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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 06:05, 24 September 2016 (UTC)
Well constructed, will get back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 06:05, 24 September 2016 (UTC)
Section 1
[edit]- Para 1; sentence 2; Use past tense of the word "record" i.e "recorded". Comma(,) after Sir Richard Siward must be removed. Because it completely disrupts the sentence meaning.
- Para 1; last sentence; Add a comma(,) after "In 1302".
- Para 2; In the sentence "...rs to George Crichton, Lord High Admiral of Scotland and later 1st ....". Add "to the" after "later".
- Para 2: Capitalize "i" at the start of second sentence.
Section 2
[edit]No issues in this section.
Lead
[edit]In last sentence change the tense to "took place" instead of "have taken", because the years of happening were mentioned.
Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 09:13, 24 September 2016 (UTC)
- All good suggestions, done so far. Richard Nevell (talk) 11:28, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- I've done a couple of edits. Good to go.
- GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 12:21, 25 September 2016 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing the article! Richard Nevell (talk) 12:28, 25 September 2016 (UTC)