Talk:Thunder Force IV/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 01:46, 29 July 2018 (UTC)

• I'll do this one. Courcelles (talk) 01:46, 29 July 2018 (UTC)

• " is a shoot 'em up" in the lead. I know it seems obvious, but the words "video game" need to be in that sentence somewhere.
• "sometimes are the bosses in the middle of the stages" Don't need this are
• "Having taken the reins for the Thunder Force series, the team felt a responsibility to surpass the quality of earlier series titles." needs a source.
• "According to music and sound team head Naosuke Arai, the composer for Thunder Force IV debuted on Thunder Force III and also composed some original music for Devil's Crush, where he showed great improvement." This sentence needs a rewrite almost form the ground up.
  • Arai is not the composer, he lead the team which includes the composer
• "The even included a tournament" Not the, either they or it.
• Point out what the Mega Drive was known as in North America.
• "ship.[16][1]" Refs go in numerical order. Lots more of this in "reception" section
• Images have acceptable FUR's

• Otherwise looks good. Courcelles (talk) 01:55, 29 July 2018 (UTC)

  @Courcelles: Thanks for the review, all points addressed. TarkusAB^talk 16:44, 31 July 2018 (UTC)

• Looks good now, promoted. Courcelles (talk) 17:26, 31 July 2018 (UTC)