Talk:Thug Stories

This phrase

"dealing with the fairer sex", is not encyclopedic. Maybe the current editors could rephrase that. Thanks. Doctors without suspenders 00:00, 23 September 2006 (UTC)

Fixed it.

I was wondering why this says "It marked the first time Bone recorded as a trio for a full album, as troubled former member Bizzy Bone was finally ousted." That should still leave 4 members of Bone. Layzie, Krayzie, Wish & Flesh. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 116.240.231.75 (talk) 16:24, 21 November 2007 (UTC)

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Article requirements: Y Start: reasonably complete infobox; lead section with overview of album; track listing; reference to at least primary personnel by name; Categorization by at least artist and year. Y C: all of start and (1) cover art in infobox; (2) at least one additional section of prose; (3) track lengths & song authors in tracklist; (4) a personnel section including all musicians. B: all of C and (1) most technical details in infobox; (2) technical personnel in personnel section; (3) no obvious issues with sourcing; (4) no obvious issues with readability, though it may not conform completely to style guidelines; (5) no glaring omissions of information (see some suggestions at WP:ALBUM) or extraneous information, like trivia. -->The article could use improved referencing especially in the "Songs and music" section to verify that this is not original research. "Featuring a slightly matured style with this LP, the group leaned more heavily towards its harmonic roots than its "thug" origins"--who says? Who says that certain songs "center on the members' past and present issues with women"? In the lead, "troubled former member Bizzy Bone was finally ousted"--who said he was troubled? Is there verification somewhere that he was ousted following delays? (That finally.) There may also be some neutrality concerns. "boasts of Bone's superior flowing skills while simultaneously showcasing them"--who says that the flowing skills in the song are superior? This seems to present an opinion about the piece. We can report on the reviews others provide, but we don't review the material ourselves. Additionally, the article could benefit from more information of the sort suggested at WP:ALBUM, including a section on actual critical reception to the album, if such material is available. Higher Classes are not assigned by WikiProject Album. Please review "the perfect article" and, if already B class, consider seeking additional feedback from Wikipedia:Good articles or Wikipedia:Featured articles. Please see Wikipedia:WikiProject_Albums/Assessment for additional information on article class. To request a reassessment from the Album project, when concerns are addressed, please see "requesting an assessment". --Moonriddengirl (talk) 15:47, 26 July 2008 (UTC)

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