Talk:Toa Payoh MRT station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:45, 7 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Link Toa Payoh in the lead.
" a set of colourful tiles " coloured perhaps (colourful sounds like a tourist brochure).
"Exit D of Toa Payoh MRT station." no full stop required, it's a fragment.
"to relief the" relieve.
"Thomson-Sembawang" -> "Thomson–Sembawang"
"Novena stations and" is there a link for Novena?
"S$96.8 million (US$45.81.." as per the other review, reduce $ conversion to 1 decimal place for this and others.
Could link topping out.
"As an effort for people to get familiar.." -> "In an effort to familiarise people with..."
" sneak preview" no need "sneak", not encyclopedic.
""987. About 44,000 people" merge with "during which time"
"During the opening, Toa Payoh ..." station is mentioned three times in this one sentence... repetitive.
"has been replaced" ->"was replaced".
"The name, Toa Payoh, means..." -> "Toa Payoh means..."
"Interchange, HDB Hub,[34] " HDB Hub can be linked here (and in the lead)
"the Braddell and " link?
"Concourse level of the station." no full stop required, it's a fragment.
" Giving a sense of movement, the rainbow colours represent various races" delete, the next sentence covers it more encyclopedically.
Ref 26 has a spaced hyphen, should be en-dash.
Ref 24, work should be in italics.
It says "Opened 7 November 1987" in infobox but then it says "The station opened for passenger service on 7 November 1989" is this a typo?

Thanks for the review so far. Addressed the points above.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:02, 8 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]