Talk:Tom Conlon/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:24, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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If I didn't say it before, I should have done, link "footballer" to association football.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Football League" link.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Link Stevenage.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Link Loan (sports).
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"his hometown club" any personal life e.g. the fact he was born near Stoke is in the infobox but not in the prose.
Added birth info.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Link scout.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"in a game against" in a game not really needed.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"the "Posh" first" similar comment to before. Either introduce every nickname after the first formal team name mention, or ditch them. This is particularly important for things like "Posh" and "Boro" when there's literally no link to the club names.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"2013–14 campaign" put "campaign" in the pipe.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"substitute's" link.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"2014–15 season" put "season" in the pipe. Check all subsequent "season"/"campaign" stuff.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"following season turned out to be Conlon's breakthrough season " quick repeat of season.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"an injury sustained" what sort?
Changed it.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"Hertfordshire side's lead" most readers won't connect Stevenage to Hertfordshire.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"season, scoring twice, as" so he didn't score in any other game that season...
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"cruciate knee ligament injury" link.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"The 2017–18 season saw Conlon" overlinked.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"was a key member of the Vale's midfield" where is that in the source?
Changed it.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Link sent off.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Link volley.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Link free-kick.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
"win at Exeter City;[45]" overlinked.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Spaced hyphens in titles of refs should be en-dashes.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Scorelines should use en-dashes not hyphens.
Done.Echetus Xe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

That's it for now. On hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 17:46, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

- OK, I've addressed those concerns.EchetusXe 12:31, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  - Cool, looks fine. Promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 13:12, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]