Talk:Three Castles/GA1

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Reviewer: Zawed (talk · contribs) 03:10, 31 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I will take this one, comments to follow in next few days. Zawed (talk) 03:10, 31 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Very nicely written, I did a couple of tweaks in one section so please check you are OK with them. The only (minor) issues I picked up:

"In 1135, a major Welsh revolt took place...": is there a specific article that the Welsh revolt could be linked to? I assume there isn't but just wanted to check.
link Llywelyn ap Gruffudd?
link William de Braose?
retrieval date for note 21?
Images all appear to be appropriately tagged.
There is one dupe link, to Edward I, but the first mention is actually to him as a prince with the second being when he was king so I would be inclined to let that slide.
DAB link to White Castle
External links check OK

Cheers! All done, bar the Welsh revolt, which doesn't seem to have a good target link that I can find... Hchc2009 (talk) 08:42, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I consider this article to be well-written in a neutral tone and sourced appropriately. Passing as GA. Zawed (talk) 09:30, 2 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]