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Reviewer: The C of E (talk · contribs) 12:03, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]


I will take on the review of this. Should be done in a few days The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 12:03, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • Where was he born? That should be in the lead
 Done - Incorporated into existing sentence. Doggo375 (talk) 22:48, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • As per MOS:CONVERSIONS, Should really be using the {{convert}} template rather than spelling out weight amounts (and should be the shorthand unit codes for consistency and metric should be using metres)
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 22:48, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Liberatore was born in Melbourne, Victoria to father Tony Liberatore, former Western Bulldogs player and Brownlow Medallist, and mother Jane." Can we reword that so it flows better please?
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 07:12, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Although he put time into cricket, playing seriously with his school and St.Bernard's Cricket Club." MOS:OP-ED violation. It also appears to be a run-on sentence.
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 09:53, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Liberatore made his debut in the Western Bulldogs' Round one defeat to Essendon" MOS:CAPS
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 03:38, 28 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
 Done - Provided a reference using that wording. Doggo375 (talk) 07:45, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The 2012 season was not a good one for Liberatore," OP-ED
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 07:10, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • What sort of drug offences was he sanctioned for?
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 07:10, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 03:25, 28 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Liberatore redeemed himself the following season, establishing himself as one of the AFL's premier inside midfielders" MOS:PUFFERY
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 09:34, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 22:48, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "While 2014 was a chaotic year", OP-ED again
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 03:25, 28 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "had a horror 2015", OP-ED
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 03:38, 28 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • 2020—present: Return to form section, OP-ED again
Do you mean the name of the section or the content of the section itself? Doggo375 (talk) 07:52, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • The Honours section is unreferenced
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 07:33, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 18, 37, 39, ABC is not a print media outlet so shouldn't be italicised
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 22:48, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 31, no publisher
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 22:27, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 34, italicise Herald Sun for consistency
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 22:28, 21 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 106, consistency needed with the likes of reference 104
 Done Doggo375 (talk) 23:48, 26 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • There are 2 non-free images of him here, is that necessary?

Status query

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The C of E, Doggo375, what is the status of this nomination? The most recent edits to the article and to this page are over a month old, and I can't tell whether everything has been addressed above. I hope the review can get moving again. Thank you very much. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:35, 2 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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