Talk:Tom's Rhinoplasty

Tom's Rhinoplasty has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

Tom's Rhinoplasty is part of the South Park (season 1) series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.

Article milestones
Date	Process	Result
January 16, 2010	Good article nominee	Listed
February 5, 2010	Featured topic candidate	Not promoted
March 6, 2010	Featured topic candidate	Promoted

Current status: Good article

Animation: American / Television / Computer / South Park Low‑importance

	Animation portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Animation, a collaborative effort to build an encyclopedic guide to animation on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, you can edit the article attached to this page, help out with the open tasks, or contribute to the discussion.AnimationWikipedia:WikiProject AnimationTemplate:WikiProject AnimationAnimation articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
	This article is supported by the American animation work group.
	This article is supported by the Animated television work group.
	This article is supported by the Computer animation work group.
	This article is supported by the South Park task force (assessed as Mid-importance).

Comedy

	Comedy portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Comedy, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of comedy on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.ComedyWikipedia:WikiProject ComedyTemplate:WikiProject ComedyComedy articles
???	This article has not yet received a rating on the project's importance scale.

Holidays

	Holidays portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Holidays, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of holidays on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.HolidaysWikipedia:WikiProject HolidaysTemplate:WikiProject HolidaysHolidays articles
???	This article has not yet received a rating on the project's importance scale.

LGBTQ+ studies

This article is of interest to WikiProject LGBTQ+ studies, which tries to ensure comprehensive and factual coverage of all LGBTQ-related issues on Wikipedia. For more information, or to get involved, please visit the project page or contribute to the discussion.LGBTQ+ studiesWikipedia:WikiProject LGBTQ+ studiesTemplate:WikiProject LGBTQ+ studiesLGBTQ+ studies articles

Television: Episode coverage Low‑importance

	Television portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject Television, a collaborative effort to develop and improve Wikipedia articles about television programs. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page where you can join the discussion. To improve this article, please refer to the style guidelines for the type of work.TelevisionWikipedia:WikiProject TelevisionTemplate:WikiProject Televisiontelevision articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
	This article is supported by the Episode coverage task force (assessed as Low-importance).

United States: Animation / Television / Colorado Low‑importance

	United States portal This article is within the scope of WikiProject United States, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of topics relating to the United States of America on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the ongoing discussions. Template Usage Articles Requested! Become a Member Project Talk Alerts United StatesWikipedia:WikiProject United StatesTemplate:WikiProject United StatesUnited States articles
Low	This article has been rated as Low-importance on the project's importance scale.
	Animation portal This article is supported by WikiProject Animation - American animation work group.
	Television portal This article is supported by American television task force.
	Colorado portal This article is supported by WikiProject Colorado, our collaboration to create, improve, and update Wikipedia articles about the U.S. State of Colorado. To comment about this article, select the Add topic tab above. For questions about, or to make suggestions for Colorado articles, go to our project's talk page. We invite you to join us!

Untitled

What is the name of the song that plays when Wendy is reflecting on losing Stan, and you see the flashbacks and projectile vomiting?

Trivia

where be the trivia —Preceding unsigned comment added by KariaRockz (talk • contribs) 05:28, 2 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Merge proposal

Does this article pass the notability test? Alastairward (talk) 20:52, 18 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

~~:No it doesnt. Merge per WP:V: "If no reliable, third-party sources can be found featuring significant coverage of a topic, Wikipedia should not have an article on it."~~ Change opinion on this article - Tom's Rhinoplasty appears to have been subject of a number of scholarly reviews on LGBT studies, although I cannot access the pieces themselves. -- The Red Pen of Doom 05:50, 14 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

See This page to discuss about the merger. --Gman124^talk 16:31, 10 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

"Appears", but unless we know that these multiple studies do more than "passingly mention" the episode, we cannot know for sure. BIGNOLE (Contact me) 06:06, 14 March 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Orphaned references in Tom's Rhinoplasty

I check pages listed in Category:Pages with incorrect ref formatting to try to fix reference errors. One of the things I do is look for content for orphaned references in wikilinked articles. I have found content for some of Tom's Rhinoplasty's orphans, the problem is that I found more than one version. I can't determine which (if any) is correct for this article, so I am asking for a sentient editor to look it over and copy the correct ref content into this article.

Reference named "EpGuide":

From Damien (South Park): Stall, Sam (2009). The South Park Episode Guide: Volume 1, Seasons 1-5. New York City, New York: Running Press. p. 29. ISBN 0762435615.
From Starvin' Marvin (South Park): Stall, Sam (2009). The South Park Episode Guide: Volume 1, Seasons 1-5. New York City, New York: Running Press. p. 25. ISBN 0762435615.

I apologize if any of the above are effectively identical; I am just a simple computer program, so I can't determine whether minor differences are significant or not. AnomieBOT ⚡ 04:44, 3 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Tom's Rhinoplasty/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: The Flash ^{talk} 01:47, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yello! Saw this at GAN and I'd love to assist WP:SP on their FT project, so I'll be reviewing this article. Looks good but I do have a number of small concerns. Check out Talk:I Married Marge/GA1 for my structural system in reviews, and let's get started. The Flash ^{talk} 01:47, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Can you come up with a better adjective then "insanely"?
- Extremely? — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"'Tom's Rhinoplasty', the show's first Valentine's Day epiosde,[...]" -> typo
- Fixed. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Forgot to add a quotation marker after "Species."
- Fixed. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"Wrapped" seems a bit slang-ish, am I wrong? Perhaps, "concluded"?
- Concluded it is. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Plot summary

Who does Wendy suggest ideas to? Stan?
- Correct. Fixed. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Wikilink to Kenny's page.
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"Concurrently, a large group of women rampages the streets[...]" -> "[...]group of women rampage[...]"
- Fixed. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Combine the second and third sentences in the third paragraph, please.
- Ok. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"She also thanks Mrs. Kimball (one of the women from the group of women that chased Garrison)[...]" -> "She also thanks one of the women from the group that chased Garrison named Mrs. Kimball"
- Ok. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I'm a bit confused—by "figures out what actually happened" do you mean that Wendy framed Ms. Ellen and caused her death by Iraqis? If so, it needs to be clarified.
- Let me know if that is clearer. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Production

It mentions Parker directed, too, but the infobox and the lead mention that the director was uncredited.
- Fixed. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"[...]but Comedy Central censors made them change the line.[...]" -> "made Parker and Stone"
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Is that bit about the Postal controversy actually a "production" note?
- Moved to Reception. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"[...]in the background that looks exactly Craig Tucker[...]" -> "looks exactly like Craig Tucker"
- Fixed. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
I think some of the bits about Wendy saying "fuck" for the first time and things like it should be moved in the "Cultural references" section, though that should be renamed "Cultural references and impact"
- Moved that bit and renamed the section. If you think other stuff should be moved to, let me know what. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"The idea featured in the script of Ms. Ellen taking one of the children to dinner for passing[...]" -> awkwardly worded there, don't you think?
- I fixed it a bit. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Maybe you should move their surprise about fan reaction to the "Reception" section?
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Theme

There's no mention in the plot about Garrison being a model.
- I changed the Plot summary part a bit to address it. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Nothing else here, but maybe you can expand it with some of the bits at "Cartman Gets an Anal Probe" and "Weight Gain 4000"?
- I added a bit. Is this what you meant? — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Cultural references

You should rename the section to "Cultural references and impact"
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The first paragraph should be broke up a bit.
OK. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Delink to Hasselholf (already linked above)
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"When Ms. Ellen asks the class the last lesson[...]" -> "asks the class about the last lesson"
- Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

Rename "Reception and release" (?)
- Ok. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"[...]in a three-DVD in November 1998." -> "in a three-disc DVD" perhaps?
- Changes to "three-disc DVD set". — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Images

All 3 images are fine; the infobox image has a very weak rationale though, so can you beef it up at all? Just a passing mention of the animation process would even be suitable.
Can you change the caption for the infobox image? It's rather....lackluster, ya know?
- I think the new caption addresses both these concerns. — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Final say

GA review (see here for criteria)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):
There's still an awkward and abrupt transition between "Wendy reclaims Stan as her boyfriend" and "Wendy speaks with the Iraqi men in fluent Arabic and pays them with a wad of American money."
I think I fixed it now. — Hun ter Ka hn 01:01, 16 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
IMDb link in Ref 19 is throwing it all off; I'd suggest removing the link entirely.
Done. — Hun ter Ka hn 01:01, 16 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:
~~Needs those two things fixed, but other then that looking great. Fix those and I'll pass this. Cheers, The Flash ^{talk} 23:58, 15 January 2010 (UTC)~~[reply]

I've gone ahead and passed it. Great work, The Flash ^{talk} 01:15, 16 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! — Hun ter Ka hn 02:39, 15 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

A Commons file used on this page or its Wikidata item has been nominated for deletion

The following Wikimedia Commons file used on this page or its Wikidata item has been nominated for deletion:

Natasha Henstridge at Heart Truth 2009.jpg

Participate in the deletion discussion at the nomination page. —Community Tech bot (talk) 21:47, 17 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]