Talk:Tory Burch/GA1
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[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- 30-acre should be converted into decare. The lead is a little thin, and all sections should be mentioned, yet there is little on her personal life there, especially her adult part. The business part is fine in the lead.
- I don't know much about decares and don't see them at Template:Convert/list_of_units. I switched to hectares.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 19:40, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
- 30-acre should be converted into decare. The lead is a little thin, and all sections should be mentioned, yet there is little on her personal life there, especially her adult part. The business part is fine in the lead.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars etc.:
- No edit wars etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- On hold—a little longer lead, and the decare thing, and it is a good article. Arsenikk (talk) 14:50, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
- I am not sure how much more you want in the WP:LEAD. If you still want more, let me know.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 19:51, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
- Passing GA. You are right about the hectare—careful reading shows that the decare is only used in Norway and the Ottoman empire (guess where I am from). The lead looks great. Arsenikk (talk) 22:28, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
- I am not sure how much more you want in the WP:LEAD. If you still want more, let me know.--TonyTheTiger (t/c/bio/WP:CHICAGO/WP:LOTM) 19:51, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
- On hold—a little longer lead, and the decare thing, and it is a good article. Arsenikk (talk) 14:50, 11 September 2008 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: