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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 07:17, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


I'll take a look over the next few days. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:17, 12 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

  • Lead needs more on his professional career. Done
  • Probably should link minor ice hockey to timbits hockey.  Done
  • "After being named to the OJHL's 2nd Team All-Stars[11] and Fan Favourite[12] he committed to play for the Erie Otters on May 4, 2013." Comma before ref 12.
  • No need to relink OHL and Erie Otters one paragraph after. Done
  • "before they were ultimately eliminated." By who? Done
  • Link Utica Comets. Done
  • De-link Kapanen's second mention. Done
  • Dash needed for 7-game. Done
  • "However" WP:EDITORIAL. Done
  • Awards and honours section needs the references (Ref.) label for the column of the table. Done

That's about it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:44, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Nova Crystallis, done. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:24, 14 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]