Talk:Torp station/GA1
GA Review
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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 01:32, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
Comments:
- The first two sentences of the second paragraph of the lead both begin with "The station". Change one of them to avoid repetition.
Other than that, the article looks good, and I will put it on hold pending the above fix. ---Dough4872 01:32, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
- Done. Thank you for the review. Arsenikk (talk) 10:39, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
- I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 16:42, 15 November 2009 (UTC)