Talk:Timetoget

GA Review

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Comments:

1. Is there a logo that can be added to the infobox?
2. Comma not needed in sentence "It was the first private company allowed to operate passenger trains, since the amalgamation of operations into the Norwegian State Railways."
3. In the sentence "The one unit was not able to complete the route due to technical problems, but the other train was." add "able to" at the end.
4. In the sentence "At the same time, NSB said one possibility could be that NSB sold their 89% stake in the company, thereby bypassing NSB's rules for engineer training", you use "NSB" three times. Can some instances be replaced?
5. Comma not needed in sentence "Timetoget started negotiations with the Swedish company BK Tåg, to try to establish a cooperation that would allow Swedish engineers to be used."
6. In phrase "The two environmental organization", "organization should be pluralized.
7. In sentence "Several municipalities were concerned that they would loose even more money if they did not sell.", change "loose" to "lose".
8. In sentence "An internal document the newspaper Varden received access to, showed that NSB needed to calm down the heated discussions with the labor unions, and that their negativity to Timetoget was a tactical move to satisfy the labor unions", comma not needed after "to".
9. Change "wihtout" to "without".

I am placing the article on hold. Dough4872 (talk) 14:21, 15 June 2009 (UTC)

I have investigated, but have not found any logo. Other issues has been taken care of. Rettetast (talk) 11:39, 26 June 2009 (UTC)

I will pass the article. Dough4872 (talk) 22:43, 28 June 2009 (UTC)

Logo can be found through Wayback Machine: https://web.archive.org/web/20001007011723/http://www.timetoget.no/images/logo_uten_as.gif As seen in the logo, they traded as TIMEtoget, not Timetoget. Bergenga (talk) 18:13, 12 May 2015 (UTC)

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