough to be included. And I resent the comparison to the "Penguin Guide": the comments were from Brown's discography and were written by someone who actually knows what he is talking about. Cheers. Grover cleveland 16:56, 12 September 2007 (UTC)
I think your position is rather extreme - if it doesn't include every recording it's OR? One could equally well argue then that if the article doesn't reference every book written on Wagner and on Tristan und Isolde then the article itself must be OR and so should be deleted! What we have at the moment states very clearly that the discography is selective and actually references both Brown's book and web-site. Personally I thought the inclusion of these quotes to be very close to advertising, and it was for this reason as much as anything else that I removed them. My suggestion would be that you start a new page on "Recordings of Tristan und Isolde" which we could reference from here. One way or another this article would still have to include some comment on "classic" recordings like the Flagstadt/Melchior, the Furtwangler on EMI and the Nilsson/Windgassen/Bohm because every survey of recordings of T&I acknowledges them as such - including the reviews by Alan Blyth and Robin Holloway, which I've included as references. And they too certainly know what they're talking about.--Dogbertd 18:52, 12 September 2007 (UTC)

Contradictions

The first sentence under "Reactions" reads, "Although Tristan und Isolde is today performed in major opera houses around the world, critical opinion was not always favorable," while the first sentence under "recordings" reads, "Tristan und Isolde has always been acknowledged as one of the greatest operas." What's with that? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.114.162.151 (talk) 03:22, 3 December 2007 (UTC)

Some critics of that time were able to acknowledge that the work was great, without liking it or admiring its message. But if you think there's a better way to express this in the article, then please fix. I'd agree it does look contradictory at first glance. --Dogbertd 10:27, 3 December 2007 (UTC)

I think that it is more the critial opinion about the specific performance not about the opera as whole. Look at the problems with the current (March '08) production of Tristan und Isolde at the Met. --Joncaves (talk) 02:07, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

Instrumentation

I have removed the following from the Instrumentation section. I find these sentences impenetrable.

Wagner's statement: "The string instruments are exquisitely well and strong to fill.")
Noteworthy is the fact that the final chord of "Tristan" is not as usual from all the instruments in the Tutti played. The English horn, pause, what Richard Strauss led to the interpretation: "The poison is out ..."

--Alexs letterbox (talk) 22:53, 6 February 2008 (UTC)

Localization and Various Editing

I'm sorry about the color/colour mishaps. I've reverted the language to its previous setting, that of colour.

I pruned the article today, and will continue to add onto the article for a while. Hopefully we can get it to GA quality or even to FA. Sutherland4l (talk) 22:17, 14 February 2008 (UTC)

  • Welcome to T&I. You might want to look at the assessment of the article for ways to improve it [1]. Incidentally, I think you'll find that our US friends will react unfavorably to your use of favour...--Dogbertd (talk) 22:02, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
I'm a little confused by your comment there, Dogbertd. I thought the status quo ante was UK spelling. And therefore it should remain there. I even did some changes and encouraged User:Sutherland4l that way. But the assessment is a good recommendation. I wonder what I and my colleagues said.--Peter cohen (talk) 22:10, 15 February 2008 (UTC)
Well I noticed that several of the sections written by me (in UK english) had a while back been changed into US english. And, as you know from the discussions on copyright on recordings (see [2]), it does seem to be US law that applies to Wikipedia, so I think we have to take it that Wikipedia is American and should be expressed in US english. I just didn't want newcomers to waste time amending spellings that will subsequently be "corrected". As for the assessments,<on hobbyhorse> I still think these a bit harsh - I still struggle to see how T&I can be an "excellent all-round article" and yet only rate a B </off hobbyhorse> however we'll have to do what we can to improve that!--Dogbertd (talk) 15:21, 16 February 2008 (UTC)
Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style#National_varieties_of_English is quite clear on this. To paraphrase it there is a form of squatters' rights whereby the first edit that defines which variety of English is used determines the article's nationality for the long-term, the exceptions being that the subject of the article has higher priority (Winston Churchill uses Brit English, Jimmy Carter American, Joan Sutherland Australian etc.) and, if someone can find a decent phrasing that makes the national variety undetermined, that is preferable as everyone can be happy with it.
As for the ratings, we managed to talk the categories down a bit from the original proposal. I think originally B started at 70 which would have meant that T&I barely scraped it. In my write-up I have tried to direct people's thoughts towards the next rating (GA) which isn't determined within the project anyway. A good lead section and the referencing were certainly key issues in my past experience. I think also that giving the individual category marks makes it easier for future editors to see where most marks can be picked up for reaching A.--Peter cohen (talk) 21:54, 16 February 2008 (UTC)

Image

The page on Tristan und Isolde currently has an image titled "Tristan und Isolde" by Ferdinand Leeke - it looks on closer inspection to be the entrance to a bank and I am having a hard time working out how it relates to the opera or to Wagner. If no one objects I may just remove it. --Joncaves (talk) 02:11, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

This is the result of a reckless edit at WIkicommons. I have put in a request for the admins to fix it there.--Peter cohen (talk) 11:00, 15 March 2008 (UTC)
Now fixed.--Peter cohen (talk) 12:08, 15 March 2008 (UTC)

Premiere Date Discrepancy

The article for Ludwig Schnorr von Carolsfeld states that the premiere was June 6th. This article says the premiere was June 10th. Can anyone clear this up? DavidRF (talk) 14:35, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

Yes. My copy of "New Grove Wagner" has the 10th. The article on von Carolsfeld is wrong.--Dogbertd (talk) 16:49, 21 March 2008 (UTC)
I see you fixed it. Thanks. DavidRF (talk) 18:21, 21 March 2008 (UTC)

Opera vs Music Drama

Is there a reason opera is used to refer to this (and perhaps other akin Wagner works) and not music drama (Gesamtkunstwerk), the term Wagner used to describe his "complete work[s] of art"? I don't know what is currently en vogue with music writing, but according to "Listen: Brief Fifth Edition" by Kerman & Tomlinson, they make specific use and reference to music drama and Gesamtkunstwerk when speaking of the Romantic Operas Wagner composed... --Ikyork (talk) 22:04, 3 May 2008 (UTC)

Parsifal lists both. I'll add the same here. DavidRF (talk) 23:43, 3 May 2008 (UTC)

Media/Prelude to Tristan und Isolde

The 'Prelude to Tristan und Isolde' we have has a lot of background noise. It was recorded by the amateur Fulda Symphonic Orchestra. Would anyone object if we deleted it? --Kleinzach 00:42, 11 September 2008 (UTC)

  • I haven't listened to it so can't really comment on the quality or the performance. Even if it's not perfect I suppose it's better than nothing. Copyright restrictions mean that we're unlikely to be able to find another free-to-use recording of better quality.--Dogbertd (talk) 12:06, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
There must be some old recordings which are both of historic interest and out of copyright. This one reflects badly on the article. After all this is an encyclopedia. What do other people think? --Kleinzach 02:17, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
    • I agree: this is an online encyclopedia and it is crazy that we cannot include all of the multimedia potential implied by that. However the greed of record companies means that recordings remain in copyright for decades (see [3] for endless dabate on why we can't post these performances). A good example would the Prelude to T&I from the very famous Furtwangler recording. This is out of copyright in the UK and europe (although they are trying to change that)but is not in the US, and it seems that WP abides by US law. Unless we can persuade the Berlin Philharmonic to record it for us and give us the copyright, we're not going to be able to use a better recording than the one we've got. Wahn! Wahn! Uberall Wahn! --Dogbertd (talk) 09:07, 12 September 2008 (UTC)

Brown (2000): Tristan und Isolde on Record (from the bibliography) is on Google Books here [4] Surely we can find some important recordings here which are well out of copyright? --Kleinzach 09:32, 12 September 2008 (UTC)

For example there's a 1913 Weingartner Liebestod, also some early Klemperer and Siegfried Wagner recordings. --Kleinzach 09:36, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
I have this set [5] which does include a disc containing the prelude and other material, all from no later than 1930 and much from earlier. Unfortunately I don't have a booklet. John from Gebhardt did email a copy to me but it doesn't seem to have reached my current computer. I can investigate but not until after the weekend. I don't know whether the digital transcription might be copyright even if the original material is not. And I don't want to include too much after Gebhardt have been helpful to me in the past. Biting the hand and all that.--Peter cohen (talk) 13:00, 12 September 2008 (UTC)
I have now transferred the PDF of the booklet to my current machine. The Prelude is Strauss and the Berlin Phil in 1928. So probably not Public Domain in the US. There is some pre-1923 stuff, but I don't know whether the digital amstering is copyright.--Peter cohen (talk) 16:17, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

If nobody objects I'll remove the Fulda recording. --Kleinzach 00:09, 17 September 2008 (UTC)

Question about the italicized quotes

It seems like many of the quotes in this article are italicized. I was under the impression that one should not italicize in a quote unless the original uses italics or, if, for example, the original is a handwritten document and has underlined text. --Robert.Allen (talk) 08:10, 9 October 2009 (UTC)

I looked through Help and did find this: Wikipedia:Manual of Style#Italics. Check the paragraph "Quotations in italics" and "Italics within quotations" It seems likely that some of the quotations in this article should be formatted differently. The ones I particularly noticed were inline quotes in the section "Composition" --Robert.Allen (talk) 08:46, 9 October 2009 (UTC)
I've now removed many of the offending italics from the Composition section. Hope this is better.--Dogbertd (talk) 19:14, 13 October 2009 (UTC)

Thanks! The article is looking very good, and I see you have made much of the effort to get it this way. Keep up the good work. --Robert.Allen (talk) 23:56, 13 October 2009 (UTC)

Quotations and reuses

They just played Chabrier's Quadrille on Radio 3. Is it worth having a section for substantial reuses of material from Tristan? I notice that the Liszt piano arrangements get a mention. I'm trying to think of what else there is.--Peter cohen (talk) 13:33, 8 January 2010 (UTC)

Yes, that isn't trivia, but it might be better to avoid a random list. --Kleinzach 14:41, 8 January 2010 (UTC)

Brangane's range

She's a mezzo-soprano, not a soprano. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 207.237.243.185 (talk) 15:37, 19 August 2010 (UTC)

  • Just look at the discography. She's always sung by a mezzo. Margret Klose, Yvonne Minton, Ira Malaniuk, Christa Ludwig, Blanche Thebohm, Brigitte Fassbender, etc. All famous mezzo-sopranos. On the other hand, I checked the score, and you're right, it says "soprano". 207.237.243.185 (talk) 00:29, 20 August 2010 (UTC)
I've added a footnote to the article which clarifies this. 207.237.243.185 (talk) 05:03, 20 August 2010 (UTC)

Is there a similar issue with Melot? The vocal score is only says Tenor, yet we say "or baritone" almost-instinct 16:23, 29 August 2010 (UTC)

There might be. The full score I own also has "tenor" for the role of Melot, and according to this Operissimo page the creator of the role was in fact a tenor. So maybe in order to be consistent the "or baritone" in the roles table should be removed.--Francesco Malipiero (talk) 16:38, 29 August 2010 (UTC)
I am ignorant of current practice... almost-instinct 22:45, 29 August 2010 (UTC)
My last Melot (also my last Macbeth) was Stephen Gadd. I also saw Thomas Allen in the role many years ago. It's a very small role and probably wouldn't do any damage to a baritone's voice. Another footnote seems called for. (And probably yet another for Masetto - see Talk:Don Giovanni.) --GuillaumeTell 21:45, 30 August 2010 (UTC)
On the page Melot's music is remarkably similar to Kurwenal's in tessitura/range. I suppose no-one wants to throw away money on the expense of a tenor, but presumably Wagner knew what he wanted almost-instinct 22:13, 30 August 2010 (UTC)

Assessment comment

The comment(s) below were originally left at Talk:Tristan und Isolde/Comments, and are posted here for posterity. Following several discussions in past years, these subpages are now deprecated. The comments may be irrelevant or outdated; if so, please feel free to remove this section.

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B class (70 points). Excellent all round article. Some improvements remain possible:
  • Information about recent performance history
  • Including in the synopsis the first lines in German of important passages
  • Some more illustrations
  • Making a complete discography, including historic performances

-- Kleinzach 04:33, 12 September 2007 (UTC)

Rating, points total and comments exactly as per Kleinzach. An additional comment:

  • The text could do with some copy-editing, pruning (e.g. why is there a potted synopsis in the lead) and restructuring.

--GuillaumeTell 17:00, 12 September 2007 (UTC)

74/100 A comfortable B. To get to GA, I would suggest further reading of WP:WIAGA. Ensuring the lead is a summary and referencing of quotations and opinions are aprticularly important.

  • Background/composition/text: 13/15. Excellent. However, I think it should be made more explicit that two of the Wesendonk lieder were musical sketches for Tristan. Gottfried is mentioned as the main source for the poem. Were there others? Also mention that the libretto is a poem.
  • Perfomance History: 10/15. I agree that more is needed on recent performance history.
  • List of roles: 4/5. I would suggest stating that Tristan is a Mark's Nephew, and Isolde his betrothed. Possibly even give an indication of who is Irish, Cornish or Breton.
  • Synopsis: 8/10. I don't know of any indication that Tristan actually murdered Morold. Worth mention that Tristan is so confused at end of Act 1 that he doesn't even know what King Kurwenal is mentioning. Also the interpretation of Tristan's comments on the shepherd's tune and then the following lines in the text are uncertain. I have heard it said that his father died when conceiving him and his mother in childbirth.
  • Key arias etc: 2/5. I would want more key points in the score to be identified, including in the synopsis.
  • Critical appreciation, discussion of the music 12/15. Good, but I would hope for more discussion about Wagner developing an aptitude for combining motifs including four at a time in Act 3. (It's over a quarter century ago, but I believe the person I heard discuss this was Anthony Negus.) Given the influence on Mahler and Berg et al. is mentioned in the lead, I would expect more in the body of the article on this.
  • Recordings: 8/10. An indication of the criteria used to pick recordings would be good. Also how about a mention of recordings of the extracts, particularly the prelude and Liebestod.
  • Illustrations 6/10 Good to have musical examples, but I would suggest some more related to points in the text about musical resolution etc. There's also room for a couple of more pictures e.g. the famous cartoon of Wagner and the Bulows as the three protagonists.

Referencing, sources, links etc. 11/15 A good start made, especially compared with the other Wagner articles I've seen. More citation of quotes and opinions needed to go for GA.

--Peter cohen 13:21, 27 September 2007 (UTC)

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