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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:48, 14 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • I imagine a feasible redirect based on the lead is Highway 2S.
  • "St. Lawrence River Road" is in the infobox, is this another name for the parkway?
  • "divided highway" is that "dual carriageway" where I come from? Is there a link for us non-experts?
  • "use by cars between" just cars, or vehicles in general?
  • "Thousands Islands" just the one thousand.
  • "a bicycle trail and" in the lead and "A recreational trail follows" in the article...
  • "Darlingside, Rockport, Narrows..." etc. I think it's permissible to relink this outside the lead.
  • "and a left-hand exit provides"" overlinked.
  • " depression relief" financial or emotional?
  • Is "The Ontario Department of Highways" the same as/forerunner to Ministry of Transportation of Ontario?
  • ""a two lane gravel " hyphenate two-lane here.
  • " proper two lane undivided' similar. Also, similar to above, is an "undivided" road the same as a "single carriageway" where I'm from?
  • "persuade the DHO to construct" what's DHO?
  • "September 1, 1967 from" comma after year.
  • "0.62" probably good enough to go to 0.6 to keep decimal places consistent in this case.
  • "17 - Schedule" en-dash.
  • Is TVO TVOntario?
  • "Park - Getting " en-dash.
  • Several of these spaced hyphens in the ref titles.
  • Ref 27, use MOS:ELLIPSIS in the title.
  • Note [a] is not referenced.
  • "Thousand Islands Parkway - Length and Route" en-dash.

That's all I have here, it's on hold. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 12:44, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

So The St. Lawrence River Road was the historic name. I've added it into the lead and created a redirect for it as well as Highway 2S. For ref 27, the ellipses are as they are in the title, which seems correct based on MOS:ELLIPSES. See [1]. All other issues have been addressed (diff). - Floydian τ ¢ 15:25, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
So you have "10 Days... or Aug. 15... or... Well, 2-Lane Stretch on 401 Open Soon" and my reading of MOS:ELLIPSIS should make it "10 Days ... or Aug. 15 ... or ... Well, 2-Lane Stretch on 401 Open Soon", i.e. non-breaking spaces before each of the ellipses. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:59, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
The part that had me on the fence was whether that only applied to quotations. Somebody else's hill to die on though; change made. I've gone ahead and added alt text for the images as well FYI. - Floydian τ ¢ 18:33, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Okay, cool. The MOS should apply to all aspects of the article really. SO, I'm happy now and promoting. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 08:27, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]