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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 04:12, 4 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]


Copyvio check

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Earwig says good to go.

  • Noted.

Files

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All images are relevant, high quality and copyright-free:

File:Two Fishermen on an Aspidochelone, c. 1270 (cropped) (cropped).JPG: valid public domain rationale;
File:Witan hexateuch.jpg: valid public domain rationale;
File:Downfall of Númenor.svg: CC-BY-SA 4.0, uploaded to Commons by nominator;
File:Rolfs sidste kamp - Louis Moe (17009) - cropped.png: valid public domain rationale;
File:Normans Bayeux.jpg: CC-BY-SA 3.0;
File:Finwë Lozenge.png: CC-BY-SA 4.0;
File:GOTHMOG-1 (detail).jpg: CC-BY-SA 3.0;
File:Hunting Horn MET sf17-190-379s1.jpg: valid public domain rationale.
  • Noted.

Prose

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  • I have an issue with the lead sentence, particularly the line "especially poetry, and made use of it in his writings both in his poetry" – just reads jaded by using "poetry" and "his" twice.
  • Edited.
  • Wikilink "the Middle Ages" or add the main article template to § The Middle Ages.
  • Linked. 'Main' wouldn't work here.
  • Wikilinking "By the sixth century, Anglo-Saxon England" to History of Anglo-Saxon England creates quite the sea of blue. Any alternative ways of linking available?
  • Done.
  • "Tolkien stated that when he read a medieval work, he wanted to write a modern one in the same tradition." – this reads a bit singular; could it possibly by rephrased to something like "Tolkien stated that whenever he read a medieval work, he wanted to write a modern one in the same tradition." etc?
  • Done.
  • Done.
  • "but these are interwoven with classical ideas like Atlantis on the one hand, and modern cosmology with a round world on the other." – I could be incorrect but "on the one hard" sounds fairly informal to me.
  • I'd say it was quite standard, but I've reworded.
  • "like Christian angels" – could this not be wikilinked to Angels in Christianity? Granted that article is in bad shape :/ Also:
  • Done.
  • The sentence has a number of appositives that make it a bit hard to read; could it be rephrased?
  • Split.
  • "and northern courage" – northern courage?
  • Edited.
  • "In Tolkien as in the medieval epics" – this wording is kinda strange to me.
  • Edited.
  • The sentence starting "Scholars note that Tolkien went" is quite long. Could it perhaps be split?
  • Split.
  • "into the form of an animal, like Beorn" – already wikilinked in § Beowulf.
  • Gone.

Refs

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All sources used are RS. Spotcheck—no concerns with refs 3, 4, 10, 20, 26 or 38.

  • Noted.

But I cannot seem to find what ref 16 is citing?

  • The elegiac tone, i.e. in Burns's case, the acceptance of downfall and death in Norse mythology ("the North").
  • I see!
  • All refs in Secondary use full stops whilst those in Primary do not; is there a reason for this?
  • No idea why that happens. Fixed.

Other

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Templates, navs and cats good.

  • Noted.
  • Done.
  • Done.
  • Recommend adding WP:ALT text if you can.
  • Added.
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