Talk:Thurman Tucker/GA1
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Reviewer: Albacore (talk • contribs • count) 17:25, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
Will review shortly. Albacore (talk) 17:25, 10 September 2011 (UTC)
Comments
- Could replace some "he"s in the second paragraph of the lead for some "Thurman"s
- After retirement, he worked as a major league scout and insurance agent until his death in 1953. 1993?
- A Fair Use image would be nice.
- ...he was a three-sport athlete, playing baseball, where he was a second baseman, basketball, and track and field. perhaps use parentheses ...he was a three-sport athlete, playing baseball, (where he was a second baseman)...
- Just curious, where did you find the second reference? I tried searching for it on Google News and pqasb archiver but couldn't find it.
- After playing in 97 games, finishing with an average of .390, Tucker played for the Oklahoma City Indians playing in 40 games. overuse of "playing"
- ...the season ended, Chicago White Sox farm manager delink White Sox since it's linked earlier
- Tucker finished the season with a batting average of .287 and six triples delink batting average
- with a batting average of .288 and 20 doubles, both career highs. delink doubles
- in mid-June, the Padres sold his contract to the Oklahoma City Indians of the Texas League. Caps please
Issues fixed. I'll look for a good fair use image. I've held off on that because I feel like there has to be a free image out there somewhere, but I've come up empty in my usual searches. Until I find one I might as well add one in. As for Ref #2, I had access to the Sporting News archives for a while and was able to save my results for a few, including Tucker. They're the ones that have all the personal life info for most players of the era, so I use it as often as I can with the remaining players i have copies for. Thanks for the review. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 18:45, 10 September 2011 (UTC)