Talk:Tiberius Gemellus/GA1
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:47, 24 January 2018 (UTC)
Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:47, 24 January 2018 (UTC)
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- No DAB links
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Prose Suggestions
[edit]- or making him kill himself, suggest or by forcing him to kill himself.
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- and Vipsania Agrippina, suggest and his wife, Vipsania Agrippina.
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- aid of Macro suggest that you make mention of Macro being Praetorian prefect.
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- refer to his mental age. suggest refer to his level of maturity or refer to his mental development.
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- It seems reasonable to assume suggest It is possible that.
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- he apparently didn't know how to kill himself with it suggest he is said to have not known how to use it to kill himself or he is said to have not known how to kill himself with it.
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- having prayed for and anticipating suggest change to praying for and anticipating.
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- @SpartaN: That is all my comments. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 16:05, 25 January 2018 (UTC)
- That's all of 'em. SpartaN (talk) 16:19, 25 January 2018 (UTC)
P.S.
[edit]- @SpartaN and Iazyges: References has Levick 1999, but Bibliography lists Levick 1966. – Finnusertop (talk ⋅ contribs) 21:23, 25 January 2018 (UTC)