Talk:Toy Story/GA2
GA Review
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- Well, here's my review:
- Plot:"Removalist" isn't a word.
Other than that, it's fine! When fixed, please contact me.Limetolime Talk to me • look what I did! 21:36, 17 March 2009 (UTC)
- It is a word, although "moving van" or "mover's" might be better, and what do you think about the in-universe perspective of the Plot section? If you're going to continue to do GA reviews, Limetolime, please work on thoroughness. 72.86.49.64 (talk) 23:48, 17 March 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing the article, I appreciate it. Looking at the Moving company article, a removalist is another term for describing it. A Google search reveals that there are plenty of hits for the term. It may not be the most popular term, but perhaps it will educate others on what it means. If you still think it should be changed, then I will. Thanks again for the review and happy editing! --Nehrams2020 (talk) 04:47, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
- I added the word "removalist" to the article. I'm Australian, and it's common in local usage, but I acknowledge it may not be a prominent term worldwide. The problem with a term like "moving van" (which I considered using) is ambiguity - is it a van that's in motion, or a van used for moving items? Tim Bennett (talk) 00:22, 20 March 2009 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing the article, I appreciate it. Looking at the Moving company article, a removalist is another term for describing it. A Google search reveals that there are plenty of hits for the term. It may not be the most popular term, but perhaps it will educate others on what it means. If you still think it should be changed, then I will. Thanks again for the review and happy editing! --Nehrams2020 (talk) 04:47, 18 March 2009 (UTC)
- It is a word, although "moving van" or "mover's" might be better, and what do you think about the in-universe perspective of the Plot section? If you're going to continue to do GA reviews, Limetolime, please work on thoroughness. 72.86.49.64 (talk) 23:48, 17 March 2009 (UTC)