Talk:Tom Kinslow
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 17:32, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 17:32, 7 November 2013 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- The LOC refs should have accessdates.
- "AA leagues convened to rendered their findings." to render
- "Kinslow's behavior had become a problem for Mack and Pirates." Mack and the Pirates. I thought this was a blatant error at first, but Mack did in fact manage Pittsburgh for a little while. Learned something new.
- "to 225-pound (102 kg) during" to 225 pounds. If the kg conversion template is messing that up then remove that.
- Having St. Louis Browns linked in later career would be nice.
- "In the 1900 United States Census, he living with father," he was living with his father, also the comma isn't needed after father.
Article is now on hold, and I'll pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 17:56, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for your thorough review, I made all of the changes above except the access dates. According to WP:CITEHOW, access dates are only needed for website only sources. Since physical newspapers are unchangeable, there is no need for an access date. This point is re-iterated further down here Wikipedia:Citing sources#Links and ID numbers. Thanks again !Neonblak talk - 18:40, 10 November 2013 (UTC)
- Everything now looks good, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 03:56, 11 November 2013 (UTC)
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