Talk:Torpedo...Los!/GA1
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Reviewer: Status (talk · contribs) 04:11, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- Lead is a bit lacking. Can it be expanded a bit?
- How is it now?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- When it last sold in 1989 --> When it was last sold in 1989
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- Details --> Description
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- Critical commentary --> Reception
- Fixed.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 07:00, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- I see no other issues with the article. It is well written and sourced.
- All issues have been addressed; passing the article! Statυs (talk) 07:16, 21 June 2012 (UTC)
- comment
Copyvio in the long quotes in footnotes should be addressed. Author should use original wording rather that quote everything. MathewTownsend (talk) 21:40, 26 July 2012 (UTC)