Talk:Triathlon at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Men's/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Could you clarify what an NOC is?
"If an athlete had already qualified through another method the NOC didn't receive another quota with it instead going to the next NOC on the ITU Olympic Qualification List." - did not
Delink the continents per WP:OVERLINK
Spell out the ITU on the first instance and leave the acroymn in brackets
The Great Britain wikilink should be to Great Britain at the 2012 Summer Olympics and not to the island

Add adj=on to the convert template for 1.5 kilometres (0.93 mi), 43 kilometres (27 mi), 6.137 kilometres (3.813 mi) and 2.5 kilometres (1.6 mi)
"one big lap." - unencyclopedic
"The course then quickly left Hyde Park to go past Buckingham Palace on Constitution Hill." - The course then quickly turned left towards Hyde Park to go past Buckingham Palace on Constitution Hill

@MWright96: Thanks for your review, I have implemented all of your points. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 08:56, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]