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Delete sentence, or part of it?

Just as the following sentence was recently removed in the lead of the TM Research article, I'm wondering if the same thing should be done in the Research section here [1]? Or at least the last part of the sentence about neuroscience?

The sentence: "TM research has played a role in the history of mind-body medicine[71][72]and helped create a new field of neuroscience."[73]

The last ref, re neuroscience is: Begley, Sharon (February 18, 2008). "His Magical Mystery Tour". Newsweek: 18. "Whatever you think of the 'White Album,' give the Maharishi credit for helping launch what's become a legitimate new field of neuroscience

Seems to me that a science writer for a popular magazine isn't qualified, in terms of MEDRS, to say whether Maharishi or TM research created a "new field of neuroscience."

We could, however, consider keeping the first part of the sentence, whose refs seem adequate. But then there's the question of whether the point that, "TM research has played a role in the history of mind-body medicine" is important enough to include in this section. The whole sentence is now in the History section of the TM Research article, last para [2] EMP (talk 21:07, 13 February 2013 (UTC)

Same point re: same sentence in Research section of TM technique article [3]EMP (talk 22:07, 13 February 2013 (UTC)
For this article: MEDRS seems is used in relation to health/ medical related issues and was created in part to protect readers from a tendency to come to Wikipedia to diagnose themselves. The best content for science articles also seems to be secondary sources, reviews of studies rather than individual studies that haven't under gone the test of a review/ meta study. I'm not sure this content falls into either of these situations and I'm not sure MEDRs applies. That said, I'm not attached to the content or its sources. They are just opinions. One way of dealing with that is to inline cite. Or, if others find the content non compliant, I'm fine with its removal.(olive (talk) 03:55, 14 February 2013 (UTC))
Good catch EMP. I think the neuro science sentence is OK as long as it is inline attributed to the source. --KeithbobTalk 18:56, 14 February 2013 (UTC)
I wonder if the article benefits from any of this. The content doesn't really add information, just makes a couple of weakly substantiated points. I'm thinking more of agreeing to delete it all, if EMP and Kbob agree. Those statements feel a bit like passing a tea bag through some hot water-very weak tea-rather than steeping the bag and making a nice strong cup of article. (olive (talk) 19:53, 14 February 2013 (UTC))
While I appreciate your concern and your logic (plus your quaint metaphor) I really think that this is legitimate text as long as its inline attributed. Its a summary point to the Newsweek article [4] which consist mainly of a discussion of the Maharishi's meditation and its affect on the science of the day and I don't think it should be removed. As a compromise though, I would be OK moving it out of the lead of TMR as there is only one source and it is mainstream press (Newsweek) vs a scholarly source. I would even be OK with it being moved out of the TMR article and into the TMT or TMM article. But I can't see any grounds for deleting it completely. Would arrangement like this work for you, Olive? --KeithbobTalk 17:50, 15 February 2013 (UTC)
Hmmm, if I may jump in here, I have another couple of points, based on further reading: 1) I had a look at MEDRS, and was a little surprised to see the following [5] ". . . the high-quality popular press can be a good source for social, biographical, current-affairs, and historical information in a medical article." 2) Thanks for the link to the article, K-Bob. I see that the comment about neuroscience is not just a off-the-cuff remark, but rather a conclusion to a reasoned article on, as you say, the effect of the TM orgn on trends in scientific research at that time. Perhaps we should add this point (IF we agree to keep the quote). We could perhaps word it something like this:
TM research has played a role in the history of mind-body medicine.(refs) Newsweek magazine science writer Sharon Begley says that the Maharishi's influence helped create a new field of neuroscience and stimulated scientific interest in the study of all types of meditation.(ref) EMP (talk 19:47, 15 February 2013 (UTC)
To include it anywhere I'd like to see it inline attributed, and I don't think, as I probably didn't make clear above that its a reliable source for research. It could be fine it seems to me as part of the section on the History of Research. I'm not excited about seeing it in the lead of a research article given its based on one source. And it would probably be fine in any of the other articles in line attributed.(olive (talk) 21:37, 15 February 2013 (UTC))
OK, but to clarify, here it's not in the lead of a research article, but in the first para of the Research subsection of this article. And to address your concern about it being a single source that is not so strong, we could use part of a quotation from the Legacy section of the Maharishi Mahesh Yogi article so that it would read: "TM research has played a role in the history of mind-body medicine. Newsweek magazine science writer Sharon Begley says that the Maharishi's influence helped create a new field of neuroscience and stimulated scientific interest in the study of all types of meditation. Neuroscientists Ronald Jevning and James O’Halloran have said that “The proposal of the existence of a unique or fourth state of consciousness with a basis in physiology” by the Maharishi in 1968 . . . resulted in a myriad of scientific studies . . .” Does that help? EMP (talk 23:00, 15 February 2013 (UTC)

Kbob mentioned the TM research lead, I was replying to that. I want to make sure I'm not agreeing to putting this content in TMR lead. The source is probably strong enough for some kinds of content just not research which I hope I was clearly suggesting. There's a jump here in terms of information which I think is OR. The content under discussion points to the significance of the TM research while this, the existence of a unique or fourth state of consciousness with a basis in physiology” by the Maharishi in 1968 . . . resulted in a myriad of scientific studies is not quite the same information. I think it might be fine to use both but they shouldn't be connected syntactically, necessarily. At any rate I'm fine with including a short sentence on this topic in any of the articles you and Kbob choose.(olive (talk) 00:32, 16 February 2013 (UTC))

I see what you mean about KBob and the TMR lead. I hadn't taken note of that, because I removed that sentence from the TMR lead several days ago. I assumed that it was no longer under discussion. (It is still in the TMR article, in the History section, tho, which I THINK everyone is OK with.) And yes, I see your point about combining those two sentences. Sort of like mixing two weaves. They don't really match. EMP (talk 01:02, 16 February 2013 (UTC)

Couple of issues

This doesn't seem to appear in any of the sources used to ref it. As well the source link to Concord Monitor isn't working and a search doesn't bring up the article.

TM is practiced by people of many diverse religious affiliations, as well as atheists and agnostics.

  • "The TM technique does not require adherence to any belief system—there is no dogma or philosophy attached to it, and it does not demand any lifestyle changes other than the practice of it."
  • "The TM technique does not require adherence to any belief system—there is no dogma or philosophy attached to it, and it does not demand any lifestyle changes other than the practice of it."
  • "Its proponents say it is not a religion or a philosophy."Curtis, Polly (March 28, 2009). "Meditation courses at school for problem pupils". The Guardian/The Observer. Retrieved 12 February 2013. {{cite news}}: Unknown parameter |access date= ignored (|access-date= suggested) (help)
  • "It's used in prisons, large corporations and schools, and it is not considered a religion." [6] Concord Monitor*

Both content and source are repetitive. We 're saying the same thing multiple times so given their issues I'd like to remove them. Any thoughts on that.(olive (talk) 22:11, 15 February 2013 (UTC))

Hi Olive, I have done a little formatting to your post above so the cites can be seen on the talk page. And good catch by the way, to flag this redundant text and citations. However, your post also inadvertently reminded me that of something I've been meaning to do for weeks. And that is to bring forward the new lead from the child article (TM movement) to replace the current text in the TM movement section of this article. Over the past several months the TM movement article has had significant development and the old lead did not adequately summarize the current expanded and reformatted version of the article. As a result the lead was also revised, in recent months through edits and discussion and made more comprehensive and at the same time more precise. Now that I've carried forward that new lead summary from the TM movement article. You concerns about the duplicate content and refs has been taken care of I think. Please look at the new version of that section and see what you think. Best, --KeithbobTalk 19:50, 16 February 2013 (UTC)
Which brings up an additional and important point: Olive and I have spent time cleaning up the refs in this article, but when material is brought from another article, then it may reintroduce some of the things that had been fixed. I guess we ought to have been working on the refs in the leads of the child articles as well. Or perhaps we should have begun there. In any case, thanks for your work on the lead of the TM movement article. And for moving that content here. TimidGuy (talk) 20:51, 16 February 2013 (UTC)
I guess we have to coordinate or something because yes, we were close to finishing up the ref cleanup on this article, and now we'll have to redo at least the movement section. It was necessary move to move content here, and thanks for taking that on.(olive (talk) 21:04, 16 February 2013 (UTC))

"Meditation" category removed

Edit http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Transcendental_Meditation&diff=538661626&oldid=538630938 by an IP editor removed the "meditation" category. David Spector (talk) 17:38, 15 March 2013 (UTC)

I had replaced it [7] so it is now in place, but thanks for the notification.(olive (talk) 18:35, 15 March 2013 (UTC))

Repetition resulting from verbatim use of leads of child articles

We had consensus in the past that a good approach to this article (in order to keep to keep it from getting unwieldy) is to simply have each section repeat the lead of the child article. It has worked well to keep the article as a general overview of the topic. But it has also led to some unfortunate repetition. For example, this sentence in the Research section appears almost verbatim in the TM technique section: "The Transcendental Meditation technique is a specific form of mantra meditation[25] developed by Maharishi Mahesh Yogi." I guess what we should do is tweak these sections so that they are basically the same as the leads of the child articles, but are a bit streamlined to avoid repetition. TimidGuy (talk) 15:38, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

Yes TG, I'd agree.(olive (talk) 17:01, 17 March 2013 (UTC))

Remove sentence from research section

By consensus we have sought to have the sections of this article follow closely the leads of the child articles. And by consensus the following sentence was removed from the lead of the Transcendental Meditation research article:

TM research has played a role in the history of mind-body medicine[77][78] and helped create a new field of neuroscience.[79]

See this thread.[8] I am therefore removing it from this article. A similar sentence appears in the body of the TM research, so know that this sourced information isn't being removed from WP altogether. I am also slightly revising the syntax of the first paragraph so that it emulates the better flow of the same paragraph in the TM research article. TimidGuy (talk) 15:14, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

For the same reason, should this sentence not also be removed from Transcendental Meditation technique article, Researcher section? EMP (talk 18:49, 22 March 2013 (UTC)

Fundamental Principle of TM

I've included a quote that neatly summarizes the fundamental principle of TM, written by Harold H. Bloomfield, M.D. Here is the complete reference, quote in the source that I cited: Harold H. Bloomfield, M.D. Michael Peter Cain, Dennis T. Jaffe, TM, Discovering Inner Energy and Overcoming Stress, New York, Delacorte, 1975. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Matipop (talkcontribs) 00:21, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for your contribution. We should probably move your addition to the Transcendental Meditation technique article. It's too detailed for this broad overview article. TimidGuy (talk) 01:21, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

Open threads at TM project page

Hi folks, I've started several threads on the TM project page hoping to get some input about how to arrange and manage the project. If you have any time, I 'd appreciate comments from others on here on the project talk page. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Keithbob (talkcontribs) 20:37, 20 March 2013‎ (UTC)

Research section

Have restored the last research section based on the last RfC. I do not see a new RfC supporting these new changes. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 01:05, 23 March 2013 (UTC)

Please point to the RfC you mention above, and please point to the policy or guideline that says a RfC is required to make changes based on RS in an article. You have removed RS content with out discussion. While you have the right to contest content, you have unilaterally undone months of discussed content additions and changes. The editing on these pages has been open to anyone. Please join the discussion rather than undo months of work by other editors.(olive (talk) 05:44, 23 March 2013 (UTC))
I've reverted the massive change you made with out discussion. If you have concerns with the content please bring it here for discussion rather than make a unilateral change of this size. (olive (talk) 06:39, 23 March 2013 (UTC))
The RfC is right here [9]. I do not see consensus for the changes. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 06:56, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
Thanks.There was no consensus in that RfC.(olive (talk) 15:09, 23 March 2013 (UTC))

I oppose this version [10]. Firstly. "Transcendence: Healing and Transformation through Transcendental Meditation" is not a reliable source for giving the level of mainstream research. Secondly, I have doubts with the reliability of "Mosby's Complementary & Alternative Medicine". Thirdly,the Cochrane review (the gold standard) isn't mentioned prominently in a way that reflects it's total dominance in terms of weight. Braunwald's Heart Disease: A Textbook of Cardiovascular Medicine is being used in a way that I can't find any support of the text in the latest edition. It specifically says: "A systematic review of six RCTs of transcendental meditation failed to generate convincing evidence that meditation is an effective treatment of hypertension". Can someone please explain where the quote in the article is coming from. Finally Depression and Anxiety is not a core medical journal, nor is Psychological Bulletin. IRWolfie- (talk) 19:58, 23 March 2013 (UTC)

I've asked for more input from wikiproject medicine regulars as they are most familiar with MEDRS. IRWolfie- (talk) 20:24, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
Did you check the impact factors of Depression and Anxiety and Psychological Bulletin? Mosby's is on the Brandon/Hill list that MEDRS recommends. See the 2007 edition of Braunwald's page 1157. Shoot me an email, and I can send you a screen capture of the page. TimidGuy (talk) 20:56, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
I didn't ask for it's impact factor, I asked for it to be MEDRS compliant. The text was also written in a way to heavily imply these studies were related to cardiovascular disease. The study you added has 2 citations [11] is about anxiety, and also groups TM along with others. The other, [12] is also about meditation generally, 5 citations. Cochrane review, 87 citations. Mosby is not on [13], since it's not a journal, so I don't see why you would be using it for claiming a review. Google books says the text is from the alt med book "integrative cardiology": [14], so I'm a little surprised you say you can give me a screenshot. IRWolfie- (talk) 21:07, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
IRWolfie is correct; the current edition of Braunwald's Heart Disease is the 9th edition, released in 2012. In that book, the only reference I can find to Transcendental Meditation is in Chapter 51: "A systematic review of six RCTs of transcendental meditation failed to generate convincing evidence that meditation is an effective treatment of hypertension." If we're using Braunwald's textbook to source a positive statement about TM, then we need to change that right away. I don't know which edition of Braunwald TimidGuy is referring to; as best I can tell, no edition was released in 2007 (the 8th edition was released in 2008). In any case, we need to be using the current edition, not a previous edition from 2007 or whenever.

I haven't looked at the other sources yet, but based on this first check, I'm pretty concerned that we're misrepresenting our sources here. As an aside, Braunwald's Heart Disease goes on to state, at the conclusion of Chapter 51: "The CAM research community has a most unfortunate tendency to draw misleading conclusions from investigations into CAM." MastCell Talk 22:43, 23 March 2013 (UTC)

Addendum: Ah, now I get what IRWolfie is saying. TimidGuy, can you clarify whether the text in question, which you've represented as coming from Braunwald's Heart Disease, is in fact from Integrative Cardiology? MastCell Talk 22:48, 23 March 2013 (UTC)
Thanks, MastCell, for asking. The text is from the 8th edition of Braunwald's Heart Disease, page 1157. Amazon gives the date as 2007[15], but I checked the title page just now and it gives a copyright date of 2008, so that is likely correct. This was the current edition when I originally added it. The chapter is by John Vogel, a past president of the American Heart Association. He cites a 2006 independent RCT conducted at Cedars-Sinai Medical Center. The first author is Maura Paul-Labrador, and the principal investigator is Noel Bairey Merz, one of the nation's leading cardiologists. The study found an improvement in insulin resistance components of the metabolic syndrome and cardiac autonomic nervous system tone. TimidGuy (talk) 00:44, 24 March 2013 (UTC)
Can you please check your book. The exact same text is in Integrative cardiology. IRWolfie- (talk) 00:53, 24 March 2013 (UTC)
No surprise there, since Vogel took it almost verbatim from the study. TimidGuy (talk) 01:06, 24 March 2013 (UTC)
Also no surprise for the second reason that Vogel, one of the authors of Integrative Cardiology, is also one of the authors of the chapter in the 8th edition of Braunwald’s in which those same words appear. He is recycling the words. You can see what this edition has to say about TM and metabolic syndrome on Amazon.com. Do a search for Transcendental Meditation in the book. It’s on the lower right of the page: [16] EMP (talk 04:33, 24 March 2013 (UTC)
(edit conflict) I just searched for transcendental meditation in the 9th edition of Braunwald's Heart Disease (my e-copy is paywalled unfortunately). The only thing that came up was in Chapter 51 ("Complementary and Alternative Approaches to Management of Patients with Heart Disease", by Edzard Ernst): "A systematic review of six RCTs of transcendental meditation failed to generate convincing evidence that meditation is an effective treatment of hypertension", referenced to a 2004 article (PMID 15480084). The previous statement to which you refer, regardless of whether it was accurate at the time or not, now should not be used per the principle that we ought to only use the most recent editions of books to account for any changes the editors would have made to correct for errors.

If you would like our article to reference the 2006 source (and I would ask why, when meta-analyses and systematic reviews are available), then I would ask in the future that you point to either a free text version of the article or the PubMed link please. For others who would like to review the 2006 article to which TimidGuy refers, PMID 16772250 is it. NW (Talk) 01:10, 24 March 2013 (UTC)

The disputed edit removed references to four different meta-analyses. One of these meta-analyses included the Paul-Labrador study. TimidGuy (talk) 14:01, 24 March 2013 (UTC)

Can you clarify what your point is? We have two Cochrane reviews to summarize. This is good per WP:MEDRS. The latest Braunwald's Heart Disease: A Textbook of Cardiovascular Medicine complements the Cochrane reviews, but it's not necessary to use it. That is all we require. You have not justified your use of low cited articles in non-MEDRS journals. IRWolfie- (talk) 17:09, 24 March 2013 (UTC)

Sure, happy to clarify. I was answering NW's question, which was why use Paul-Labrador (a primary source) when meta-analyses are available. I pointed out that four different meta-analyses were also being referenced in the deleted material, one of which included the blood pressure finding in the Paul-Labrador study. TimidGuy (talk) 19:31, 24 March 2013 (UTC)
I don't see the significance of the Paul-Labrador study or whether it appeared in the meta-analyses or not. We defer to the most reliable meta-analyses; Cochrane reviews fitting the bill. The others are in non-MEDRS journals. IRWolfie- (talk) 19:39, 24 March 2013 (UTC)
Cochrane 2006 isn't a meta-analysis. Cochrane 2010 does include meta-analyses, but no TM studies are included in the meta-analyses. You may want to take a look at them. TimidGuy (talk) 19:56, 24 March 2013 (UTC)
You know I meant systematic reviews which often include meta-analyses; they aren't going to combine the small number of eligible studies (4 and 2). Both accepted TM in their inclusion criteria. IRWolfie- (talk) 20:40, 24 March 2013 (UTC)
Actually, no. Cochrane 2010 didn't accept a TM study in its inclusion criteria. And Cochrane 2006 only found one TM study that was on clinically diagnosed anxiety disorder. That means that between the two reviews a single TM study was analyzed. TimidGuy (talk) 15:31, 27 March 2013 (UTC)
I think what you mean is no TM study matched the criteria? If the studies are of poor quality it's not that surprising that most don't meet the selection criteria for the most rigorous journal for clinical efficacy. As such, the only correct and proper thing is to report that there is no evidence of efficacy. IRWolfie- (talk) 18:12, 27 March 2013 (UTC)
Actually, no. Cochrane 2006 gives a list of studies excluded, and neither is on TM. This is because their inclusion criterion was very narrow: individuals who had been clinically diagnosed with an anxiety disorder. They also excluded any study that wan't an RCT, but all TM studies on anxiety other than Raskin 1980 have been on trait anxiety, not anxiety disorders. So it's not true that TM studies were excluded from Cochrane 2006 due to poor quality. Same thing for Cochrane 2010 on ADHD. There is simply no research on TM and ADHD other than the small pilot study they note in their introduction. So the reason TM research was excluded in that case from their analyses was that it hasn't been done yet. As with Cochrane 2006, they don't list any TM studies among their excluded studies. (As a side note in response to your previous point, it is indeed often the case that meta-analyses combine as few as two studies. Examples are Ospina's TM/health education and TM/PMR meta-analyses and the meta-analyses in Cochrane 2010.) TimidGuy (talk) 10:03, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
I'm not convinced that trait anxiety is meaningfully different than anxiety disorder in this context. It sounds like Anxiety disorder is just a word for a diagnosed case of having strong trait anxiety? IRWolfie- (talk) 15:41, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
The WP article on Anxiety has a clear explanation of the distinction right in the lead. TimidGuy (talk) 19:36, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

From what I read, it appears that I am correct. Based on my own OR: anxiety disorder sounds like what a well designed study would look at since it is more clearly defined. So I see no issue with not including non-disorder trait anxiety (dubious clinical relevance anyway). IRWolfie- (talk) 10:00, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

Analysis of extensive edits by Doc James

Doc James’ extensive edits to this article in the last couple of days have eliminated a great deal of information that is critical to a balanced and accurate understanding of TM research. He has deleted over a dozen refs that are MEDRS-compliant and are more up-to-date and relevant than the older set of references that he has moved, along with inaccurate content, to the first sentence of the Research section. This creates an inaccurate and lopsided picture of TM research. I would like to review why this is so. This post must be a little long, owing to the many references affected, and the complexity of a couple of issues. I will break it into two parts: 1) A review of the valuable references that have been deleted; 2) An explanation of why the old references, brought again to the forefront by Doc J, while worthy of inclusion in the article, should definitely not dominate the section and replace the newer references. EMP (talk 22:34, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

Part 1: Valuable refs deleted

(Re: above post, "Analysis of extensive edits by DJ")

a) From the sentence, “Research reviews of the effects of the Transcendental Meditation technique have yielded results ranging from inconclusive to clinically significant,” Doc has deleted five relevant, current, and high quality refs as defined by MEDRS [all are either medical textbooks (from reputed publishers), systematic reviews, or meta-analyses]:

i) The 2011 medical text, Primer on the Autonomic Nervous System, Biaggioni, Robertson et al. [17] This is a standard medical text, reporting relevant information on TM re: hypertension and psychology.
ii) The 2012 Chen et al systematic review on anxiety, in a strong journal (listed as a core psychology journal, good impact factor) [18]. (Note: No implication had been made in the text that the refs refer to cardiovascular disease. The text said only “Research reviews on the effects of the Transcendental Meditation technique have ranged from inconclusive to clinically significant.”) Significant results from three TM studies are reported.
iii) The 2009 Devries et al medical textbook, Integrative Cardiology, published by Oxford Univ Press [19]. Devries has a long list of publications in top journals, including the AHA journal, Circulation. This ref reports clinically significant results related to the subject.
iv) The 2012 Sedlemeier, et al, meta-analysis on TM and factors relating to mental health [20]. This appeared in a core psychology journal with a high ranking (impact factor: 14) and reports several significant results. Note 1: This study considers the issue of publication bias, and in a statistical analysis utilizing funnel plots noted some indications of an upward bias in TM research, indicating the possibility that some studies with small effects and small sample sizes had been withheld from publication. However, they also reported that a fail-safe analysis found it is unlikely that these unpublished studies would have nullified the results found in the meta-analysis. Note 2: In the introduction, Sedlemeier makes some critical comments about TM research, but found 36 TM studies meeting their quality standards for inclusion, from which they reported significant effect sizes regarding trait anxiety and several other categories.
v) The 2008 medical text, Braunwald’s Heart Disease, 8th edition, referencing a 2006 RCT by Paul-Labrador, et al, on TM and blood pressure that was published in the AMA’s Archives of Internal Medicine. The valid point has been made that there is now a 9th edition of Braunwald’s, with a chapter on alt med by a different author (E Ernst) who does not mention this same study, but rather his own 2004 systematic review (the Canter and Ernst 2004 syst review on hypertension). However, the Paul-Labrador RCT has been cited in many research reviews, including this one by Epel, et al, which appeared in the Annals of the New York Academy of Sciences: PMID 19735238 (p.46). I suggest substituting this latter ref for the 8th edition of Braunwald’s. Paul-Labrador is also included in a systematic review by Nolan. See: [21](p. 390).

b) Content and ref deleted: “there have been 340 peer-reviewed studies on TM.” [22]: Yes, this is a popular book, but the author, NE Rosenthal, is a respected medical researcher, and the publisher well-established. No reason why a simple (and relevant) fact like this cannot be referenced to an author with this kind of standing, in this venue.

c) Content and ref deleted: “TM is one of the most widely researched meditation techniques”: One of the two deleted refs for this is unquestionably reliable: a review article in the Annals of the NY Academy of Sciences See: [23] The second ref is also compliant: Mosby’s is an textbook of alternative medicine that, as mentioned by another ed., is listed in the Brandon-Hill list recommended in MEDRS.

d) Content and ref deleted: a sentence on the several areas of active TM research, including cardiovascular research and the financial support for it from the NIH. This is ref’d to an established newspaper. MEDRS allows for this kind of ref in reporting social/political information relating to research: “The high-quality popular press can be a good source for social, biographical, current-affairs, and historical information in a medical article.” EMP (talk 22:43, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

That's a lot to tackle at once. Addressing only a few points: for A.v, you don't get to remove a ref solely because you don't like what the current edition has to say. Braunwald's is a pretty good source - definitely much weighter than Integrative Cardiology - and it was staunchly defended when the old edition with its much more positive assessment was quoted. Now that the new edition takes a less glowing approach, you can't suddenly decide to swap out the textbook and replace it with a more positive reference. That looks really cynical and manipulative, although I'm sure that's not your intent.

As to point b), let's be careful to distinguish between 340 peer-reviewed studies and 340 peer-reviewed publications. A single study can generate multiple publications. And, of course, as the AHRQ noted with regard to meditation research, multiple publication is a problem: "We identified and excluded from the review a considerable number of multiple publications (n = 108). In some instances, the same study was published in two separate journal articles without full cross reference, a practice of redundant publication that has been considered scientific misconduct."

By emphasizing the quantity of studies conducted on TM over their quality, we're falling into the trap described in the AHRQ review: "Some investigators have claimed that there are many empirical studies that have shown that meditation practices are effective at treating stress-related states, including reducing heart rate, breathing, and blood pressure. In addition, previous literature reviews have noted the seemingly large number of research papers that purport to show the therapeutic benefit of meditation practices. This review has shown that there are startlingly few scientific studies that could be statistically combined to provide evidence on the physiological and neuropsychological effects of meditation practices." MastCell Talk 23:40, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

Just a short comment to note that Ernst's 2004 systematic review referenced in Braunwald's is already being cited in this article and in the TM research article. (Unfortunately, that early review doesn't include several of the later rigorous RCTs, including the independent study published by the AMA and one published by the AHA.) We could add the Braunwald's citation to the original citation. TimidGuy (talk) 09:40, 26 March 2013 (UTC)
Excellent distinction regarding 340 peer-reviewed publications. If one looks at the list it includes research reviews and comments as well as studies. In any case, the point is that there's a large body of research on TM, and many sources make this point, including AHRQ. Since this point is often noted in the literature, I don't see any problem in making that same point in a general introductory sentence about the research. But probably with less specificity. TimidGuy (talk) 09:45, 26 March 2013 (UTC)
Good points, TG.
@Mastcell: Point well taken about the latest (2011) edition of the Braunwald’s medical textbook. I was in a bit of a hurry to wrap up my post, and should have been clearer. I have no problem with using that latest version of the textbook, but of course to reference the first part of that sentence which describes the studies that did not find conclusive results for TM. I was only suggesting that for the second part of the sentence, which refers to the significant results found for TM, that a current research review referencing that widely cited 2006 RCT could be cited instead of the 2008 edition of Braunwald’s, if there is an objection to using that earlier version of the textbook. EMP (talk 17:25, 26 March 2013 (UTC)
It sounds like you wish to indirectly cite a single RCT. Is that a correct summary? IRWolfie- (talk) 11:11, 27 March 2013 (UTC)
No. I would directly cite the research review mentioned. EMP (talk 05:47, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

Part 2: Doc J's lead sentence to section not well supported by refs

(Re: above post, "Analysis of extensive edits by DJ")

2) The lead sentence to the Research section, written and brought back by Doc J, is no longer adequately supported by the references provided. This lead sentence reads, “Independent systematic reviews have not found health benefits for TM beyond relaxation and health education,” and has four references. Let’s take them one by one:

a) a 2006 Cochrane review of research on meditation and anxiety [24] : very narrow in scope. At first glance this might seem promising, but in fact, due to the authors’ decision to consider only research on persons with formally diagnosed anxiety disorder, they only included two studies, and only one 1980 study on TM, (with 30 subjects and just nine TM practitioners). Because of this, the review excluded 75 studies on TM and trait anxiety. A 2012 systematic review (Chen, mentioned above)[[25]], and a 2012 meta-analysis (Sedlmeier, also mentioned earlier) both found significant results regarding TM and anxiety. Sedlmeier identified seven studies on TM and trait anxiety that they found of acceptable quality for inclusion in their meta-analysis (see Sedlmeier, Table 3) [26].

b) The 2007 AHRQ-funded systematic review by Ospina et al [27] : This reference not only does not support the sentence that it is purported to (“Independent systematic reviews have not found health benefits for TM beyond relaxation and health education”), it contradicts it. This review found TM to be more efficacious in reducing hypertension than relaxation (but found no difference compared to health ed). I quote from a 2013 research review, referring to this AHRQ study: “In a meta-analysis of the effects of meditation on adults diagnosed with hypertension, transcendental meditation, . . . was more effective than progressive muscle relaxation in producing a clinically significant reduction in blood pressure (Ospina, 2007).” [28] (See also p. 121 of the AHRQ report [PMID 17764203].)

c) The 2004 Canter and Ernst systematic review on TM and hypertension [29] : more recent reviews present a different picture . This nine-year old review concluded that, “There is at present insufficient good-quality evidence to conclude whether or not TM has a cumulative positive effect on blood pressure.” More up-to-date reviews have found otherwise. A 2008 meta-analysis by Anderson published in the American Journal of Hypertension [30], for example, found a significant results regarding hypertension in TM subjects. Note: some editors have suggested that because Anderson disclosed (openly, in the published study) that the research was partially funded by Howard Settle, a TM practitioner, that this high-quality study should be disregarded. However, MEDRS states that “Editors should not perform a detailed academic peer review. Do not reject a high-quality type of study due to personal objections to the study's inclusion criteria, references, funding sources, or conclusions.” [31]. The results of this meta-analysis are referred to and cited by a 2011 research review in the Journal of Clinical Hypertension [32] and several other review articles or medical textbooks (see Kiefer (2009) p. 552 [33], Kok (2013) p. 31 [34], Nahas (2008) p. 1532 [35], Antonucci (2010)(medical textbook) p. 169 [36], Biaggioni and Robertson (2011) (medical textbook noted in 1 (i) above) p. 298 [37], Walsh (2011), p. 8 [38]. It is not up to Wikipedia editors to overrule the decisions of these MEDRS-compliant publications.

d) The 2003 Canter and Ernst systematic review of TM and cognitive function[39] : again, more recent reviews present a different picture. This 10-year old study concluded no “specific or cumulative” effects from TM on cognitive function, but more recent reviews report otherwise. For example, the same 2007 AHRQ study that is earlier referenced contradicts this conclusion, noting that TM produced improvement in verbal creativity (Ospina, p. 187). And the 2012 systematic review by Sedlmeier, published in a very strong journal (Impact Factor: 14.4), found significant results in TM subjects re: learning, memory, and self-realization. A 2007 psychotherapy textbook also found significant results [40].

I would appeal to the fairness of the editors on this page, including Doc James, to allow the restoration of the valuable content and refs recently struck from the article--which I should add made their point while acknowledging and including the content and refs that have now been placed at the forefront by Doc in his edits. The newer content and refs, for the reasons explained, also deserve proper acknowledgement as per WP:NPOV and MEDRS. EMP (talk 22:52, 25 March 2013 (UTC)

While we could try a RfC and ask the community at large which version they feel more accurately reflects the best available evidence. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 04:03, 27 March 2013 (UTC)
It sounds like you are trying to ignore the Cochrane reviews (one of the gold standard sources) based on your own original opinion of their selection criteria (a decision to consider only research on persons diagnosed anxiety disorder sounds sensible to me but it's irrelevant). The Cochrane reviews etc conclude one thing, you claim the opposite using non-core medical journals. Was it really necessary to make new three sections saying the same thing? IRWolfie- (talk) 14:10, 27 March 2013 (UTC)
No, I am not trying to ignore the Cochrane review. As I said In the last line of the first para of my post above, [41] the refs moved by Doc J to a position of total dominance in the section are “worthy of inclusion in the article.” And in the last para of my post [42] I noted that even when I added some new RS’s this past year, I retained the older refs, including Cochrane.
Please also note that in my post above, I only referred to one Cochrane review, the one on anxiety. Yes, I am suggesting that its inclusion criteria were narrow, but, again, no, I am not suggesting that it be excluded or ignored. (In fact, I once complimented Doc for bringing this good quality ref to these pages.) However, as explained above in detail, I am suggesting that we also consider more recent research that is also MEDRS compliant. This Cochrane review only considered research on formally diagnosed anxiety disorder, a small subset of the total population suffering from anxiety. I am suggesting that other research, including reviews published subsequent to this Cochrane review, should also be considered. You imply that “non-core medical journals” are not MEDRS compliant. This is incorrect. A ref, especially in the field of anxiety, a psychological condition, need not appear in a core medical journal in order to be MEDRS compliant. The review that Doc deleted and which I am asking to be restored is a gold standard publication also—a formal meta-analysis published in one of the top journals of psychology (IF: 14)[43]. EMP (talk 20:40, 27 March 2013 (UTC)
The last Cochrane review is only two years old. Find me a source that compares Psychological Bulletin to be in the same tier as the Cochrane database in terms of clinical efficacy and I might give this opinion some weight; I don't think it is true. Then you need to explain why you want to use a review with only three citations. IRWolfie- (talk) 09:58, 28 March 2013 (UTC)


I added the reference to the "scientific statement" by the American Heart Association in the journal Hypertension. Sparaig2 (talk) 00:23, 26 April 2013 (UTC)

Sources

It might be helpful to come up with some way of weighting and appraising sources. While there are a number of published studies, systematic reviews, and meta-analyses, not all of these are created equal. It might be most helpful to start by identifying the best secondary sources available, and go from there. In my view, the top-tier evidence-based resources in terms of systematic review/meta-analysis include:

  • AHRQ (per TimidGuy, the AHRQ is in the process of updating their review of TM)
  • Cochrane Library (note that Cochrane is also in the process of updating its review of TM for the primary prevention of cardiovascular disease, which will be very useful once it's completed.

I don't think it's particularly controversial to weight AHRQ and Cochrane heavily; I suppose I could find supporting evidence, but hopefully we can agree that these are two of the most highly esteemed groups when it comes to reviewing and synthesizing medical evidence.

Secondly, we can consider top-tier medical textbooks. In regard to cardiology, Braunwald's seems to be universally agreed upon as a high-quality source, and has been cited in the article for quite some time (albeit in the form of an outdated edition).

Which other sources should we start with? MastCell Talk 17:09, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

Thanks, MastCell, for returning to the discussion. I've already made some related points in response to your similar comment on the TM research talk page. Should we maybe move this discussion there? Also, note that I responded to you above regarding Braunwald's 9th. The systematic review Ernst cites in his chapter is his 2004 review that's already being cited in this article and in the TM research article. We could add the Braunwald's citation. (Note that this early review doesn't include several of the later rigorous RCTs, including the independent study published by the AMA and a study published by the AHA.) Thanks for letting us know about the new Cochrane review. I was unaware of that. One thing we need to keep in mind is that a lot of the research on TM isn't clinical, which is the focus of Cochrane and AHRQ. TimidGuy (talk) 18:00, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
It should be discussed here since we are discussing this article (and most of the discussion has already taken place here). IRWolfie- (talk) 18:04, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
I don't care. I just wish MastCell would take the time to read my responses to his comments. (He had already started the same discussion in the TM research article.) But it does seem like the other venue is more appropriate, since that's where all the research is discussed. This article just has a very general summary of the TM research article. Anyway, we'll see what he says. TimidGuy (talk) 19:42, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
I apologize; I have read your responses, along with everything else here and at Talk:Transcendental Meditation research. This page has become so filled with screen-busting, detail-dense posts that I'm finding it virtually unworkable in terms of actually discussing individual, concrete questions of sourcing and content. Perhaps I'm alone in that regard, in which case feel free to ignore me, but my intent here was to try to focus the discussion back on first principles: which are the best-quality sources in this area and what do they say? I know we've discussed some of these sources, but I'm hoping we can do so in more organized and hopefully productive way, hence the new section. MastCell Talk 20:55, 28 March 2013 (UTC)
Thanks much, MastCell. Yes, this is a good way to proceed. I like doing things systematically. I suggest we first get consensus on the "which" and then after that fill in the "what." I'll create a list in reverse chronological order, going back 8 years. We'll start with a list of the systematic reviews and/or meta-analyses. We'll note how many studies in each and whether it's a systematic review, meta-analysis, or both. I'm pretty much familiar with all of them, so can quickly generate a list. I'll try to do that early tomorrow morning. Otherwise, I'll do it Saturday morning. EMP also has a pretty clear idea of the list. TimidGuy (talk) 00:19, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
Don't do that. It'll make things hard to go through. Instead, why not propose a single sentence, and show the sources you wish to use. One sentence at a time? IRWolfie- (talk) 11:08, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

Systematic reviews and meta-analyses since 2005

Forthcoming reviews:

  • Cocrhane 2013, systematic review and meta-analysis, ? studies
  • AHRQ 2013, systematic review and meta-analysis, 8 studies in draft version (meta-analyses are across types of meditation)

Current reviews:

  • Brook 2013 [44] AHA report
  • Sedlmeier 2012 [45] 22582738, systematic review and meta-analysis, 36 studies
  • Chen 2012 [46] 22700446, systematic review and meta-analysis, 3 studies
  • Anderson 2011[47] 21773016, systematic review, 1 study
  • Cochrane 2010[48] 20556767, systematic review and meta-analysis, 0 studies
  • Black 2009[49] 19706568, systematic review, 4 studies (this pediatric review examines studies outside the scope of AHRQ and Cochrane due to the age of subjects)
  • Anderson 2008[50] 18311126, systematic review and meta-analysis, 9 studies
  • Nolan 2008[51] 18677161, systematic review and meta-analysis, 1 study (meta-analysis is across types of meditation)
  • Rainforth 2007[52] 18350109, systematic review and meta-analysis, 6 studies (leading authors are affiliated with Maharishi U)
  • AHRQ 2007[53] 17764203, systematic review and meta-analysis, 15 studies (now archived as no longer current[54])
  • Paradies 2006[55] 16599387, systematic review, 6 studies
  • Cochrane 2006[56] 16437509, systematic review, 1 study

I still need to count up the number of studies in some of the reviews. I'll also add links to the abstracts, or to the pdf if available. TimidGuy (talk) 11:11, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

We can take off Varvogli and Mahagita—I do not see them in the articles at this time. I believe V was taken out because the journal published in was not considered compliant. And of course, the first two, Cochrane 2013 and AHRQ 2013 are not out yet. EMP (talk 18:59, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
I see that Mahagita does report significant and noteworthy results for TM research and as such it would seem worthy of inclusion. However, this paper appears to be a narrative review. One other small point: Sedlmeier (2012) appears to be a meta-analysis only (not also a systematic review). EMP (talk 17:33, 1 April 2013 (UTC)
Mahagita lists the databases searched and the search terms used, such that his methodology is repeatable. I thought that would qualify it as a systematic review, though I don't see that he appraises quality. Sedlmeier also describes his systematic and repeatable process of selection, but also assesses quality. And he describes the criteria by which he excluded a large number of studies. Plus, his meta-analyses represent a rigorous synthesis of the data. I can't think of any reason that Sedlmeier wouldn't be characterized as a systematic review. TimidGuy (talk) 10:52, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
I've removed Mahagita from this list because it doesn't appraise quality, and we'll treat it as a narrative review. If anyone would like me to email you some of these that you may not have access to, please shoot me an email. TimidGuy (talk) 15:27, 2 April 2013 (UTC)
I was interested in Rainforth 2007, because I believe that there are no published papers that compare TM to other forms of meditation (such as Mindfulness and Vipashyana) in any meaningful way. However, the abstract does not mention TM at all, only relaxation techniques (TM is not primarily a relaxation technique, but a technique that expands consciousness and reduces stored stresses). It looks like Rainforth 2007 is a metastudy that, if it includes TM at all, lumps it in with other meditation techniques. Therefore, I don't see it as a relevant source for TM articles. Perhaps someone with institutional access to the actual paper can describe how it evaluates TM for HRV and establish it as relevant. David Spector (talk) 18:23, 8 May 2013 (UTC)

Comments

Not sure why the number of studies in a systematic review is significant? The whole purpose of a systematic review is to look at all available trials that pertain to a specific question and meet certain quality criteria. If one uses lower cut offs of quality one is able to include more trials which potentially makes the conclusions less not more accurate. A better question is which of these systematic reviews are done by researchers and organizations independent of TM. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 11:49, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
Agree. TG can you list which of the above reviews are independent of TM organizations? TG, you also haven't included the DOI or journal name, which is important for MEDRS/WEIGHT considerations. IRWolfie- (talk) 11:59, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
I'd like to review these but I need PMIDs for each study mentioned. Agree with others that the number of studies included in the final analysis is irrelevant. It often happens that there can be hundreds of potential primary sources to review but once the study scope and quality cutoff criteria are applied the actual number of eligible studies drops to single digits, and that's exactly as desired. Zad68 13:31, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
Adding, I also agree with the others here that this Talk page discussion has lost its focus, what exact article content change are we discussing at this point? Zad68 13:32, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
Patience, please. Planning to add links or PMIDs or whatever, as I said above. My time is limited. Regarding number of studies, reviews typically have non-quality-related inclusion criteria, and if only a single small study meets those criteria (e.g., Cocrhane 2006), I feel it's important to be transparent about that so we don't overgeneralize the results. TimidGuy (talk) 14:04, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
Anxiety disorder is very general, and is an umbrella term. If it is not a disorder it is not a medical issue. The Cochrane 2009 review uses this as its selection criteria, which makes sense. IRWolfie- (talk) 14:14, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
Just to re-emphasize a point made by James above, the number of trials included in a systematic review or meta-analysis is not a marker of its quality. More rigorous systematic reviews often exclude a number of low-quality trials (which seem fairly numerous in this field). If anything, higher-quality systematic reviews may include fewer trials for that reason. I understand that high-quality systematic reviews generally ask very specific questions, and we should be clear about that, but not at the expense of "downgrading" the highest-quality evidence. MastCell Talk 19:11, 29 March 2013 (UTC)
I'm sorry, I didn't intend to say or imply that there's a correlation between the number of studies and quality. I wasn't intending to downgrade; rather I was saying we shouldn't misuse them by overgeneralizing. But my fault for getting into the "what" when I myself had suggested we first do the "which." How about if we leave the numbers in for later reference? TimidGuy (talk) 22:03, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

Professional and academic books

I think it's fine to start with the systematic reviews and meta-analyses, but in terms of weight, I think that these represent, at best, only half of the picture here. MEDRS also gives highest priority (i.e., same level as meta-analyses and systematic reviews) to “professional and academic books written by experts in a field and from a respected publisher”; see 2nd para here [57]. In addition, MEDRS places narrative reviews fairly high in its hierarchy of evidence quality [58].

Here I’ll just list the books and leave the narrative reviews for another time. To make it easier to get the gist of each one, I give links to the cites in the article, most of which have a summary quotation. Note: If the source finds inconclusive results, I mention that below; otherwise significant results are reported in each one. (I may add one or two more, but this list is pretty complete.)

April 18: World cat counts added. (If there is more than one edition, I give the number of libraries stocking any edition.)--EMP (talk 18:53, 18 April 2013 (UTC)

  • Italo Biaggioni, ed. (2011). Primer on the Autonomic Nervous System. Academic Press [59]--627
  • Peter Libby, et al, eds (2011). Braunwald's Heart Disease: A Textbook of Cardiovascular Medicine, Saunders Elsevier [60]--617
  • Michelle B Riba, et al, eds (2012). Psychiatry and heart disease : the mind, brain, and heart, Wiley-Blackwell [61]--88
  • Stephen Devries, ed. (2011). Integrative Cardiology. Oxford University Press [62]--261
  • Vicki Kotsirilos (2011). A Guide to Evidence-Based Integrative and Complementary Medicine. Elsevier. [63]--121
  • Philip David Zelazo (2007). The Cambridge handbook of consciousness. Cambridge University Press. [64] --540
  • Ellen A. Dornelas, ed. (2012). Stress Proof the Heart: Behavioral Interventions for Cardiac Patients. Springer. [65]--246
  • Shane Lopez (2009). Oxford Handbook of Positive Psychology. Oxford University Press. [66]--561
  • Roger Walsh ed. (2007). Corsini, Raymond. Current Psychotherapies (8th ed.). Brooks/Cole. [67]--1404
  • Peter Tyrer (2008). Cambridge Textbook of Effective Treatments in Psychiatry. Cambridge University Press. [68]--153
  • William O'Donohue (2008). Evidence-Based Adjunctive Treatments. Academic Press. [69]--234
  • Ronald Carlstedt (2009). Handbook of Integrative Clinical Psychology, Psychiatry, and Behavioral Medicine: Perspectives, Practices, and Research. Springer. [70]--98
  • Luciano L'Abate (2010). Low-Cost Approaches to Promote Physical and Mental Health: Theory, Research, and Practice. Springer. [71]--370
  • Gerard Bodeker (2007). Traditional, Complementary and Alternative Medicine: Policy and Public Health Perspectives. Imperial College Press. [72]--572
  • Lyn Freeman (2009) Mosby's Complementary & Alternative Medicine: A Research-Based Approach. Mosby Elsevier [73][74] --918
  • John Vogel, Mitchell Krucoff, ed. (2007). Integrative Cardiology: Complementary and Alternative Medicine for the Heart. McGraw-Hill. [75]--91

Last:

  • Deane H. Shapiro (1984). Meditation: Classic and Contemporary Perspectives. Aldine Publishing Company. [76] (historical discussion re: TM research)--546

--EMP (talk 22:27, 9 April 2013 (UTC)

I still don't get it. Why are you listing these books? Are you proposing to perform a review of your own? We can't do a proper review on wikipedia; that would be original research. Why would we use any of these sources if we have cochrane reviews? Cochrane reviews are the gold standard; the most authorative. Start with the most authoritative sources and work from that (we already have the Cochrane reviews so we are pretty much done). IRWolfie- (talk) 23:09, 9 April 2013 (UTC)
Per MastCell's suggestion above. TimidGuy (talk) 09:36, 10 April 2013 (UTC)
On what basis were these works identified as the best available? MastCell Talk 19:04, 10 April 2013 (UTC)
Great question. The books used in the TM research article conform to the points for books outlined in MEDRS. These guidelines mention “medical textbooks” as authoritative, and also describe, in the opening section, “professional and academic books written by experts in a field and from a respected publisher” as “ideal sources” [77]. In the later subsection on books [78] it reiterates the importance of the standing of the publisher and also mentions, 2) target audience (best: postgraduates and professionals; less authoritative: undergrads), and 3) timeliness: less than five years old is best. I believe all of the texts that I have included in the list above (which includes approx 90% the books in the TM research article) qualify according to these criteria. Re: the publishers, for example, half on the list are published either by Springer or Elsevier (mentioned specifically in MEDRS [79]), and the others are mostly leading scientific publishers. Academic Press is an imprint of Elsevier. Mosby’s Complementary and Alternative Medicine, in addition to being published in cooperation with Elsevier, is listed in the Brandon/Hill list of core sources, which includes books as well as journals [80]. Re: date: all are within the past 5-6 years, except the last one which is included only for its historical content. Re: audience: I have not included one text on the list (Harrington [81]) because the audience would seem to be undergrad. This source is used in the article only as a supplementary ref, alongside a more authoritative one. Other than that, the audience for these books appears to be either professional or postgrad. Does this help answer your question? And on a related subject--the list of research reviews above--would it be helpful if someone pulled together summaries of what each one says? EMP (talk 22:01, 11 April 2013 (UTC)
"Stress Proof the Heart" is a medical textbook? Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 23:34, 11 April 2013 (UTC)
Well, technically yes. But is it appropriate to treat Stress Proof the Heart the same way we treat a recognized gold-standard textbook like Braunwald's Cardiology? The former doesn't appear to have garnered any reviews, mentions, etc. in the mainstream scholarly literature. I'm not sure how this list of textbooks was compiled, nor do I think it makes sense to treat all of these textbooks as equal when the relevant expert community clearly does not. MastCell Talk 01:19, 12 April 2013 (UTC)
Eager to know what tool/s you use to find reviews, mentions, etc. in the mainstream scholarly literature. Thanks! Also, how do we weight medical books in relationship to systematic reviews/meta-analyses? See discussion of this in MEDRS Talk archive.[82] TimidGuy (talk) 10:40, 12 April 2013 (UTC)
Perhaps not directly relevant, but the authors of the section are psychologists, and so is the editor, isn't that a bit out of their expertise? The section of the book about meditation is uncited, the sections of the book which are cited appear to be authors self citing. IRWolfie- (talk) 16:37, 12 April 2013 (UTC)
Are we looking at the same book? In the 2012 edition of Stress Proof the Heart: Behavioral Interventions for Cardiac Patients (as far as I know the only edition), Chapter 11 on meditation and CVD contains dozens of citations, many of them to systematic or narrative reviews [83]. The points on TM research are cited to reviews. I do not see any self-citation on the part of the authors of this chapter. By the way, if we took self-citation is a criterion for exclusion, then we would remove Braunwald's (2011), since the only source Ernst cites for TM is his own 2004 research review [84]. EMP (talk 18:41, 13 April 2013 (UTC)
You have confused having references with being cited. IRWolfie- (talk) 17:24, 14 April 2013 (UTC)
  • To answer TimidGuy's question, it's fairly straightforward to identify the best-quality and most widely used textbooks for purposes of WP:WEIGHT. I usually look for textbooks that have been widely reviewed (a number of high-profile medical journals routinely review textbooks), and I try to get a sense of how widely a textbook is carried in medical libraries (personally, I usually do this by asking the medical librarian at my institution, but it can be done online or a editor with relevant real-life expertise in library science (e.g. User:DGG) could be consulted. I've requested a copy of Stress Proof The Heart, which my institution's medical library doesn't carry; it's apparently rather hard to come by (in contrast, Braunwald's is on the shelf). Do those seem like reasonable ways to look for and appraise the weight of medical textbooks? MastCell Talk 21:31, 13 April 2013 (UTC)
Thanks, MastCell. This seems reasonable. We can use WorldCat[85] to get an idea how many libraries hold a particular medical book. What tool would I use to find reviews of medical books? Or for simplicity should we rely on WorldCat for our measure? TimidGuy (talk) 10:14, 14 April 2013 (UTC)
World cat counts added to book list. (If there is more than one edition, I give the number of libraries stocking any edition.)--EMP (talk 18:53, 18 April 2013 (UTC)

Reviews for textbook added April 16

  • Psychiatry and heart disease : the mind, brain, and heart--Michelle B Riba et al, eds. Wiley-Blackwell (2012) [86]

Reviews at [87] -- EMP (talk 19:39, 16 April 2013 (UTC)

I'm pretty sure that what you've linked to are not at all the kinds of reviews we're looking for, those are advertising blurbs, we're looking for independent reviews in well-respected published journals.

Also I checked out WorldCat to see what the circulation level is for this book as compared to popular medical textbooks, here's what I found (listed as Title - number of copies listed as available on WorldCat):

  • Psychiatry (William Alanson White Psychiatric Foundation) - 949
  • Rudolph's Pediatrics - 589
  • Cardiology (Julian) - 362
  • Surgery (Jarrell) - 239
  • Psychiatry and heart disease : the mind, brain, and heart - 88 copies
Hope that's helpful. Zad68 20:08, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for finding those reviews; they sound promising. I agree with Zad68 that we should look at the actual reviews in toto rather than the blurbs excerpted by the publisher, but it's a good start. So let's talk about Psychiatry and Heart Disease. Here's what I read in that textbook:

Although there are many claims for its [TM's] effectiveness, the research tends to be out of date, with few RCTs in clinical populations. TM itself has been the subject of controversies and lawsuits.

Curiously, our article on Transcendental Meditation research ignores that pithy overview, instead choosing to quote a later sentence:

Evidence of concentration meditation’s impact on cardiovascular risk factors is suggested by results from a recent RCT of Transcendental Meditation with an active control condition on subjects with stable CHD. The TM group had beneficial changes in blood pressure, insulin resistance and heart rate variability, compared to the health education-control condition.

Is there some reason that the latter quote (describing the results of a single trial) was chosen in preference to the former quote (which summarizes the current state of TM research and thus seems more generally useful)? MastCell Talk 20:20, 16 April 2013 (UTC)
Seems like when we come to the step in our analysis where we summarize what each source says, we could summarize both points: While TM research tends to be out of date, with few trials in clinical populations, a 2006 study published in Archives of Internal Medicine found beneficial changes in blood pressure, insulin resistance and heart rate variability. Then we can consider this statement in the context of all the others, and summarize en toto.. There are a number of research reviews that cover this particular study, including a systematic review/meta-analysis on heart rate variability.
For the sake of expedience, is it necessary to find reviews for every medical book that's sourced? When it comes to weighting medical books published by major academic presses, would it be sufficient simply to use Worldcat (taking into account a recently published book would be in fewer libraries than one that has gone through many editions)? Or maybe we could turn to reviews if there's some disagreement on weighting a particular source? TimidGuy (talk) 09:40, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
@Zad: Thanks, that is indeed helpful to know what ballpark figures to look for. The couple books in our list above that I checked on Worldcat were in this range. I guess the next step is to add Worldcat numbers for each book. TimidGuy (talk) 10:54, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
@MastCell: Thanks, good catch. I had simply missed that earlier quote which expressed the author’s general views on TM research. I see this as another step forward in laying out all the significant sources on the table and taking a good look at what each one says, ignoring no major points. Good idea to then summarize each one. I think TG has accurately summarized this source above.
I agree that if we use reviews, full reviews are more useful. That way, we can see if the reviewer has any reservations. Problem is, full reviews of these kinds of books aren’t so easily accessible. However, PubMedCentral does carry a full review of Stress Proof the Heart: Behavioral Interventions for Cardiac Patients: [88]. But as a general rule, I agree that there must be a simpler way to fine-tune our estimate of the weight of a given book (given a respected publisher and authors), such as a WorldCat count. EMP (talk 18:14, 17 April 2013 (UTC)
World cat counts added to book list. (If there is more than one edition, I give the number of libraries stocking any edition.) EMP (talk 18:58, 18 April 2013 (UTC)

Concerns about the use of sources

  • I have very serious concerns about the use of sources in this article. Having looked carefully at a few sources, I've found them used in a way that is, at best, questionable and sometimes outright misleading. Psychiatry and Heart Disease was selectively quoted. Braunwald's Cardiology was actually a citation to an outdated edition which just happened to be much more positive about TM than the current edition. (When this was pointed out, an editor suggested citing the outdated edition anyway, which leaves me sort of speechless). The AHA statement is similarly selectively quoted in a way which contradicts the authors' actual conclusions.

    I'm going to formally request outside input at the Medicine WikiProject regarding the way we present the purported health benefits of TM. Based on the above spot-checks, the article would benefit from a detailed source-by-source audit, and would also benefit from additional outside input, particularly from editors without direct connections to the TM movement. MastCell Talk 21:51, 27 April 2013 (UTC)

@MastCell: I would point out that when we were made aware that a newer edition of Braunwald’s Cardiology had come out, I was the editor who added this book to the article: [89]. As to the validity of keeping an older text as a ref alongside the newer version: yes, at first glance doesn’t make sense. But in this case, it is not obvious, for the reasons noted in greater detail above: 1) The author of the comparable chapter in the earlier edition has greater expertise in cardiovascular research; 2) this author surprisingly draws on research that is more recent and more widely cited. I do not see anything in WP:MEDRS or WP:RS indicating that an earlier edition of a textbook is necessarily obsolete. It does prefer sources have been published within five years, and this is a 2008 book. Could not a textbook be considered a kind of research review? MEDRS states: “do not automatically give more weight to the review that happens to have been published more recently, as this is recentism.” However, I will not restore this reference unless there is consensus that this should be done. EMP (talk 05:56, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
I, too, have very serious concerns about the use of sources in this article. Having carefully looked at the use of the Canter/Ernst reviews, the use of Ospina, and the use of the Cochrane reviews, I've come to the conclusion that an editor has deliberately inserted a number of falsehoods and misrepresentations in the article. I listed some of these instances in a comment in the thread above[90]. I really hope neutral editors show up who will be willing to look at all the sources, not just those favorable to TM. I am also seriously concerned about the peremptory deletion of a number of research reviews, including systematic reviews/meta-analyses such as Sedlmeier 2012. (By the way, I acted quickly and added the conclusion to the AHA report based on the concern raised. But my own concerns that were raised above were completely ignored.) TimidGuy (talk) 10:30, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
It is self evident that an older book is obsolete if a newer edition contradicts it. You are trying to analyze a textbook while not being a medical doctor and making claims based on your original research, that's generally a bad idea. IRWolfie- (talk) 10:48, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
There are a multitude of reasons why a new edition of a book might leave out something from a prior version and yet still other reasons why it might be useful to include the older version as a reference and that editing decision has nothing to do with original research. Also making random guesses about an editor's real life occupation is wrong and has no place in a talk page discussion. As the Essjay debacle has amply demonstrated, anyone can claim to be a PhD or MD on Wikipedia and we take those claims or lack thereof at face value and move forward in discussions based on their content, not personal information.--KeithbobTalk 19:54, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
We are not going to use an outdated edition of a medical textbook, absent some really compelling justification. And so far, the only justification I'm hearing is that a subset of editors find the old edition "better" than the current edition, which isn't exactly compelling. MastCell Talk 17:36, 29 April 2013 (UTC)
I am assuming that all editors are here in a good faith and participating in an open minded discussion. What I've seen so far in this thread is Olive and EMP supporting Mastcell's proposal that neutral, ininvolved editors have a look at the sources in the article. TimidGuy echoed the need for an independent review of a number of sources that he feels are currently misrepresented in the article.
EMP gave an explanation for why he used the older edition of the textbook and cited WP:MEDRS. To which no one, so far, has responded. EMP also indicated he respected the current discussion and the opinions of other editors and said he: "will not restore this reference unless there is consensus." I then commented that there could be "reasons why it might be useful to include the older version as a reference" indicating that the discussion should continue. Mastcell then commented "we are not going to use an outdated edition of a medical textbook" which sounded like a mandate but was probably not intended to come out that way. My main point is that it is a mis-characterization to say there is a "subset" of editors who have said "the old edition is better than the current edition" and to be clear, I am neutral on this issue. The only thing I would oppose would be attempts to shut down discussion. Meanwhile I thank everyone for maintaining good faith and keeping the lines of communication open as we work together to improve the article. Best, --KeithbobTalk 17:55, 30 April 2013 (UTC)
Allow me to reiterate, as directly and civilly as I'm able, that it would require an extraordinarily compelling justification to cite an outdated edition of a textbook, and thus far I have not heard such a justification. There is no support in WP:MEDRS for using outdated editions of textbooks, so I'm not sure how to respond to someone who thinks there is. I value open, direct, and civil discourse, but as an adjunct to rather than a substitute for adherence to this site's sourcing standards. MastCell Talk 17:44, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
No one has suggested that civil discourse is a substitute for adherence to reliable sourcing standards so I don't know where that's coming from. There are many open threads here with detailed discussion of the sources which attest to that fact. So in essence and summary I think we both agree that all are here in good faith for a civil discussion of ways to improve the article including an in depth, objective analysis of the usage of sources to support neutrally worded content which is the foundation of this project. With that in mind, let's continue. Thanks for your reply, Best, --KeithbobTalk 13:57, 3 May 2013 (UTC)
If case no-one has noticed, the chapter on alternate medicine found in the latest edition of _Braunwald’s Cardiology_ is written by Edzard Ernst and cites Edzard Ernst in the context of TM. I just asked him, in public, if he would cite the AHA scientific statement today, rather than the 9 year old review that he wrote. I hadn't noticed that he was the author in both cases when I asked, or I might have been a bit more careful in my wording. :-/ Sparaig2 (talk) 23:52, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
Perhaps we can have a brief moratorium on trying to convince authors to re-write their textbook chapters for the purposes of this article? It's a bit unseemly. MastCell Talk 00:07, 8 May 2013 (UTC)
I've been doing non-compensated advocacy for TM for nearly 40 years (in case you had any doubts about my bias on the topic). it probably is unseemly, but I've established interesting personal relationships (not necessarily positive -see my exchanges with Andrew Skolnick both in wikipedia and usenet) over the years by doing so. It an OCD hobby of mine. Sparaig2 (talk) 00:38, 8 May 2013 (UTC)

Scientific misconduct

Ospina does not accuse TM researchers of scientific misconduct. I have removed that from the article, as well as removing the inaccurate assertion regarding the number of duplicate publications. Here's what Ospina says in introducing her list in Appencix F:

From 911 included articles, 108 were identified as multiple publications, that is, cases in which the same study was published more than once, available in another format, or part of data from an original report was republished. The multiple publications were not considered to be unique studies and any information that they provided was included with the data reported in the main study. The report that was published first was regarded as the main study.

A cursory glance at the list shows that those TM publications listed are due to the fact that the TM organization has collected into a series of anthologies all of the papers originally published in scientific journals. Collecting papers into an anthology is not scientific misconduct. It's common. See, for example, the classic book on meditation by Shapiro and Walsh, which was mostly a collection of previously published studies.[91] TimidGuy (talk) 10:06, 28 April 2013 (UTC)

Again, that's sort of a half-truth. The Ospina review does not directly accuse any specific researcher of scientific misconduct, which would be a serious charge with likely legal ramifications. However, the review does state, regarding meditation research: "We identified and excluded from the review a considerable number of multiple publications (n = 108). In some instances, the same study was published in two separate journal articles without full cross reference, a practice of redundant publication that has been considered scientific misconduct." MastCell Talk 18:15, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
Looks like the text was supported, so I see no reason not to restore it. IRWolfie- (talk)
What's the rush Wolfie? Two people who are actually familiar with the research are having a discussion. Please let them proceed.--KeithbobTalk 19:38, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
Please understand that this list of 108 includes all meditations. If you're going to accuse TM researchers of doing this, you'll have to look at the list to see whether there are indeed instances of TM studies that were published as two separate journal articles. I'm not aware of any. TimidGuy (talk) 19:48, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
  • I did that edit based on MastCell's original comment on the talkpage a few threads up (and my quick reading of the source), and reading the source more closely now it may not be quite appropriate as I wrote it, as it may suggest that the 108 is a subset of the 340 which is not true (accidental synthesis on my part). However, even though it is on meditation broadly, I think it would still be appropriate to mention it in the article, as the article goes emphasizes that TM is the most studied type of meditation. If the article is going to talk about how heavily-studied TM is relative to the rest of meditation, it could include this caveat about the meditation research in general. II | (t - c) 19:51, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
Thanks! The problem is, many many sources, including research reviews, emphasize the large amount of research on TM. It shouldn't be a problem to say that. Ospina herself notes the large number of TM studies. You can look at any science index and see that there are hundreds of studies. Try PubMed. The studies that are duplicates in the volumes called Collected Papers aren't typically indexed. So the search results you see are generally bona fide unique studies. TimidGuy (talk) 00:46, 29 April 2013 (UTC)

Sourcing review

Based on the general agreement above that this article's sourcing could use a review, I started to do one. I used the same script I developed to do my GA reviews to pull this article's sources and put it in the table below, and started adding my comments. (There are a few more entries here than the 85 listed in the article because a few of the ref names (e.g. "Britannica online/TM" is one) are redefined.)

I got through the first dozen or so, and it's clear we've got some work to do. If I picked up this article as a GA nominee I'd ask for the lead to be fixed, there are quite a few sources used only in the lead, which is a problem per WP:LEAD. Also the quality of the sources I've looked at so far is extremely variable.

Table1: Sources currently in the article

In this table:

  • Source lists the source as cited in the article
  • Seems WP:RS? means, "Does this source appear to meet WP:RS for reliable sourcing?"
  • Use OK? means, is the source used appropriately in the article? For the review, a few selected sources will be spot-checked to ensure they aren't plagiarized and support the article content. ? indicates the source was not spot-checked.
  • Notes will summarize problems found and what needs to be done to fix them
Source Seems WP:RS? Use OK? Zad68 Keithbob
<ref name=TM.org>{{cite web|title=The Transcendental Meditation Program |url=http://www.tm.org/|publisher=Maharishi Foundation|accessdate=17 January 2013}}</ref> Green tickY Green tickY ok use of WP:SELFSOURCE, but not necessary because we have Encyc Brit Green tickY removed SelfSource
<ref name="Britannica online/TM">{{Cite web|url=http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/602436/Transcendental-Meditation |title=Transcendental Meditation |work=Britannica Online Encyclopedia |accessdate=}}</ref> Green tickY Red XN Source only used in lead, WP:LEAD problem Green tickY Corrected
<ref name="Britannica online/TM">{{Cite web|url=http://www.britannica.com/EBchecked/topic/602436/Transcendental-Meditation |title=Transcendental Meditation – Britannica Online Encyclopedia |work=Britannica Online Encyclopedia |accessdate=}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Redefinition of previous, should be combined with it Green tickY Combined
<ref>{{Cite news|title=Sharp HealthCare announces an unorthodox, holistic institute|first=Rex |last=Dalton |work=The San Diego Union – Tribune|date=July 8, 1993|page=B.4.5.1|quote=TM is a movement led by Maharishi Mehesh Yogi, ...}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Red XN Source only used in lead, WP:LEAD problem 20-year-old local newpaper article probably not the best available source to support "TM can refer to the movement", better should be found Green tickY I put cite in body of article Red XN I'm OK with the removal of the text if a better source is not available
<ref>{{cite book |last=Dawson |first=Lorne |year=2003 |publisher=Blackwell Publishing |title=Cults and New Religious Movements |location=Hoboken, New Jersey |page=54}}</ref> Green tickY style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Dawson is university-level PhD with relevant degree and specializes in NRMs, seems well-qualified to use, shame this source isn't used more Green tickY This article is the parent or summary article for the over 30,000 words contained in the "child" articles which cite Dawson and other NRM scholars in depth.
<ref name=Bromley>{{Cite book|last1=Cowan,|first1= Douglas E.,|last2= Bromley|first2= David G. |title=Cults and New Religions: A Brief History (Blackwell Brief Histories of Religion) |publisher=Wiley-Blackwell |year=2007 |pages=48–71 |ISBN=1-4051-6128-0 }}</ref> Green tickY Red XN Source only used in lead, WP:LEAD problem Dawson (as above) and David G. Bromley are well-qualified Green tickY Added source to article body. See above cmt re: Dawson, its the same for Bromley
<ref name="Praeger">{{cite book |first=Zachary |last=Calo |editor1-first=Ann |editor1-last=Duncan |editor2-first=Steven |editor2-last=Jones |title=Church-State Issues in America Today |chapter=Chapter 4: The Internationalization of Church-State Issues |year=2008|publisher=Praeger|location=Westport, Connecticut |isbn=978-0-275-99368-9|page=159|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=zzOn09EaETgC&dq}}</ref> Green tickY Red XN Source only used in lead, WP:LEAD problem Calo is PhD univ prof, specializes in religion and law, well-qualified Green tickY Source added to body of article
<ref name= "American Bar Association 1978 144">{{cite journal |title=What's New in the Law |journal=American Bar Association Journal |last=Ashman |first=Allan |year=1978|month=Jan|volume=64|pages=144|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=eDu0e8buVPAC&pg=PA124&dq=Transcendental+Meditation+was+held+to+be+a+religion+in+a+New+Jersey+court+case#v=onepage&q=Transcendental%20Meditation%20was%20held%20to%20be%20a%20religion%20in%20a%20New%20Jersey%20court%20case&f=false}}</ref> Green tickY style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? ??? This is a puzzling use of this source, a 1978 writeup of an individual NJ District Court case soon after it was decided, it's technically a secondary source but pretty close to primary, hasn't there been anything since then to establish the notability of this case, or have there been other cases? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? No additional cases but the 1978 case often receives a passing mention in mainstream press as recently as 2008 when the Maharishi died
<ref>{{cite book |last1=Murphy |first1=M |last2=Donovan |first2=S |last3=Taylor |first3=E |title=The Physical and Psychological Effects of Meditation: A review of Contemporary Research with a Comprehensive Bibliography 1931–1996 |location=Sausalito, California |publisher=Institute of Noetic Sciences |year=1997}}</ref> Red XN Red XN Source only used in lead, WP:LEAD problem questionable source, publisher is Institute of Noetic Sciences (IONS) which I can't see as having respect from mainstream science, Murphy has a college degree but can't tell in what, don't see any postgrad degrees; cannot find any qualifications for Donovan (not on Noetic's site); not sure where to find info for Murphy (not on Noetic's site); questionable whether published in 1997 should be used to support a statement in 2013 about something being "the most widely practiced, and among the most widely researched" Green tickY Added source to article body. According to Google Scholar its been cited 130+ times. If its good enough for that many publications why would WP reject it? We can discuss, if you disagree
<ref name="The Relaxation Response">{{Cite book| last1 = Benson | first1 = Herbert | last2 = Klipper | first2 = Miriam Z. | title = The Relaxation Response | year = 2001 | publisher = Quill | location = New York, NY | isbn = 978-0-380-81595-1 | page = 61|url=http://books.google.com/?id=TJDGTP9Sa5UC&pg=PA61&dq=transcendental+meditation&q=transcendental%20meditation }}</ref> Red XN Red XN Source only used in lead, WP:LEAD problem Orig. published 1975, republished in 2000 by "WholeCare", can't find info about that publisher, certainly anything published in 1975 can't be used to support a statement in 2013 about something being "the most widely practiced, and among the most widely researched" Green tickY Source is now in body also. Red XN I agree we could probably find a better source than this. I believe Ospina says TM is one of the most widely researched meditations so we could replace it with Ospina.
<ref>{{Cite book| first1=Stephen T. |last1=Sinatra|first2=James C. |last2=Roberts| last3 = Zucker | first3 = Martin | title = Reverse Heart Disease Now: Stop Deadly Cardiovascular Plaque Before It's Too Late | date = December 20, 2007| publisher = Wiley | location = | isbn = 978-0-470-22878-4 | page = 192|url=http://books.google.com/?id=4TfJqNA8sOIC&pg=PA192&dq=transcendental+meditationlr=#v=onepage&q=transcendental%20meditation }}</ref> Green tickY Red XN Source only used in lead, WP:LEAD problem Sinatra has credentials and also a rather controversial reputation, although I think this book should be OK for the claim made in the article Green tickY Source is now in article body.
<ref>{{cite news|url=http://www.usatoday.com/news/religion/2008-02-05-maharishi-obit_N.htm|title=Beatles guru dies in Netherlands|work=USA Today|author=AP|date=February 5, 2008}}</ref> Green tickY Green tickY Why is this one of three sources supporting the date "1955"? Is that controversial or something? Yes, the date is controversial, see Maharishi Mahesh Yogi's bio
<ref>{{cite news|url=http://www.sfgate.com/default/article/PAGE-ONE-Politics-and-Transcendental-Meditation-3016926.php |last=Epstein|first=Edward|title=Politics and Transcendental Meditation|work=San Francisco Chronicle|date=December 29, 1995}}</ref> Green tickY Green tickY One of three sources supporting the date "1955", this one is unnecessary, remove it Because of the controversial nature of the date, I think its best to retain this source
<ref>{{cite journal|url=http://www.mum.edu/pdf_msvs/v05/morris.pdf |last=Morris|first=Bevan |title=Maharishi's Vedic Science and Technology: The Only Means to Create World Peace|journal=Journal of Modern Science and Vedic Science|volume=5|number=1–2|year=1992|page=200|format=PDF}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Bevan Morris is President of MUM, one of three sources supporting the date "1955", this one is unnecessary, remove it Red XN I am reluctant to remove secondary sources due to TM ArbCom discretionary sanctions but you may remove it if you feel the need
<ref>{{cite news|url=http://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/worldnews/1577866/Maharishi-Mahesh-Yogi-guru-to-Beatles-dies.html|last= Rooney|first=Ben|title=Maharishi Mahesh Yogi, guru to Beatles, dies |work=The Telegraph|date=February 6, 2008 | location=London}}</ref> Green tickY Red XN OK source for content but probable WP:PLAGIARISM problem, source and article both have "the Maharishi began publicly teaching a traditional meditation technique" Green tickY Corrected problem (quotes added)
<ref name="Williamson 2010">{{cite book |last=Williamson |first=Lola |year=2010 |publisher=NYU Press |location=New York |url=http://books.google.com/books?id=OxD1SYaelLAC&dq=enrollment+%22TM+movement%22&q=tm+movement#v=onepage&q=sidhi&f=false |title=Transcendent in America: Hindu-Inspired Meditation Movements as New Religion |isbn=0-8147-9450-5, 9780814794500 |pages=97–99}}</ref> Green tickY Green tickY Author is a PhD in relevant field, book got reviewed in a journal, seems OK, should use this book more; small problem Red XN ref URL is a Google Book search, needs to be fixed to point to page 6 Green tickY Upgraded URL. ? Please note that Williamson is only an "assistant professor" at a Christian college and this is her first book which I think, is based on her PhD thesis
<ref name=Russell>{{Cite book|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=TZ89AAAAIAAJ&dq=maharishi+%22transcendental+deep+meditation%22&source=gbs_navlinks_s|last= Russell|first=Peter|title=The TM Technique: An Introduction to Transcendental Meditation and the Teachings of Maharishi Mahesh Yogi|publisher=Routledge |location=London |year=1977|isbn=978-0-7100-8539-9|pages=25–26}}</ref> Red XN Russell sells commercial TM books, associated with IONS style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? For content "later renamed TM", this commercial book is unnecessary, better to source content to page 6 of academic Williamson 2010; for "initiated thousands ... developed a TM teacher training program" it would be better to use an academic source Red XN Agree, low grade academic source is slightly better, you may remove Russel if you like
<ref name=World1>{{Cite book | author = Maharishi Mahesh Yogi| title = Thirty Years Around the World, Volume One, 1957–1964 | year = 1986| publisher = MVU Press | isbn = 90-71750-02-7 | page = 302}}{{Request quotation|date=June 2010}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY I've replaced this primary source with an academic source
<ref>{{Cite book | last1 = Olson | first1 = Helena | last2 = Olson | first2 = Roland | title = His Holiness Maharishi Mahesh Yogi: A Living Saint for the New Millennium: Stories of His First Visit to the USA | year = 2001 | publisher = Samhita Productions | location = College Park, Maryland | isbn = 978-1-929297-21-4 | page =297 }}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY I've replaced this personal memoir with an encyclopedic book
<ref>{{cite news |newspaper=The Times (London) |title=Maharishi Mahesh Yogi |date=February 7, 2008 |page=62}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Reputable source
<ref>{{cite book|last=Oates |first=Robert M. |title=Celebrating the Dawn: Maharishi Mahesh Yogi and the TM technique|page=226|location=New York|publisher=G.P. Putnam's Sons|isbn=978-0-399-11815-9|year=1976}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? A non-academic source. The source and the content it supports could be removed if someone finds it objectionable.
<ref>{{cite news|first=T. K. |last=Irwin|title=What's New in Science: Transcendental Meditation: Medical Miracle or 'Another Kooky Fad'|work=Sarasota Herald Tribune Family Weekly|date=October 8, 1972|pages=8–9}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ?Small city newspaper, however it supports undisputed information (see Transcendental Meditation in education)
<ref name=Chryssides>{{Cite book | last1 = Chryssides | first1 = George D. | title = Exploring New Religions | year = 1999 | publisher = Cassell | location = London | isbn = 978-0-8264-5959-6 | pages = 293–296| url=http://books.google.com/books?id=jxIxPBpGMwgC&pg=PA293&dq=#v=onepage&q=&f=false }}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Author is PhD, research fellow, several books on NRMs
<ref name=Craze>{{Cite news| issn = 0040-718X| title = Behavior: The TM Craze: 40 Minutes to Bliss| work = Time| accessdate = November 15, 2009 | date = October 13, 1975 | url = http://www.time.com/time/printout/0,8816,947229,00.html}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Time magazine is a solid source
<ref>{{cite news|title=Forget the F-16s, Israel needs more Yogic Flyers to beat Hizbullah: 30-strong TM group, sole guests at Nof Ginnosar Hotel, say they need another 235 colleagues to make the country safe|first=Amir|last=Mizroch|work=Jerusalem Post|date=July 23, 2006|page=4}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Minor Hebrew newspaper so I've added the Hindustani Times as a supportive source
<ref name="Transcendental Meditation">{{cite web|url=http://dictionary.oed.com/ |title=Transcendental Meditation |work=Oxford English Dictionary|accessdate=}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Solid source for the definition of TM
<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.tm.org/meditation-techniques |title=The Transcendental Meditation Program |publisher=Tm.org |date= |accessdate=February 17, 2013}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Primary source supporting the phrase "developed by Maharishi Mahesh Yogi", we could remove the phrase if its controversial
<ref name=Epi06>{{Cite journal|last1=Lansky |first1=Ephraim |last2=St Louis |first2=Erik |title=Transcendental meditation: a double-edged sword in epilepsy? |journal=Epilepsy & Behavior |volume=9 |issue=3 |pages=394–400 |year=2006 |month=November |pmid=16931164 |doi=10.1016/j.yebeh.2006.04.019 |url= |ref=harv}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? PMID 16931164: Review
<ref name="google138">{{Cite book| last1 = Cotton | first1 = Dorothy H. G. | title = Stress management: An integrated approach to therapy | year = 1990 | publisher = Brunner/Mazel | location = New York | isbn = 0-87630-557-5 | page = 138|url=http://books.google.com/?id=oLsECokSFHwC&vq}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Author is PhD. One of two sources to support the phrase "one of the most widely practiced" [meditation techniques]
<ref name ="Total Heart Health">{{cite book |last1=Schneider |first1=Robert |last2=Fields |first2=Jeremy |year=2006 |publisher=Basic Health Publications |location=Laguna Beach, CA |url=http://books.google.com/books?id=EWXz0Y9maukC&pg=PA148&dq=transcendental+meditation+seven+steps&hl=en&sa=X&ei=NN3IT_O_LJCs8QTK2L2CDw&ved=0CGMQ6AEwBA#v=onepage&q=transcendental%20meditation%20seven%20steps&f=false |title=Total Heart Health: How to Prevent and Reverse Heart Disease with the Maharishi Vedic Approach to Health |pages=148–149}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Book by MD and researcher at Maharishi University of Management--"one of the most widely practiced" [meditation techniques]
<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.TM.org |title=The Transcendental Meditation Program |publisher=TM.org |accessdate=February 13, 2013}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY I've removed this primary source since there are two secondary sources for the same text (see above)
<ref name=Bushell>{{cite journal |first=William |last=Bushell |title=Longevity Potential Life Span and Health Span Enhancement through Practice of the Basic Yoga Meditation Regimen |journal=Annals of the New York Academy of Sciences |volume=1172 | year=2009 |page=46 | quote=Transcendental Meditation (TM), a concentrative technique ... has been the most extensively studied meditation technique. | url = http://books.google.ca/books?id=TMJRynOxsisC&pg=PA20&dq=William+Bushell+%282009%29.+%22Longevity+Potential+Life+Span+and+Health+Span+Enhancement+through+Practice+of+the+Basic+Yoga+Meditation&hl=en&sa=X&ei=hryvUPaBN8TtigLSjIHQAQ&ved=0CDIQ6AEwAA#v=onepage&q=Transendental%20Meditation&f=false }}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ?
<ref name="Rosenthal 2011 14">{{cite book |first=Norman |last=Rosenthal |title=Transcendence: Healing and Transformation through Transcendental Meditation |publisher=Tarcher/Penguin |year=2011 |page=14 |location=New York |isbn=978-1-58542-873-1 | url = http://books.google.ca/books?hl=en&lr=&id=ssJ6jU0YeNEC&oi=fnd&pg=PT12&dq=Transcendence:+Healing+and+Transformation+through+Transcendental+Meditation+&ots=m21SjjiK0C&sig=QIsnkZLDlWvOgFhDQfi5NAkRPWI#v=onepage&q=340&f=fale | quote = By my latest count, there have been 340 per-reviewed articles published on TM, many of which have appeared in highly respected journals.}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Well known MD and award winning NIH researcher, book published by Tarcher
<ref name="Lyn Freeman">{{cite book|last=Freeman|first=Lyn|title=Mosby's Complementary & Alternative Medicine: A Research-Based Approach|year=2008|publisher=Mosby Elsevier|location=St Louis|isbn=ISBN 0-323-05346-7 {{!}} ISBN 978-0-323-05346-4 | edition= 3|pages=163}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ?
<ref>{{cite web|url=http://www.tm.org/learn-tm |title=How To Learn |publisher=Tm.org |date= |accessdate=February 17, 2013}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Primary source seems OK to self describe TM's "seven step course"
<ref>{{cite web |url=http://www.tm.org/tuition |title=TM Course Fee |publisher=TM.org |accessdate=May 30, 2012}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Primary source seems OK to self describe TM course fees in USA
<ref>{{cite web |url=http://www.t-m.org.uk/learning.shtml |title=Transcendental Meditation Fees and Course Details |publisher=Transcendental Meditation: Official website for the UK |accessdate=January 31, 2013}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Primary source seems OK to self describe TM course fees in UK
<ref name="American Bar Association 1978 144">{{cite journal|last=American Bar Association|title=Constitutional Law ... Separating Church and State|journal=ABA Journal|year=1978|month=Jan|volume=64|pages=144|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=eDu0e8buVPAC&pg=PA124&dq=Transcendental+Meditation+was+held+to+be+a+religion+in+a+New+Jersey+court+case#v=onepage&q=Transcendental%20Meditation%20was%20held%20to%20be%20a%20religion%20in%20a%20New%20Jersey%20court%20case&f=false}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Note: court documents are considered primary sources
<ref name="Humes page 69">{{Cite book|last=Humes|first=C.A.|year=2005|chapter=Maharishi Mahesh Yogi: Beyond the T.M. Technique|title=Gurus in America|editor1-first=Thomas A. |editor1-last=Forsthoefel |editor2-first=Cynthia Ann |editor2-last=Humes|publisher=SUNY Press|page=69|isbn=0-7914-6573-X |url=http://books.google.co.uk/books?id=ugSb7mArJlYC |quote=This lawsuit was the most significant setback for TM in the United States ... Since then TM has made a comeback of sorts with some governmental sponsorship}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Humes is PhD and Associate Professor in religious studies and co-author of three books
<ref name=Bainbridge>{{Cite book|last1 = Bainbridge | first1 = William Sims | title = The Sociology of Religious Movements | year = 1997 | publisher = Routledge | location = New York | isbn = 0-415-91202-4 | page = 188|url=http://books.google.com/?id=eCKbw8QuhEkC&printsec=frontcover&q=tm }}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Bainbridge is well known American sociologist, part time prof at Georg Mason Univ
<ref name="Aghiorgoussis 21, 34">{{Cite journal|title=The challenge of metaphysical experiences outside Orthodoxy and the Orthodox response|first=Maximos|last=Aghiorgoussis|work=Greek Orthodox Theological Review|location=Brookline|date=Spring 1999|volume=44|issue=1–4|pages=21, 34|ref=harv}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Retired bishop of the Greek Orthodox Metropolis of Pittsburgh, a valid expert opinion but it may need attribution
<ref name="Chryssides 2001 301–303">{{cite book|url=http://books.google.com/?id=vyX1sL8-0gMC&pg=PA292&lpg=PA292| dq=Chryssides+and+Transcendental+Meditation#PPA303,M1|last=Chryssides|first= George D.|title=Exploring New Religions|publisher=Continuum International Publishing Group|year=2001|isbn=0-8264-5959-5, 9780826459596|pages=301–303}}"Although one can identify the Maharishi's philosophical tradition, its teachings are in no way binding on TM practitioners. There is no public worship, no code of ethics, no scriptures to be studied, and no rites of passage that are observed, such as dietary laws, giving to the poor, or pilgrimages. In particular, there is no real TM community: practitioners do not characteristically meet together for public worship, but simply recite the mantra, as they have been taught it, not as religious obligation, but simply as a technique to benefit themselves, their surroundings and the wider world."</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickYChryssides is PhD with several books on NRMs
<ref>{{Cite book| last = Partridge | first = Christopher | year = 200 | title = New Religions: A Guide To New Religious Movements, Sects and Alternative Spiritualities | publisher = Oxford University Press | quote = It is understood in terms of the reduction of stress and the charging of one's mental and physical batteries.| location = New York| id = | pages = 184}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Professor of religious studies, has published several books on NRMs
<ref name="Rosenthal 2011 4">{{cite book|title=[[Transcendence: Healing and Transformation Through Transcendental Meditation]]|authorlink=Norman E. Rosenthal|first=Norman E.|last=Rosenthal|publisher=Tarcher Penguin|year=2011|isbn=978-1-58542-873-1|page=4}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY MD and award winning NIH researcher
<ref name="SCI reserve collection">{{cite web|title=Science of Creative Intelligence Reserve Collection|url=http://www.mum.edu/library/mvs_collection.html |work=SCI collection|publisher=Maharishi University of Management|accessdate=May 30, 2012}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Primary source seems OK to self-describe SCI Red XN but we need an academic source to support the phrase "skeptic question its scientific nature"
<ref name="Stark 1986 page 287">{{cite book|last1=Stark|first1=Rodney|last2=Bainbridge|first2=William, Sims| title=The Future Of Religion|year=1986|publisher=University of California Press,|isbn=ISBN 0520057317 ISBN 978-0520057319|pages=287}} "Time magazine in 1975 estimated that the U.S. total had risen to 600,000 augmented by half that number elsewhere" =[900,000 world wide] "Annual Growth in TM Initiations in the U.S. [chart] Cumulative total at the End of Each Year: 1977, 919,300"</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Time magazine is a solid source
<ref name="Petersen, William J. 1982 p 123">{{cite book|last=Peterson|first=William|title=Those Curious New Cults in the 80s|year=1982|publisher=Keats Publishing|location=New Canaan, Connecticut|isbn=0879833173, 9780879833176|pages=123}} claims "more than a million" in the USA and Europe.</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Retired editor and author of 20 books.
<ref name="Occhiogrosso, Peter 1996 p 66">Occhiogrosso, Peter. ''The Joy of Sects: A Spirited Guide to the World's Religious Traditions.'' New York: Doubleday (1996); p 66, citing "close to a million" in the USA.</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? A journalist who has published several books on spirituality and religion
<ref name="Bainbridge, William Sims 1997 page 189">Bainbridge, William Sims (1997) Routledge, The Sociology of Religious Movements, page 189 "the million people [Americans] who had been initiated"</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Well known American sociologist
<ref>Analysis: Practice of requiring probationers to take lessons in transcendental meditation sparks religious controversy, NPR All Things Considered, February 1, 2002 | ROBERT SIEGEL “TM's five million adherents claim that it eliminates chronic health problems and reduces stress.”</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY NPR is well known reputable source
<ref>Martin Hodgson, The Guardian (5 February 2008) "He [Maharishi] transformed his interpretations of ancient scripture into a multimillion-dollar global empire with more than 5m followers worldwide”</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Well known Int'l newspaper
<ref>Stephanie van den Berg, Sydney Morning Herald, Beatles guru Maharishi Mahesh Yogi dies, (February 7, 2008) “the TM movement, which has some five million followers worldwide”</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Well known Int'l newspaper
<ref>Meditation a magic bullet for high blood pressure – study, Sunday Tribune (South Africa), (January 27, 2008) “More than five million people have learned the technique worldwide, including 60,000 in South Africa."</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Int'l news source
<ref name="ReferenceA">Maharishi Mahesh Yogi - Transcendental Meditation founder's grand plan for peace, The Columbian (Vancouver, WA), February 19, 2006 | ARTHUR MAX Associated Press writer "transcendental meditation, a movement that claims 6 million practitioners since it was introduced."</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Major city newspaper
<ref>{{cite news|title=Bank makes an issue of mystic's mint|last=Bickerton|first=Ian|work=Financial Times|location=London (UK)|date=February 8, 2003|page=09}} the movement claims to have five million followers,</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Int'ly known publication
<ref name="Maharishi Mahesh Yogi 1955">Maharishi Mahesh Yogi, Spiritual Leader Dies, New York Times, By LILY KOPPEL, Published: February 6, 2008 "Since the technique’s inception in 1955, the organization says, it has been used to train more than 40,000 teachers, taught more than five million people"</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY NY Times is reputable source
<ref>{{harvnb|Sharma|Clark|1998|loc=Preface}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? MD and Maharishi Ayurveda researcher
<ref name=Argus>[http://download.tmnews.org/2005_08_05_RockIsArgus_ltr.pdf Welvaert, Brandy, Vedic homes seek better living through architecture", ''Rock Island Argus'', (August 5, 2005)]</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Red XN Local newspaper, we should look for a better source
<ref name=Spivack>{{cite news|work=Washington Post|title=Bricks Mortar and Serenity|first=Miranda|last=Spivack|date=September 12, 2008|url=http://www.washingtonpost.com/wp-dyn/content/article/2008/12/11/AR2008121103497.html}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Washington Post is solid source
<ref name=Times0882>{{cite news|date=February 7, 2008|title=Maharishi Mahesh Yogi|work=The Times|location=London (UK)|url=http://www.timesonline.co.uk/tol/comment/obituaries/article3320882.ece}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Times London is solid Int'l newspaper
<ref>{{cite encyclopedia |title=Maharishi Mahesh Yogi |encyclopedia=Britannica Concise Encyclopedia |url=http://www.answers.com/topic/maharishi-mahesh-yogi}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Brittanica is well known encyclopedia, a tertiary source but maybe OK for this usage
<ref>For ''new religious movement'' see: {{cite book|last=Beckford|first=James A.|title=Cult controversies: the societal response to new religious movements|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=0pc9AAAAIAAJ|year=1985|publisher=Tavistock Publications|isbn=978-0-422-79630-9|page=23}} Green tickY James A. Beckford is a British sociologist of religion. He is Professor Emeritus of Sociology at the University of Warwick and a Fellow of the British Academy
{{cite book|last=Parsons|first=Gerald|title=The Growth of Religious Diversity: Traditions|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=tlKkZoNPi0oC&pg=PA288|year=1994|publisher=The Open University/Methuen|isbn=978-0-415-08326-3|page=288}} Green tickY Religious Studies professor, Manchester University Press
For ''neo-Hindu'', see: {{cite book|last=Alper|first=Harvey P.|title=Understanding mantras|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=V8Upy4ApG_oC&pg=PA442|date=December 1991|publisher=Motilal Banarsidass Publ.|isbn=978-81-208-0746-4|page=442}} Green tickY "Harvey P. Alper was Associate Professor of Religious Studies at Southern Methodist University from 1974 to 1987" (died in 1987)
For ''neo-Hindu'', see: {{cite book|last1=Raj|first1=Selva J.|author2=William P. Harman|title=Dealing With Deities: The Ritual Vow in South Asia|url=http://books.google.com/books?id=Ov2oltTLinkC&pg=PA129|year=2007|publisher=SUNY Press|isbn=978-0-7914-6708-4|page=129}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Ph.D in philosophy and religion
<ref name="TM and cult mania">{{Cite book | last1 = Persinger | first1 = Michael A. | last2 = Carrey | first2 = Normand J. | last3 = Suess | first3 = Lynn A. | title = TM and cult mania | year = 1980 | publisher = Christopher Pub. House | location = North Quincy, Mass. | isbn = 0-8158-0392-3 | pages = }}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Univ professor and neuro-researcher
<ref name="Dawson">Dawson, Lorne L. (2003) Blackwell Publishing, Cults and New Religious Movements, Chapter 3: Three Types of New Religious Movement by Roy Wallis (1984), page 44-48</ref> Green tickY style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Dawson is university-level PhD with relevant degree and specializes in NRMs, seems well-qualified to use Green tickY Yes, Dawson is one of many well-qualified NRM experts used in the TM series of articles
<ref name=Blatter>Christian Blatter, Donald McCown, Diane Reibel, Marc S. Micozzi, (2010) Springer Science+Business Media, Teaching Mindfulness, Page 47</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Marcozzi is M.D. and PhD.
<ref>Olson, Carl (2007) Rutgers University Press, The Many Colors of Hinduism, page 345</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Good academic source: Author is PhD, Prof of religious studies, endowed chair and has published 200+ articles and reviews plus several books
<ref name=Market85>{{cite book |author=Bainbridge, Sims; Stark, Rodney; Bainbridge, William Sims |title=The future of religion: secularization, revival, and cult formation |publisher=Univ. of California Press |location=Berkeley, Calif |year=1985 |pages= |isbn=0-520-05731-7 |oclc= |doi= |url=http://books.google.com/?id=lTzPyvT2yusC&pg=PA285&dq=public+relations+Transcendental+meditation#v=onepage&q=public%20relations%20Transcendental%20meditation&f=false}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Academic source with Bainbridge again
<ref>{{cite book |author=Sagan, Carl |title=The demon-haunted world: science as a candle in the dark |publisher=Ballantine Books |location=New York |year=1997 |page=16 |isbn=0-345-40946-9 |oclc= |doi= |accessdate=}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Astronomer, cosmologist, Univ Professor--Is an academic but not in an area relevant to this topic
<ref name=Harrison>Harrison, Shirley (1990). Cults: The Battle for God. Kent: Christopher Helm. pp. 93–103 "none of the other 'cultic qualities' defined by cult watchers can be fairly attributed to TM."</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? British author and journalist
<ref>Rowson, Jonathan (April 23, 2007) [http://www.heraldscotland.com/meditation-for-old-hippies-or-a-better-way-of-life-1.839896 Meditation: for old hippies or a better way of life?] Sunday Herald (Scotland) " the TM movement is not a cult", accessed Feb 2, 2013</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Herald Scotland is reputable newspaper, one of the oldest newspapers in the world
<ref>Hannaford, Alex (December 27, 2010). "Mantra with a mission; Feature Om or ominous? The maverick film director David Lynch wants to bring Transcendental Meditation to our classrooms, and believes in 'yogic flying'. Can he get it off the ground?". The Sunday Times (London).</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Reputable Int'l newspaper
<ref>Lyster, Samantha (October 21, 2000) Samantha Lyster finds herself in holistic heaven with new-found happiness and tranquillity after learning the art of transcendental meditation, The Birmingham Post (England), “TM is not a religion, a cult or a philosophy”</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? 150 year old English newspaper, currently functioning as a regional business news source
<ref>["the TM technique does not require adherence to any belief system—there is no dogma or philosophy attached to it, and it does not demand any lifestyle changes other than the practice of it."] [http://books.google.com/books?id=Ac0g-v6gpjkC&printsec=frontcover&dq=Nancy+leibler+depression&cd=1#v=onepage&q=Transcendental%20Meditation&f=false] Healing Depression the Mind-Body Way: Creating Happiness with Meditation ... By Nancy Liebler PhD, Sandra Moss, M.S. P. H. </ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY I've improved the citation in the article; adding more info and I note that the book is co-written by a PhD. One of three sources supporting a single sentence.
<ref>"Its proponents say it is not a religion or a philosophy."The Guardian March 28, 2009 [http://www.guardian.co.uk/education/2009/mar/29/schools-pupils-meditation-courses]</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Reputable Int'l newspaper
<ref>"It's used in prisons, large corporations and schools, and it is not considered a religion.” [http://www.concordmonitor.com/apps/pbcs.dll/article?AID=/20090331/NEWS01/903310312/0/FRONTPAGE] Concord Monitor</ref> {{nay} {{nay} Red XN local newspaper, this could be removed since there are 3 other sources supporting the same sentence
<ref>Chryssides George D. Defining the New Spirituality http://www.cesnur.org/conferences/riga2000/chryssides.htm ''One possible suggestion is that religion demands exclusive allegiance: this would ipso facto exclude Scientology, TM and the Soka Gakkai simply on the grounds that they claim compatibility with whatever other religion the practitioner has been following. For example, TM is simply – as they state – a technique. Although it enables one to cope with life, it offers no goal beyond human existence (such as moksha), nor does it offer rites or passage or an ethic. Unlike certain other Hindu-derived movements, TM does not prescribe a dharma to its followers – that is to say a set of spiritual obligations deriving from one’s essential nature.''</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Well known NRM academic
<ref>Lyn Freeman, ''Mosby’s Complementary & Alternative Medicine: A Research-Based Approach'', Mosby Elsevier, 2009, p. 163</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Author is a PhD in mind body therapies [92]
<ref>{{Cite news|url=http://www.jsonline.com/story/index.aspx?id=267105 |title=Delving into alternative care: Non-traditional treatments draw increased interest, research funding|first=SUSANNE|last=QUICK|date=October 17, 2004|work=Journal Sentinel|location=Milwaukee, WI |archiveurl =http://web.archive.org/web/20070929124114/http://www.jsonline.com/story/index.aspx?id=267105 |archivedate = September 29, 2007|quote=Maharishi University ... has received more than $20 million in government support to date to explore the health benefits of meditation.}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Green tickY Major city newspaper
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Ospina MB, Bond K, Karkhaneh M, ''et al.''|title=Meditation practices for health: state of the research |journal=Evid Rep Technol Assess (Full Rep) |volume=|issue=155 |pages=1–263 |year=2007 |month=June |pmid=17764203|doi= |url= |ref=harv |quote=Scientific research on meditation practices does not appear to have a common theoretical perspective and is characterized by poor methodological quality. Firm conclusions on the effects of meditation practices in healthcare cannot be drawn based on the available evidence.}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? PMID 17764203: Review
<ref name="Braunwald 2011">Edzard Ernst, Chapter 51 in ''Braunwald's Heart Disease: A Textbook of Cardiovascular Medicine'', Peter Libby, et al, eds, Saunders Elsevier, 2011. ISBN 978-1437727081 Quotation: "A systematic review of six RCTs of transcendental meditation failed to generate convincing evidence that meditation is an effective treatment for hypertension.15 “ (references the same 2004 systematic review by Canter and Ernst on TM and hypertension that is separately referenced in this article)</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ?
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Canter PH, Ernst E |title=Insufficient evidence to conclude whether or not Transcendental Meditation decreases blood pressure: results of a systematic review of randomized clinical trials |journal=Journal of Hypertension |volume=22 |issue=11|pages=2049–54 |year=2004 |month=November|pmid=15480084|url=http://meta.wkhealth.com/pt/pt-core/template-journal/lwwgateway/media/landingpage.htm?issn=0263-6352&volume=22&issue=11&spage=2049 |ref=harv| quote = All the randomized clinical trials of TM for the control of blood pressure published to date have important methodological weaknesses and are potentially biased by the affiliation of authors to the TM organization.|doi=10.1097/00004872-200411000-00002}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? PMID 15480084: Review
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Krisanaprakornkit T, Ngamjarus C, Witoonchart C, Piyavhatkul N |title=Meditation therapies for attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder (ADHD) |journal=Cochrane Database Syst Rev|volume=6 |issue= 6|pages=CD006507 |year=2010 |pmid=20556767|doi=10.1002/14651858.CD006507.pub2 |url= |quote =As a result of the limited number of included studies, the small sample sizes and the high risk of bias|editor1-last=Krisanaprakornkit|editor1-first=Thawatchai}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? PMID 20556767: Meta-Analysis, Review
<ref>{{Cite journal|author=Canter PH, Ernst E |title=The cumulative effects of Transcendental Meditation on cognitive function--a systematic review of randomised controlled trials|journal=Wien. Klin. Wochenschr. |volume=115 |issue=21–22 |pages=758–66|year=2003 |month=November |pmid=14743579 |doi= 10.1007/BF03040500|url= |quote = All 4 positive trials recruited subjects from among people favourably predisposed towards TM, and used passive control procedures … The association observed between positive outcome, subject selection procedure and control procedure suggests that the large positive effects reported in 4 trials result from an expectation effect. The claim that TM has a specific and cumulative effect on cognitive function is not supported by the evidence from randomized controlled trials.}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? PMID 14743579: Comparative Study, Review
<ref name=Cochrane06>{{Cite journal|last1 =Krisanaprakornkit | first1 = T. | last2 = Krisanaprakornkit | first2 = W. |last3 = Piyavhatkul | first3 = N. | last4 = Laopaiboon | first4 = M. |title=Meditation therapy for anxiety disorders |journal=Cochrane Database of Systematic Reviews |issue=1|pages=CD004998 |year=2006 |pmid=16437509 |doi=10.1002/14651858.CD004998.pub2 |quote=The small number of studies included in this review do not permit any conclusions to be drawn on the effectiveness of meditation therapy for anxiety disorders. Transcendental meditation is comparable with other kinds of relaxation therapies in reducing anxiety|editor1-last =Krisanaprakornkit|editor1-first =Thawatchai}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? PMID 16437509: Review
<ref name=Ospina>{{cite journal|last1=Ospina|first1= MB.|last2=Bond|first2=K.|last3 =Karkhaneh|first3 =M. |last4 =Tjosvold |first4 =L. |last5 =Vandermeer |first5 =B. |last6 =Liang|first6 =Y. |last7 =Bialy |first7 =L. |last8 =Hooton |first8 =N. |last9 =Buscemi |first9 =N. |title =Meditation practices for health: state of the research|journal =Evid Rep Technol Assess (Full Rep) |issue = 155 |pages =1–263 |month = June |year =2007 |pmid = 17764203|url=http://www.ahrq.gov/downloads/pub/evidence/pdf/meditation/medit.pdf|page=4|quote=A few studies of overall poor methodological quality were available for each comparison in the meta-analyses, most of which reported nonsignificant results. TM had no advantage over health education to improve measures of systolic blood pressure and diastolic blood pressure, body weight, heart rate, stress, anger, self-efficacy, cholesterol, dietary intake, and level of physical activity in hypertensive patients}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? PMID 17764203: Review
<ref>{{Cite journal|last1 = Krisanaprakornkit | first1 = T. | last2 = Ngamjarus | first2 = C. | last3 = Witoonchart | first3 = C. | last4 = Piyavhatkul | first4 = N. |title=Meditation therapies for attention-deficit/hyperactivity disorder (ADHD) |journal=Cochrane Database Syst Rev |volume=6 |issue= 6|pages=CD006507 |year=2010 |pmid=20556767|doi=10.1002/14651858.CD006507.pub2 |quote =As a result of the limited number of included studies, the small sample sizes and the high risk of bias, we are unable to draw any conclusions regarding the effectiveness of meditation therapy for ADHD.|editor1-last = Krisanaprakornkit|editor1-first = Thawatchai}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? PMID 20556767: Meta-Analysis, Review
<ref>{{cite journal|last=Brook,|first=Robert D|coauthors=Lawrence J. Appel, Melvyn Rubenfire, Gbenga Ogedegbe, John D. Bisognano, William J. Elliott, Flavio D. Fuchs, Joel W. Hughes, Daniel T. Lackland, Beth A. Staffileno, Raymond R. Townsend and Sanjay Rajagopalan|title=Beyond Medications and Diet: Alternative Approaches to Lowering Blood Pressure : A Scientific Statement From the American Heart Association|journal=Hypertension|date=2013|year=2013|month=April 22|doi=10.1161/HYP.0b013e318293645f|url=http://hyper.ahajournals.org/content/early/2013/04/22/HYP.0b013e318293645f.full.pdf}}</ref> style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ?

I plan on finishing this table over the next day or two, hope people find it useful. Zad68 04:10, 29 April 2013 (UTC)

Updated some more... Zad68 20:35, 29 April 2013 (UTC)

Just a note here that I do not plan on doing any more reviewing of the sourcing for this article as I'd like to focus on other areas at this time. Anyone who might find the table provided useful is welcome to edit it with sourcing notes, hope you find it useful. Zad68 20:00, 9 May 2013 (UTC)

Thanks Zad for your good start and useful efforts. I have added a column to the chart for my notes in response to yours. In addition I have corrected many of the issues that you have ID'd. I'll add more comments as time allows. Please feel free to rejoin the project later on if you are able. Best, --KeithbobTalk 15:28, 17 May 2013 (UTC)

Request made

I have asked Zad68 to extend his generosity [93] by including in his list the RS’s deleted under protest last month [94], which also may be found in the intro section to the ‘mother’ TM research article [95]. EMP (talk 17:40, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

Table 2: sources removed by Doc James on March 23, 2013

In this table:

  • Source lists the source as cited in the article before it was removed along with the text it supported
  • Seems WP:RS? means, "Does this source appear to meet WP:RS for reliable sourcing?"
  • Use OK? means, was the source used appropriately in the article?
  • Notes on the assessment by each editor
Source Seems WP:MEDRS? Use OK? Editor1 Editor2
{{Cite journal | first = Peter | last = Sedlmeier | coauthors = Eberth, Juliane; Schwarz, Marcus; Zimmermann, Doreen; Haarig, Frederik; Jaeger, Sonia; Kunze, Sonja | year = 2012 | month = May | title = The Psychological Effects of Meditation: A Meta-Analysis | quote = Comparatively strong effects for TM (compared to the two other approaches) were found in reducing negative emotions, trait anxiety, and neuroticism, and being helpful in learning and memory and in self-realization (see also Table 3). This finding is consistent with prior meta-analyses that found superior effects of TM in trait anxiety and measures of self-realization. | journal = Psychological Bulletin | pages = 19 | doi = 10.1037/a0028168 | url = http://psycnet.apa.org/psycinfo/2012-12792-001/ | accessdate = Aug 9, 2012}} Green tickY The journal Psychological Bulletin has an Impact Factor of 14 and ranks 2 of 125 in the category Psychology ― Multidisciplinary. It ranks 10th at Core Psychology Journals style="background: var(--background-color-interactive, #EEE); color: var(--color-base, black); vertical-align: middle; white-space: nowrap; text-align: center; " class="table-Un­known" | ? Comment from Editor1 Comment from Editor 2
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</small>{{Cite book | last1 = Carter |first1=Calvin |last2=Tranel |first2=Daniel | editor1-first = Italo |editor1-last=Biaggioni | editor2-first= Geoffrey |editor2-last=Burnstock |editor3-first=Phillip |editor3-last=Low |editor4-first=Julian |editor4-last=Paton | title = Primer on the Autonomic Nervous System | edition = 3rd | year = 2011 | month = November | publisher = Academic Press | location = Waltham, Massachusetts | pages = 297–298 | chapter = Mind-Body Interactions | quote = A meta-analysis of these studies indicates that TM significantly decreased low and high risk participants' systolic and diastolic blood pressures ... In addition, psychological distress and coping abilities were significantly improved compared to control TM groups in both low and high risk groups.}}

Green tickY Medical textbook, published by Academic Press, an imprint of the well known scientific publisher, Elsevier. MEDRS: “Ideal sources for such content (biomedical information) includes general or systematic reviews published in reputable medical journals, academic and professional books written by experts in the relevant field and from a respected publisher . . ." [96] Also seems this textbook is widely recognized: according to WorldCat it's carried in 600+ libraries, about the same as another standard text, Braunwald’s Heart Disease, a Textbook of Cardiovascular Medicine. Green tickY Comment from EMP:

Reliable source: Elsevier a reputable publisher, and this text is widely carried in university libraries—I looked at the first 100 of the total of 667 libraries, and approx 90 percent were university/college. Also up-to-date: the source references a 2008 meta-analysis and a 2009 RCT. 

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AHA statement

I think we need to be careful in how we present the recent scientific statement from the American Heart Association. The conclusion clearly states:

Numerous alternative approaches for lowering BP have been evaluated during the past few decades. The strongest evidence supports the effectiveness of using aerobic and/or dynamic resistance exercise for the adjuvant treatment of high BP. Biofeedback techniques, isometric handgrip, and device-guided breathing methods are also likely effective treatments. There is insufficient or inconclusive evidence at the present time to recommend the use of the other techniques reviewed in this scientific statement for the purposes of treating overt hypertension or pre-hypertension.

The conclusion makes clear that TM falls into the category of interventions for which there is "insufficient or inconclusive evidence at the present time". Some of the recent edits fail to convey this conclusion accurately to the reader. I'm concerned that we're seeing a trend in which sources are selectively quoted in order to reflect positively on TM (for example, see one thread up), and as time permits would suggest that each source be verified against the claims made for it. In the meantime, I'd invite comment on how we present the AHA source. MastCell Talk 20:54, 26 April 2013 (UTC)

But it explicitly states "The overall evidence supports that TM modestly lowers BP." The conclusion doesn't say anything about TM. We should go with what the report says, not some inference that an editor makes. Regarding the class of evidence, table 1 gives the authors of the report several options for characterizing class IIB evidence. The authors of the report chose the first option. So should we. Here's what it says: "The writing group conferred to TM a Class IIB, Level of Evidence B recommendation in regard to BP-lowering efficacy. TM may be considered in clinical practice to lower BP." I don't see how it could be any more clear. Zad's edit went beyond what the authors say. They don't say the evidence is unclear. They say it supports that TM modestly lowers blood pressure. And speaking of the need to be careful, many of the negative sources in that section are misrepresented. Cochrane 2010 doesn't say anything about TM researchers being biased. Cochrane 2006 doesn't say TM research is "poor." And Ospina doesn't characterize all TM research as poor. If your read the AHA report, you'll see that the two highest-quality RCTs in the cardio section of Ospina are on TM. Ospina rated both as high quality. And if you read the AHA report, you'll see that Ospina's methodology has been criticized. Per NPOV, why wouldn't we also mention that? The point about selection of subjects with a favorable opinion toward TM only characterizes four of the RCTs in Canter & Ernst 2003. Yet that statement is generalized to all the research on TM. None of the NIH-funded studies, for example, recruited subjects favorable to TM. Further, the research section in this article cites Ospina to support the statement that TM doesn't have a health benefit beyond relaxation. Yet if you look at the AHA review, you'll see that Ospina found just the opposite. Please, if you're honest and sincere, and if you're eager to uphold the integrity of Wikipedia and adhere to Wikipedia policies, look closely at these issues I've raised. In my mind, these misrepresentations are egregious, and quoting exactly what a source says about TM research and the classification of evidence cannot possibly be a misrepresentation. TimidGuy (talk) 23:20, 26 April 2013 (UTC)
This has come up several times now - specific wording from the middle of an article is highlighted in a way that contradicts the article's conclusions. The conclusions represent the authors' "bottom line" and need to be conveyed to the reader. Here, the conclusions here are not in any way equivocal - TM is among the techniques for which there is "insufficient or inconclusive evidence". This suggests that while there is some evidence suggesting that TM may modestly lower BP, that evidence is not sufficient to recommend TM at this time.

Separately, I got concerned when I spot-checked a source (Psychiatry and Heart Disease) one thread up, and found that editors had skipped over the authors' summary statement in favor of selectively quoting a positive excerpt. This is on top of discovering that an old edition of Braunwald's was being cited, rather than the current edition (which views TM less favorably). I hope you understand that it creates a great deal of work for editors to have to obtain these textbooks and review them to ensure that they are being accurately represented, but that effort seems to be necessary given the way sources are being used here. MastCell Talk 00:00, 27 April 2013 (UTC)

@MastCell (re: both your comments in this section): 1) It is not at all clear that “TM is among the techniques for which there is "insufficient or inconclusive evidence." I would point out that the AHA authors give TM the same level of evidence quality and effect size (Class IIB, Level of Evidence B) as biofeedback, and a better evidence rating than isometric handgrip (which got Level of Evidence C). Its clear, if anything, that TM goes in the same category of interventions as these two. 2) The material TG quotes is from the authors' “Summary and Clinical Recommendations” and is the conclusion of their detailed section on Meditation Techniques. It deserves to be given due weight as the author’s specific recommendation regarding meditation—-more so their 79-word conclusion to the entire, 20,000-word report, in which they are very tight for space. EMP (talk 00:37, 27 April 2013 (UTC)
I have stricken the blatant personal attack per WP:TALK ("removing harmful posts, including personal attacks") which was given without provocation and has no place in this civil discussion about content. User: Fladrif is currently being considered for an indef block at AN/I for exactly this kind of chronic unacceptable behavior. --KeithbobTalk 19:21, 27 April 2013 (UTC)
I went ahead and deleted it entirely; a personal attack by a banned user. Dreadstar 18:32, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
@MastCell, Re: Braunwalds: Examining both the 8th (2008) and 9th (2011) editions, I think that it makes sense to also use the 8th edition, in which the author of the chapter on complementary therapies, the respected cardiologist (and former pres of the AHA), John Vogel references a highly cited 2006 randomized controlled trial [97] in his discussion of TM research. In the later edition, the author of the comparable chapter, Edzard Ernst, only references his own 2004 systematic review, which is much less cited (39 vs 106). Nor does Ernst include the three meta-analyses on TM and hypertension (all in 2007-2008) that the 2013 AHA review (being discussed in this section) saw fit to report. Being three years older does not make the 8th ed. obsolete. To be clear, I’m not suggesting we exclude the 9th edition. I am suggesting that the 8th is also worthy of citation. EMP (talk 02:08, 27 April 2013 (UTC)
No. There is no way on Earth that we're going to cite an outdated edition of a medical textbook simply because you find its wording more congenial. The fact that you'd even propose such an idea - which flies in the face of this site's guidelines and policies - raises serious concerns in my mind. MastCell Talk 21:46, 27 April 2013 (UTC)

@Zad: Re: your sentence, just added to the article. Good for the most part, but the following phrase in bold is incorrect:

A 2013 report by the American Heart Association on alternative approaches to lowering blood pressure stated that the "overall evidence supports that TM modestly lowers BP" and that it was safe to try it for that purpose, but that the supporting data were so sparse that the AHA were "unable to recommend a specific method of practice."

The whole sentence from the AHA report is

As a result of the paucity of data, we are unable to recommend a specific method of practice when TM is used for the treatment of high BP.

They are only saying that they are unable to recommend how TM should be practiced. If they meant that there is a paucity of data for TM as an adjunctive treatment for high BP, they would not have said shortly after this (note bolded words),

Additional and higher-quality studies are required to provide conclusions on the BP-lowering efficacy of meditation forms other than TM.

And immediately after:

TM may be considered in clinical practice to lower BP. Because of many negative studies or mixed results and a paucity of available trials, all other meditation techniques (including MBSR) received a Class III, no benefit, Level of Evidence C recommendation Thus, other meditation techniques are not recommended in clinical practice to lower BP at this time.

But I have no problem with your second sentence,

The report also stated, 'TM may be considered in clinical practice to lower BP.' Additional studies on a broader population are needed to conclusively show this effect.

-- EMP (talk 02:27, 27 April 2013 (UTC)


I'm fairly new to this topic.

The Heart Association has not critically analysed the methods or findings of any of the three meta-analyses it reviewed, Ospina 2007, Rainforth 2007 and Anderson 2008 or the two RCTs by Rainforth & Schneider (PMID 19798037 PMID 23149426), but has simply reported what they have reported. The authors say that the evidence supports that TM modestly lowers BP (p.6), it may be considered in clinical practice to lower BP (p.6), but there is insufficient or inconclusive evidence to recommend the use of "the other techniques" (p.20, which unequivocally includes TM).

Regarding the last point, in their conclusions, the authors mention aerobic and/or dynamic resistance exercise, biofeedback techniques, isometric handgrip, and device-guided breathing methods, and then in the very next sentence say "There is insufficient or inconclusive evidence at the present time to recommend the use of the other techniques reviewed in this scientific statement for the purposes of treating overt hypertension or prehypertension." Logic and English include TM in "the other techniques". I realise that some of the body of the review can be construed as possibly meaning they recommend TM, that is not my reading. In fact, I think they have been very clear and careful in their language, such as using "TM may be considered in clinical practice to lower BP" while not actively recommending it. Allowing people to consider TM is distinct from recommending TM. Their recommendations are clearly spelled out in the conclusions section.

I believe this article should include something along these lines: "The AHA concluded the present evidence is too inconclusive or insufficient to recommend TM for the treatment of overt hypertension or prehypertension." --Anthonyhcole (talk · contribs · email) 10:58, 27 April 2013 (UTC)

I think that would be an interpretation of the conclusion. It's better to simply summarize the report's conclusion, as I have done.[98] TimidGuy (talk) 11:19, 27 April 2013 (UTC)
I'm not persuaded, yet.

the AHA could not recommend a specific method of practicing Transcendental Meditation when using it to treat high blood pressure.

Can you explain something to me? What are the different methods of TM they refer to, and do all/any of the rcts describe which TM method they employ? --Anthonyhcole (talk · contribs · email) 12:53, 27 April 2013 (UTC)
There's only one method of practicing Transcendental Meditation. I have no idea what this sentence in their summary means: "As a result of the paucity of data, we are unable to recommend a specific method of practice when TM is used for the treatment of high BP." Yes, the RCTs typically describe the method of practice. Usually something very close to this description from Schneider's most recent study that the AHA report mentions: "The TM technique is described as a simple, natural, effortless procedure that is practiced 20 minutes twice a day while sitting comfortably with eyes closed.40,44,45 During the practice, it is reported that ordinary thinking processes settle down, and a distinctive wakeful hypometabolic state characterized by neural coherence and physiological rest is gained.46-48." We could perhaps email one of the coauthors and ask what the sentence means. In any case, I think it's accurately represented in the article. TimidGuy (talk) 16:30, 27 April 2013 (UTC)
I agree it is an accurate paraphrase, but I'm not comfortable leaving a statement in the article that you, with your understanding of the topic, can't make sense of. I've emailed the first (and cc'd the second) author asking if he would be willing to offer a clarification. For now, will you agree to the removal of that sentence? --Anthonyhcole (talk · contribs · email) 17:41, 27 April 2013 (UTC)
Sure. Thanks for emailing them. TimidGuy (talk) 10:51, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
Done. --Anthonyhcole (talk · contribs · email) 11:27, 28 April 2013 (UTC)
I have heard back from the lead author and he seems to confirm your reading. I'll write back asking for a little more clarification and whether I can post his response(s) here. --Anthonyhcole (talk · contribs · email) 08:38, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

Rainforth 2007 says of Ospina 2007

The AHRQ report [13] suffered from severe limitations associated with data collection, analytic, and reporting procedures [25].

but the cited source of this criticism (ref #25) is a dead link. Can someone point me to an online version of that document, please? --Anthonyhcole (talk · contribs · email) 03:52, 30 April 2013 (UTC)

Anybody? --Anthonyhcole (talk · contribs · email) 08:38, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

Great to hear that you heard back from Brook. Thanks for contacting him. The MUM website received a complete overhaul in the last 7 months. I can check to see about getting that page restored. It contained the text of peer reviews of Ospina by Harald Walach and Ken Walton. TimidGuy (talk) 10:38, 1 May 2013 (UTC)
The page can be found here.[99] TimidGuy (talk) 10:45, 1 May 2013 (UTC)

I just had a conversation with the lead author of the AHA statement, Robert D Brooks concerning this issue. While he emphasizes that the following is only his personal opinion and that any formal statement would have to come in response to something in the Letters to the Editor, he said to me:

" I would ask that you simply say that in discussion with me we confirm that the LOE is B and COR is IIB, the lack of mention in the conclusions does not change this conclusion." -(personal communication with Robert D Brooks, lead author of the AHA scientific statement on alternate treatments for hypertension)

What formal response to a Letter to the Editor would be required to note that the brief conclusion section of the AHA scientific statement is not meant to trump or contradict or otherwise be taken to be more important than anything said in any of the Summary and Clinical Recommendations sections?Sparaig2 (talk) 21:06, 7 May 2013 (UTC)

I think there is some confusion here, because the conclusions don't "trump" or "contradict" the body of the article. They say the same thing in slightly different terms. TM received a IIb recommendation (as reiterated by Dr. Brook in your email), meaning that additional studies are needed, and that while TM "may be considered", its "usefulness/effectiveness is unknown or not well-established". The conclusion lumps TM under treatments for which "there is insufficient or inconclusive evidence at the present time to recommend." These statements are not contradictory; they're actually two ways of saying similar things. In terms of which wording we choose, I would favor the quoting the conclusion for the reasons I've set forth elsewhere: basically, we already have a serious problem with selective quoting of sources, so the best approach is to be consistent. MastCell Talk 22:15, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
All the therapies mentioned by name* immediately before* the phrase "there is insufficient or inconclusive evidence at the present time to recommend," received the same "LOE is B and COR is IIB" in their respective Summary and Clinical Conclusions sections as TM did in the section on meditation, so to lump TM in with "other techniques," rather than those explicitly named with an LOE is B and COR is IIB, is indefensible. The Summary and Clinical Recommendations sections are the true meat of the paper, not the 2-3 sentence "conclusions" section at the end. Again, I ask: what formal response in the Letters to the Editor page would ever possibly get you to change your stance on this matter?Sparaig2 (talk) 22:32, 7 May 2013 (UTC)
First of all, your reading of the conclusion is incorrect. Device-guided breathing received a IIA, not a IIB. As to why the authors considered isometric handgrip and biofeedback (both IIB) more promising than TM, you'd have to ask them. But they did reach that conclusion - you can't erase or undo it by simply calling it "indefensible". As to what would convince me, a clear published statement from the panel as a whole amending their conclusions would suffice, whether as a letter to the editor or as a formal correction. That would seem to be an bare minimum if we're planning to ignore or rewrite the conclusions of a published reliable source. MastCell Talk 22:50, 7 May 2013 (UTC)

Sorry for neglecting this page. I've just written to the lead author asking how he feels about me reproducing our correspondence here (My email to him, his to me). --Anthonyhcole (talk · contribs · email) 23:17, 7 May 2013 (UTC)

Stating "A 2013 report by the American Heart Association on alternative approaches to lowering blood pressure stated that the "overall evidence supports that TM modestly lowers BP" and that it was safe to try it for that purpose. In its summary of research on meditation and clinical recommendation, the report stated, "TM may be considered in clinical practice to lower BP."" repeats the same twice.
  1. "overall evidence supports that TM modestly lowers BP"
  2. "TM may be considered in clinical practice to lower BP."
While leaving out another point that " it is unclear if its effects are different than other meditation methods" Thus changed text in question. The review also states that the quality of evidence is not great which should be included aswell. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 03:57, 20 May 2013 (UTC)