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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 23:23, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 23:23, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • "He was removed from the ice during the second period of the Sting's January 31 game against the Guelph Storm, and the OHL released a statement on February 14 that DeAngelo would be suspended for eight games following a violation of the league's Harassment and Abuse/Diversity Policy." The year should be added here, and could be removed for the last sentence of the paragraph.
  • "Despite these incidents," Not mentioned in text.
  • "director of amateur scouting" Is this a title that should be capitalized?
  • Nothing for his personal life except his political views?
    • The deeper he falls into extremism, the harder it is to find anything outside of his political views (he also doesn't have a romantic partner or children, which is usually an easy go-to). I found one charity event he participated in in 2018. Kncny11 (shoot) 16:23, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "US president" should be expanded and linked.
  • Picked up a 97% using the copyvio tool, but that website seems to be scrapping content from Wikipedia.

That should be it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 06:13, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]