Talk:Trilogy of Error/GA2

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 19:20, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do this one. Courcelles (talk) 19:20, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Last GAN was 8 years ago, so with respect to the reviewer back then, I plan to read and review this as a first-time GAN. Courcelles (talk) 19:22, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Okay, I'm actually shocked, a lot of the things mentioned in GA1 are still valid, especially the plot length and issues with references.

@Courcelles: Thank you for reviewing. Keep in mind that I did not nominate the first review but have decided to improve the article to give it another go in the review system. AmericanAir88 (talk) 22:13, 30 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

~~"Bart has a wire" This could link somewhere for explanation, as I think "wearing a wire" is an Americanism.~~
~~Plot summary is way too long for a 30 minute episode at over 500 words.~~ Shortened as much as I can.
~~" start each act since they had previously seen this." Previously seen... what?~~
~~Ref 6 is unreliable~~
~~Ref 7 and 14 are the same source, and I don't know how reliable it is.~~ I fixed 7 but 14 is reliable as it is a reviewers opinion.
~~ref 15 is dead.~~
~~Needs information on the Nielsen ratings for the episode.~~
~~""Trilogy of Error" serves as a parody of thriller movies, Go and Run Lola Run." Where is this sourced?~~ Sourced in production.

Courcelles (talk) 19:45, 29 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: Complete. AmericanAir88 (talk) 22:42, 30 May 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Okay:

~~Ref 6 looks like a fan site, and it is showing a 404 error.~~

~~See if the Wayback Machine has a copy of ref 10?~~

Courcelles (talk) 21:41, 3 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: Took care of ref 6 and I could not find any archives of 10 so I deleted the references section relating to 10. AmericanAir88 (talk) 21:48, 4 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Alright, passing. Courcelles (talk) 19:38, 5 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]