Talk:Titan (moon)/GA1

GA on hold

This is on hold for 7 days. Please fix the following:

1. Lead is not a summary of the article, please expand some. It's a bit more of a collection of facts at the moment, make it more of a summary.
2. Retrieved dates on refs are highly inconsistent. Make them the same and wikilink them: January 7, 2007. Look over other ref formatting for consistency
3. Placement of footnote numbers is very inconsistent. Fix them so they are like what is currently footnote 7 in "Physical characteristics" -"system after Ganymede(7).
4. Don't link solo years. Unlink things like 1650. It is okay to link decades, like 2000s.
5. The section "Titan in fiction" is one sentence. Expand it or merge it into the main text.
6. Visibility from Earth is only two lines. Can it be expanded?

--Rlevse 12:49, 7 January 2007 (UTC)

I've worked on the refs/footnotes to hopefully make them more consistent and always after punctuation. I'm not the best person to tackle the other issues though I fear. I expanded "Titan in fiction", but only in a minor way. Cheers SeanMack 15:44, 7 January 2007 (UTC)

I moved the "Visibility from Earth" info to the top of Surface features. It makes more sense here anyway. SeanMack 05:32, 13 January 2007 (UTC)

• While the lead still needs work, it's improved good enough that I'm passing it. Nice work.Rlevse 12:29, 14 January 2007 (UTC)
• The introduction part talks about 8 asteroids but lists only 7 (Vesta, Pallas, Iris, Ceres, Hebe, Juno, Melpomene). [unregistered user]