Talk:Tourism in Melbourne

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Tone

Seems to be a tourist brochure more than a Wikipedia article. Words and phrases such as "picturesque", "must for any history buff" etc. Evil Monkey - Hello 20:43, 4 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Complete revision in progress

I have completed a revision of the Lead today, and made a start on the rest of the page, but it is still a work-in-progress and should be complete over the next week. Citations are badly needed and the tone needs to be changed, so that it is less like an advertisement for the Victorian tourism board. Also, statistics and figures need to be updated.--Soulparadox (talk) 08:33, 21 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]