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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 20:24, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello. I'll be reviewing this article in exchange from the Danganronpa review. I'm not familiar with these types of articles but I'll try giving a good review.Tintor2 (talk) 20:24, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Lee Vilenski: I might give it a quick pass but there are some stuff that I kinda wonder:

  • Is it possible to expand the lead? Only one seems to fail common guidelines
    • I've had other GAs pass with a one para lede. The deal is if there is anything that is missing - I'd love for there to be more, but the lede currently covers the location, winners, history and the format of the event. If I can think of anything else, I'll add. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 08:44, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Since this is a small article and I have checked some sources, is it possible to add commentary from the winners and/or runner ups? I'm not familiar with this project but I kinda wonder if this might helpful to expand the article's length. Maybe adding a free pic of Sullivan to the second section might help since he is the first champion.

Anyways, that's all. Ping me once you believe any issue is solved and I'll gladly pass it.Tintor2 (talk) 21:35, 24 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Just recommendations so don't be pressured to do everything. If you think it's okay, I'll pass it. The current article was updated with stuff I asked so there have been constructive additions.Tintor2 (talk) 11:49, 27 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Tintor2, yeah I've had a look and added things that I think fit. Thanks for the review. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 14:54, 30 April 2021 (UTC)[reply]