Talk:Tjenare Mollberg, hur är det fatt?

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Another nice looking article, which I will review shortly! --K. Peake 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
  • Thanks.

• "is no. 45 in" → "is No. 45 in"
  • Fixed.

• The best-known works part should be not be in the first para, as this info belongs around the area of the things mentioned as noted are
  • Fixed.

• Remove wikilink on Poland
  • Done.

• The subtitle sentence should be the second one of the first para instead
  • Fixed.

Context

• Good
  • Noted.

Song

Music and verse form

• Add text to the audio sample to establish relevance, plus the file is missing United States tag
  • Done.

• Pipe Songs to Fredmans sånger on the img text
  • Already done.

• Pipe ⁶
  ₈ time to Time signature
  • Done. I'll note that this discards information; should Time signature ever become better structured, it might be that each time gets a subsection, at which point the new pipe will cause the link to fail to redirect properly. This is a general point, that redirects are often more specific than pipes even where they seem momentarily equivalent.

• Pipe ariette to Aria
  • Done.

• "and its French performers brought it to Stockholm's" → "and was brought to Stockholm's" adding "by its French performers" after the theatre
  • Not sure that passive for active is an improvement.

• Remove "the" before musicologist
  • No, this is a normal British usage.

• "and the reality that the epistle was describing." → "and the reality described on the epistle."
  • Done.

Lyrics

• The writing years are not mentioned by the source
  • Kommentar tab, fixed. Massengale confirms.

• Pipe strings to String instrument
  • Done.

• Pipe notaries to Notary
  • Done.

• "The shoe-mender hits him," → "The shoe-mender hits Mollberg,"
  • Done.

Reception and legacy

• Pipe Joseph II of Austria to Joseph II, Holy Roman Emperor and polska to Polska (dance) on the img text
  • Done.

• "calls it a" → "calls the epstile a"
  • Reworded.

• "Britten Austin explains that this" → "Austin explains that this" unless that is not the real name, then keep as Britten Austin
  • BA is the surname.

• "Britten Austin notes that Mollberg is" → "Austin notes that Mollberg is" unless the above is true
  • Ditto.

• "how another member of the Order of Bacchus, Kilberg, meets" → "how fellow Order of Bacchus member Kilberg meets"
  • Done.

• If "a barrel is dripping"." is the end of a full sentence in the original source, then punctuation should be inside speech marks
  • Done.

• "inspired Bellman to song, but that this epistle" → "inspired Bellman's work, but this epistle"
  • Reworded.

• Pipe freedom of expression to Freedom of speech
  • Done.

• Wikilink flute
  • Done.

• Wikilink cello
  • Done.

• Pipe EMI to EMI Records if this is the label referenced
  • Done.

• "is corroborated by" → "is corroborated by the"
  • Done.

• "in Fredman's ep. 45"." → "in Fredman's ep. 45."" since this is a full sentence
  • Done.

• Pipe Lake Mälaren to Mälaren on the img text
  • Done.

• Remove wikilink on Sätra for the second img
  • Done.

References

• Copyvio score looks solid at 25.9%!!
  • Noted.

• Add the language parameters to refs 10 and 13
  • Added.

• WP:OVERLINK of Bellman Society on ref 11
  • Done.

Sources

• Good

External links

• Good, especially with the YouTube publishers added!
  • Thanks.

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until everything is fixed; once again, you have submitted a mostly good article! --K. Peake 08:39, 6 February 2022 (UTC)
  • All done to date. Chiswick Chap (talk) 09:39, 6 February 2022 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, I added in a brief copy edit but this was totally fine elsewise before! --K. Peake 22:16, 6 February 2022 (UTC)