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Good articleTim Breslin has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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April 18, 2013Good article nomineeListed
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on January 16, 2013.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that after Tim Breslin's death the American Hockey League's Chicago Wolves created a team award in his honor?

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Reviewer: Khazar2 (talk · contribs) 12:28, 18 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'll be glad to take this review; sorry you've had to wait so long for a reviewer. Initial comments to follow in the next 1-3 days. Thanks in advance for your work on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 12:28, 18 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Checklist

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An initial pass shows no immediate issues. I did make some tweaks as I went for grammar and style; please double-check that I haven't inadvertently introduced any error, and feel free to revert anything you disagree with. Starting checklist below.

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7. Overall assessment. Thanks for this well-researched, well-written article. A clear pass.

Archiving citations

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I archived the page's non-Highbeam citations for future reference; they can be found below in case of dead links. -- Khazar2 (talk) 13:16, 18 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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