Talk:Trevor Williams (American football)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:02, 15 November 2017 (UTC)

Will take a look at this article. MWright96 (talk) 10:02, 15 November 2017 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Early years

• "All-Maryland Interscholastic Athletic Association (MIAA) accolades his junior season" - All-Maryland Interscholastic Athletic Association (MIAA) accolades for his junior season  Done
• "and 15 touchdowns his senior year." - and 15 touchdowns in his senior year, also wikilink touchdown since this is the first instance of the word being mentioned in the article  Done
• Wikilink the Crab Bowl to the Maryland Crab Bowl  Done
• "he was the offensive MVP" - spell out MVP for non-football readers and wikilink it  Done

College career

• "He appeared in 12 games, starting one, in 2012 and caught 10 passes for 97 yards." - reword this sentence so it reads In 2012, Williams appeared in 12 games, but started just one of them, and caught 10 passes for 97 yards.  Done
• "He appeared in 12 games, all starts, in 2014 and totaled 27 tackles, two interceptions, five pass breakups and one forced fumble." - change this to read 2014 saw Williams appear in 12 games, of which he started in all of them, and totaled 27 tackles, two interceptions, five pass breakups and one forced fumble.  Done
• "He missed the game against Temple on November 15 due to injury." - Is there anything that says what type of injury that forced Williams to miss that specific game?  Done
• "He played in 13 games, all starts, in 2015 and recorded 33 tackles and one interception." - Williams played in all 13 gaes he started in 2015, and recorded 3 tackles and one interception.

That proposed wording seems redundant. He obviously played in the games he started. Thoughts? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:27, 16 November 2017 (UTC)

I have changed the spelling of the sentence slightly. 09:05, 16 November 2017 (UTC)

Professional career

• "He was released on September 3 and signed to the team's practice squad on September 4, 2016." - Williams was released on September 3 and signed to the team's practice squad the following day.  Done
• "He made his NFL debut on October 9, 2016, against the Oakland Raiders." - Williams made his NFL debut two days later, against the Oakland Raiders.  Done
• "He played in 12 games, starting 5, in 2016 and recorded 26 solo tackles, 5 tackle assists, and 5 pass breakups." - Williams played in 12 games, of which he started five, in 2016 and recorded 26 solo tackles, five tackle assists, and five pass breakups.  Done

Will be holding this review until everything raised above has been actioned. MWright96 (talk) 14:05, 15 November 2017 (UTC)

Also note that I have expanded his pro career some. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 01:49, 16 November 2017 (UTC)

Thanks for making the changes I suggested. Had a look at the additional information you added and I cannot find any issues with it. Now promoting to GA