Talk:Triangle (The X-Files)/GA1
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Reviewer: Glimmer721 (talk · contribs) 17:45, 25 January 2012 (UTC)
Hello, I will review this soon. Glimmer721 talk 17:45, 25 January 2012 (UTC)
- Okay, looks very good. Just a few comments:
- In the caption for the main image, specify who the "familar faces" are, as they won't be familar to non-viewers.
- "...September 3, 1939-the outbreak..." en-dash needed.
- Hyphen in "nearly-drowned"?
- Plot section: link Lone Gunmen, Walter Skinner, Dana Scully, and Alvin Kersh; first appearance in the article
- Give the actors' names after their character in parentheses.
- "Trevor Goodard, who portrayed the First British Crewman was Australian..." Comma before "was".
- "The tagline for the episode..." Perhaps "The tagline at the end of the opening credits of the episode..."
- "thought out": Hyphen between
- "This is the best example - a breathlessly-paced..." en-dash needed.
- Clarify that you are referring to the 1939 film of The Wizard of Oz; I originally thought you were talking about the book series in general and wondered how it could have a lyricist.
- Reliability of this? It appears to be a fansite.
That's it! I will place this on hold for 7 days while these small issues are addressed. Glimmer721 talk 23:01, 25 January 2012 (UTC)
- OK, I believe I've fixed everything.--Gen. Quon (talk) 23:13, 25 January 2012 (UTC)
- Looks good, happy to pass this one. Glimmer721 talk 02:03, 26 January 2012 (UTC)