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Reviewer: Mike Christie (talk · contribs) 01:55, 11 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 01:55, 11 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • What makes these sites reliable sources?
  • Toyota last competed in sports car racing in 1999: needs to be something like "Prior to the development of the TS030 Hybrid, Toyota last competed..."
  • the first car undertook a three-day, private test session at Circuit Paul Ricard, where it was planned to run for 40,000 kilometres (25,000 mi).: not quite right; the source doesn't say it was going to run 40,000 km at Circuit Paul Ricard (which would be hard to achieve in three days!).
  • The crash at Paul Ricard is mentioned twice in consecutive sections; the second mention could be abbreviated.

-- I've copyedited; the prose is workmanlike and good enough for GA. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 15:35, 11 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Fixes look good. Promoting. Mike Christie (talk - contribs - library) 09:58, 14 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]